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Passionate and compelling story, with a nice characterization of the main character, but also of the others, the grammar is also good, the only flaw is the extreme slowness of the story updates; otherwise very good in my opinion. Furthermore, the other people who reviewed were too narrow with the stars in the various parameters
Really a story that written by a child. Mc is stupid, makes decision based on his emotion or just because he feltlike it with no future hopes. Stupid Plot holes are littered all over the story. Everyone is stupid as Author is stupid. He ask to be reborn in Naruto world, knowing this world have Overpower character, no value of human life, betrayal and very bad history of Human Right violation. And that is a decison he made before he knew he will be given special powers. And after suffering from just a bit of it he complains like a Bitxh expecting something good to just come to him.
Это история полный д***** система тюрьмы главный герой д***** и тупой а тот кто эта история написал ещё тупие и бог ещё тупее Бух - это история мучил душу говорил силу и всё такой а ещё испытания какого хрена
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I quit on chapter 2 . why show a loser from the very beginning ? not a complete system , he couldn 't stand it ? yes , anyone in his place would spit on the pain of meaning without a complete system at all ? why did the author start this ? nonsense is shorter the score is 1 point
It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.
Pure Gold... i am saying that after reading 85 chapters ... Character have depth , Action is good , Comedy is perfectly balanced (situational , prankish , many running jokes{power of screaming}) , mc actually talks + hangs out with his friends even after becoming strong , shameless mc (one of his best traits) .. if only the author didn't drop it .. I don't wanna remove it from my library just in case. . if any of you know his other works tell me about them ok
Я много читаю фанфиков и если мне не нравится я просто ищу новый но это просто заставляет мою попу гореть адским пламенем зачем читать фанфик в котором гг просто человек без додзюцу , кучи кеккей генкаев или хотя бы гений как Итачи , но нет мы имеем обычного сиротку с бесполезной системой которая только квесты выдает и все , ты мог бы написать про гражданского чем писать такое
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MC es un coño, su forma de morir es una tontería, como también lo fue la muerte de su madre biología en el mundi de Naruto. El MC además es un inútil pude reencarnar en el mundo de Naruto el cual no es para nada pacífico dios mío ese mundo paso por 4 guerras mundiales, más las 'pequeñas' peleas... La cuestión es que decide este mundo y no entrena duro (un Sasuke estrena más que el) porque? Si quería ser un civil porque no se quedó en su mundo? Lo único bueno que tiene el mundo de Naruto siendo rudo y sincero solo son ser un ninja poderoso y los personajes atractivos
I like this book. good book. I need more characters so I'm ganna spam space bar i
It was a badly written and boring parody of Naruto Gamer stories. MC is an Iwa Ninja with probably lamest skillset I've seen in Naruto SI stories. He does stupid shit for plot reasons like sparing enemies so they can do shit in Canon timeline. He even spared Nagato even though he is to be Madara's lackey in Moon Eye Plan. The worst of all is the story works in Anime logic. The constant reference and usage of Talk no Jutsu , yelling making one become more powerful etc.
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the beginning is good but the story starts downgrading after I mean he'll just **** himself up more if he kills sasuke's dad and minato I mean they end up sealing kagura after.
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Definitely love it!!! One of the best Naruto fanfiction I've read!!! Pliz update!!! Can't wait for more chps!!! ...........................................
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Quite honestly one of the best and unique Naruto fanfictions out there. Every other fanfiction does the same thing by giving the MC a Sharingan and putting them i Konoha, while this MC is completely different. He's a Iwa ninja with no dojutsu and he isn't op by the age of 12.
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Being honest I recommend you that you give it a try. As you go you will find that it will become more interesting. Ignore those who have only read a few chapters. It's a good fanfic.
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Great job buddy great story and consistency keep the chapters rolling......................................... Damn these words limit Shit.............................
Really good continue !! So much fun to read, it's a real pleasure with each new chapter and I look foward to the next ones !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this book is like 1/1000 .!!! every fanfiction get's boring and repetitive but not this ONE till CHAP-77 its GREAT i can guarantee uh that ** THANK U AUTHOR for this great work
this fanfictin is really good mc is smart and decisive its not classic konohagakure village and he is doing almost what he wants, he did not become op like actually his abilities are not that op yea are, but his thinking IQ is his OP power at start mc will be annoying but by more chapters you are gonna be used to it and he will less being annoying
Passionate and compelling story, with a nice characterization of the main character, but also of the others, the grammar is also good, the only flaw is the extreme slowness of the story updates; otherwise very good in my opinion. Furthermore, the other people who reviewed were too narrow with the stars in the various parameters
Really a story that written by a child. Mc is stupid, makes decision based on his emotion or just because he feltlike it with no future hopes. Stupid Plot holes are littered all over the story. Everyone is stupid as Author is stupid. He ask to be reborn in Naruto world, knowing this world have Overpower character, no value of human life, betrayal and very bad history of Human Right violation. And that is a decison he made before he knew he will be given special powers. And after suffering from just a bit of it he complains like a Bitxh expecting something good to just come to him.
Это история полный д***** система тюрьмы главный герой д***** и тупой а тот кто эта история написал ещё тупие и бог ещё тупее Бух - это история мучил душу говорил силу и всё такой а ещё испытания какого хрена
Spoiler enthüllen I quit on chapter 2 . why show a loser from the very beginning ? not a complete system , he couldn 't stand it ? yes , anyone in his place would spit on the pain of meaning without a complete system at all ? why did the author start this ? nonsense is shorter the score is 1 point
It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.
Pure Gold... i am saying that after reading 85 chapters ... Character have depth , Action is good , Comedy is perfectly balanced (situational , prankish , many running jokes{power of screaming}) , mc actually talks + hangs out with his friends even after becoming strong , shameless mc (one of his best traits) .. if only the author didn't drop it .. I don't wanna remove it from my library just in case. . if any of you know his other works tell me about them ok
Я много читаю фанфиков и если мне не нравится я просто ищу новый но это просто заставляет мою попу гореть адским пламенем зачем читать фанфик в котором гг просто человек без додзюцу , кучи кеккей генкаев или хотя бы гений как Итачи , но нет мы имеем обычного сиротку с бесполезной системой которая только квесты выдает и все , ты мог бы написать про гражданского чем писать такое
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Don't drop this.............................................................................................................................
MC es un coño, su forma de morir es una tontería, como también lo fue la muerte de su madre biología en el mundi de Naruto. El MC además es un inútil pude reencarnar en el mundo de Naruto el cual no es para nada pacífico dios mío ese mundo paso por 4 guerras mundiales, más las 'pequeñas' peleas... La cuestión es que decide este mundo y no entrena duro (un Sasuke estrena más que el) porque? Si quería ser un civil porque no se quedó en su mundo? Lo único bueno que tiene el mundo de Naruto siendo rudo y sincero solo son ser un ninja poderoso y los personajes atractivos
I like this book. good book. I need more characters so I'm ganna spam space bar i
It was a badly written and boring parody of Naruto Gamer stories. MC is an Iwa Ninja with probably lamest skillset I've seen in Naruto SI stories. He does stupid shit for plot reasons like sparing enemies so they can do shit in Canon timeline. He even spared Nagato even though he is to be Madara's lackey in Moon Eye Plan. The worst of all is the story works in Anime logic. The constant reference and usage of Talk no Jutsu , yelling making one become more powerful etc.
Spoiler enthüllen the beginning is good but the story starts downgrading after I mean he'll just **** himself up more if he kills sasuke's dad and minato I mean they end up sealing kagura after.
Spoiler enthüllen Definitely love it!!! One of the best Naruto fanfiction I've read!!! Pliz update!!! Can't wait for more chps!!! ...........................................
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Quite honestly one of the best and unique Naruto fanfictions out there. Every other fanfiction does the same thing by giving the MC a Sharingan and putting them i Konoha, while this MC is completely different. He's a Iwa ninja with no dojutsu and he isn't op by the age of 12.
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Spoiler enthüllen Being honest I recommend you that you give it a try. As you go you will find that it will become more interesting. Ignore those who have only read a few chapters. It's a good fanfic.
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Great job buddy great story and consistency keep the chapters rolling......................................... Damn these words limit Shit.............................
Really good continue !! So much fun to read, it's a real pleasure with each new chapter and I look foward to the next ones !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this book is like 1/1000 .!!! every fanfiction get's boring and repetitive but not this ONE till CHAP-77 its GREAT i can guarantee uh that ** THANK U AUTHOR for this great work
this fanfictin is really good mc is smart and decisive its not classic konohagakure village and he is doing almost what he wants, he did not become op like actually his abilities are not that op yea are, but his thinking IQ is his OP power at start mc will be annoying but by more chapters you are gonna be used to it and he will less being annoying