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One of the best novels I have read so far, the author knows what hes doing and the writing is free of grammar mistakes. The novel moves steadily and uses techniques such as perspective changes to make this novel work. Its unique and is far from what I expected it to be
First time writing a review, but I feel that I have to. First off the Character design is very good, the characters in the story are definitely not single-minded and are written nicely. The world background is good as well, and the only reason why I'm rating it four in this area is because there are still some things that the novel hasn't mentioned, still waiting for more information about it but so far it's really good. The story development definitely has a lot of potential and the arc with Deither was very well written to a point where I got really attached to the character. The update stability deserves five stars too by the way. I definitely recommend this novel to those who are still hesitating, you won't regret it. Although there are a few cliche's, it will not bother you because it'll feel natural and it actually helps with the story building. Overall, it's really good, you're doing great author, waiting for more updates ♥️
simply amazing... I love this story.Although I can see many areas in which the author could have done good job I still enjoyed very much......Thank you author for creating this piece
The book was ok to read, but around chapter 249, the book started getting really confusing. it felt like the story was jumping all over the place, and it became really hard to follow. I don't know if the story gets better again later, but the plot wasn't interesting enough to motivate me to plod through.
The author needs to take some English writing courses. The formatting of the text is pretty awful, but this is nothing unusual with webnovels that lack professional editors. The disjointed and poor use of grammar is too hard for me to ignore and really drags me out of the moment every time. And I'm not just talking about a typo every now and then. Things like mixed use of tense or odd structure. The writer's narration and the thoughts and words of his characters are all identical, leading to the characters feeling as though they are just puppets without personality. The author frequently uses elipses (needlessly) during narration. Then a character will talk and end their sentence with an elipses rather than normal punctuation, which gives the naration and the character the same boring, monotonous feeling. Very bad. The poor use of line breaks is frustrating. When a character speaks, if there is more to the narration or description, do not add a period before the end quotation, use a comma. Your sentence isn't over just because the character stopped speaking if you follow it immediately with something. Example: "I don't know what I want to do," Bob said. Rather than: "I don't know what I want to do." Bob said. See how annoying that is to read? No need to start a new line. Write proper paragraphs. Your paragraph should contain more than two to three sentences. The world is the same stuff you find in every one of these types of stories. There are guilds, nobility based upon magic ability, academies, that sort of thing. Very dull if you've read a novel in the setting before. The one redeeming quality for this 'novel' is the idea of the main character being a mostly inanimate object, placing the main character into a more secondary role in the story. It's a neat gimmick. And was interesting for the first 40 or so chapters. The use of a video game system is just so uninspired. It was very cool the first ten times it was done. Then when the ten thousandth novel using a video game system turns up you just roll your eyes and wonder for the milionth time why a fantasy world has a system that spouts lines of computer-logic loading messages and such as if it's a computer, rather than some fantastical magic thing like some spirit and more difficult to quantify powers. The character design is okay-ish for this site (which isn't a high bar), but the characters themselves are so... Flat. They don't act or speak like real people. In fact they don't speak very much at all. A conversation in this 'novel' seems to largely consist of one character saying a sentence or two, then another character saying a sentence or two. They never have much depth to their discussions. The way they are written, you have to imagine this world being like a video game where things just stop happening while a character speaks, because nothing is described as happening when they do so. Story development is alright. Average I'd say. I can't comment on pacing, I don't know where the author will go with the story as updates continue. Another big tip for the author: Work on expressing your character's thoughts and feelings more. Imagine you have someone watching them, stood right there. What does that person see? What does your character observe? What do they think and feel about things that they don't vocalize?
Alrighty, this is a solid meh for me. The idea was pretty good, I've seen a few others that are similar but I think this one is better. However, it does have some problems. The main problem this novel has is how ridiculously slow it is. The story surrounding the first two wielders were okay, but once the main character found the third wielder it became super slow. I'm skimming the novel and I still find it excruciatingly slow. Ten or so chapters can go by and nothing really important will happen. Meaningless fights are several chapters long. Arguably the worst part is the POV changes. Theres so many problems with that. Other people's POV lasts so long. Furthermore, upon switching POV's, it will essentially just be repeating events that already happened from a different POV before continuing. Story development is meh. Story takes far too long for anything meaningful to happen. They foreshadow various things, but so far haven't capitalized on anything. As for the characters? Average at best. No matter how many skills the main character gets, it never really feels like hes improving. Side characters are meh. Theres nothing particularly interesting about any of them. The main character's students are average, if not 2d. Once again, I'd just like to point out how much exposition dumping and meaningless filler is included in this novel. Usually, most novels would stop exposition dumping at the start, but this novel never really does. It constantly re-explains stuff, to the point of it be repetitive. Overall, too slow to be enjoyable, especially considering this is a action novel. Fights are boring and almost all of them feel like filler. Everything else is average or below-average.
Probably the best novel I have ever read. I love it. WQ: 5/5, almost no grammar error and it flows well. SOU: Great, lots of chapters. SD: Wonderful, not to slow, not to fast, makes sense. CD: Amazing, love all characters. WB: Makes sense, not contradictory, interesting. 5/5 for all.
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
On chap 12, so far this book is WONDERFUL. I am loving it, and it is a 5 star so far! The system is great, different from what I imagined, and the way he uses it is interesting. You also quickly get attached to the MC and his holder, but be warned as the author states the holder will die. I am ok with this, as it will be interesting and we will get interested in a new holder.
the world building is done at a good pace with little info dumping so the reader isn't overwhelmed. the story is quite easy to follow but also gets more complicated over time which is good. the characters are very likeable with decent antagonists. my one complaint would be the god awful grammar
I really like the story and how it progresses but I am getting annoyed about how his holder is always winning because of kendo like it's the greatest sword style ever and it's annoying. the first holder fights people who have trained in the sword for way longer but because he knows kendo his stance's are mysterious and have this aura about them and I find it cheesy. This world has a very developed world of fighting yet their sword skills are inferior is just weird. Another thing off about this story is reiji is from a modern world were there is no special energy and he only know kendo. So he teaches his holder kendo and his holder winds up becoming very skilled in controlling his energy in a way that compliments his sword skill and it makes no sense and it bugs me. Im still reading but if things like this bug you just know I gave you a heads up.
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Fenale wielder, cliche dev... remind of aniother Sword isekai... a not go. the idea could have been good but the cliche girly weilder ruin it.
Simply the hero finds the cart with two beautiful girls (often they have a story and the hero will help them in the future and become lovers) the important thing is that they are attacked by some people, the "smart" hero quickly determines that the attackers are the bad ones because they are men, and the girls are innocent because they are beautiful, a novel in the way Chinese perverted, cartoon heroes characters like fairy tail world childish with simple summary
I'm ten chapters in and I already love it, the concept is interesting and unlike many novels the main caracter isn't instantly overpowered. I just hope the author continues to update the story and doesn't just abandon it.
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Many are interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
Novela muy recomendada pero solo si vas a pagar para leer los capítulos ya que lo que te espera es un inesperado stop al 75 y te cagara la noche/día/tarde
Great story and great detail which I wasn’t expecting too much of 10/10 Though I would like it if you could explain the kendo and other styles a bit more
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So I must have found it really good until chapter 75 because the rest are blocked ^^ But what really disappointed me somehow was that I was really looking forward to the order of knights action and it was suddenly called yes Dieterle we will see each other again sometime or not idk bro I don't really know how to deal with that now I feel like I've been ordered and not picked up and left standing in the rain and read on is not easy because I'm pretty broke I think I digress a little too much because in any case it is definitely worth reading for the first 75 chapters, but unfortunately I cannot speak for the rest because I am not that far myself at the current time
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The kid that pick up mc is so boring I wish he die. Whats the point of having a mature MC that can t do anything and follow the story of boring naive kid number 243.
I love it :D It's great!!! :D I love the growth and the main character!!!! I'll try to continue as much as possible. Please write more chapters
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There have been little character discrepencies, if any, and the world build is flowing like water. The most exciting aspect is the subtle feeling that everything will come back full circle. The lightheartedness makes a wonderful balance with the growing drama, and doesn’t overpower the story with the feeling of filler. This isn’t simply a story of Weak-to-Strong, but rather an epic of a teacher that makes you excited to see how his students have grown, and will grow in the future. Of course, it also makes for a wonderful daily read either to start the day, or end it☺️
Novel muito boa, único problema é a falta de capítulos KKKK. A historia se desenvolveu muito bem até agora (cap 160), esperando pelos próximos!
Love this concept of being reincarnated as an Object of all things, not sure about the stability of updates since I just started reading this not too long ago but it's pretty good if you're looking for something unique.
its not a groundbreaking novel like most but it does have its moments here and there. I managed to read through the whole thing without getting bored. its a good read.
So, from the 75 chapters I've read of this novel, Its a above average novel which is pretty good. Its pretty good in all aspects doing everything well, im too lazy to right a full on review, but I do recommend this novel as i think most would love it :)
Author here... Thank you for having some time to check this novel. The story is on synopsis. You can check it there or ask questions here. Anyway, I will do my best for you and for myself to have a quality read on this novel. Thank you!
One of the best novels I have read so far, the author knows what hes doing and the writing is free of grammar mistakes. The novel moves steadily and uses techniques such as perspective changes to make this novel work. Its unique and is far from what I expected it to be
First time writing a review, but I feel that I have to. First off the Character design is very good, the characters in the story are definitely not single-minded and are written nicely. The world background is good as well, and the only reason why I'm rating it four in this area is because there are still some things that the novel hasn't mentioned, still waiting for more information about it but so far it's really good. The story development definitely has a lot of potential and the arc with Deither was very well written to a point where I got really attached to the character. The update stability deserves five stars too by the way. I definitely recommend this novel to those who are still hesitating, you won't regret it. Although there are a few cliche's, it will not bother you because it'll feel natural and it actually helps with the story building. Overall, it's really good, you're doing great author, waiting for more updates ♥️
simply amazing... I love this story.Although I can see many areas in which the author could have done good job I still enjoyed very much......Thank you author for creating this piece
The book was ok to read, but around chapter 249, the book started getting really confusing. it felt like the story was jumping all over the place, and it became really hard to follow. I don't know if the story gets better again later, but the plot wasn't interesting enough to motivate me to plod through.
The author needs to take some English writing courses. The formatting of the text is pretty awful, but this is nothing unusual with webnovels that lack professional editors. The disjointed and poor use of grammar is too hard for me to ignore and really drags me out of the moment every time. And I'm not just talking about a typo every now and then. Things like mixed use of tense or odd structure. The writer's narration and the thoughts and words of his characters are all identical, leading to the characters feeling as though they are just puppets without personality. The author frequently uses elipses (needlessly) during narration. Then a character will talk and end their sentence with an elipses rather than normal punctuation, which gives the naration and the character the same boring, monotonous feeling. Very bad. The poor use of line breaks is frustrating. When a character speaks, if there is more to the narration or description, do not add a period before the end quotation, use a comma. Your sentence isn't over just because the character stopped speaking if you follow it immediately with something. Example: "I don't know what I want to do," Bob said. Rather than: "I don't know what I want to do." Bob said. See how annoying that is to read? No need to start a new line. Write proper paragraphs. Your paragraph should contain more than two to three sentences. The world is the same stuff you find in every one of these types of stories. There are guilds, nobility based upon magic ability, academies, that sort of thing. Very dull if you've read a novel in the setting before. The one redeeming quality for this 'novel' is the idea of the main character being a mostly inanimate object, placing the main character into a more secondary role in the story. It's a neat gimmick. And was interesting for the first 40 or so chapters. The use of a video game system is just so uninspired. It was very cool the first ten times it was done. Then when the ten thousandth novel using a video game system turns up you just roll your eyes and wonder for the milionth time why a fantasy world has a system that spouts lines of computer-logic loading messages and such as if it's a computer, rather than some fantastical magic thing like some spirit and more difficult to quantify powers. The character design is okay-ish for this site (which isn't a high bar), but the characters themselves are so... Flat. They don't act or speak like real people. In fact they don't speak very much at all. A conversation in this 'novel' seems to largely consist of one character saying a sentence or two, then another character saying a sentence or two. They never have much depth to their discussions. The way they are written, you have to imagine this world being like a video game where things just stop happening while a character speaks, because nothing is described as happening when they do so. Story development is alright. Average I'd say. I can't comment on pacing, I don't know where the author will go with the story as updates continue. Another big tip for the author: Work on expressing your character's thoughts and feelings more. Imagine you have someone watching them, stood right there. What does that person see? What does your character observe? What do they think and feel about things that they don't vocalize?
Alrighty, this is a solid meh for me. The idea was pretty good, I've seen a few others that are similar but I think this one is better. However, it does have some problems. The main problem this novel has is how ridiculously slow it is. The story surrounding the first two wielders were okay, but once the main character found the third wielder it became super slow. I'm skimming the novel and I still find it excruciatingly slow. Ten or so chapters can go by and nothing really important will happen. Meaningless fights are several chapters long. Arguably the worst part is the POV changes. Theres so many problems with that. Other people's POV lasts so long. Furthermore, upon switching POV's, it will essentially just be repeating events that already happened from a different POV before continuing. Story development is meh. Story takes far too long for anything meaningful to happen. They foreshadow various things, but so far haven't capitalized on anything. As for the characters? Average at best. No matter how many skills the main character gets, it never really feels like hes improving. Side characters are meh. Theres nothing particularly interesting about any of them. The main character's students are average, if not 2d. Once again, I'd just like to point out how much exposition dumping and meaningless filler is included in this novel. Usually, most novels would stop exposition dumping at the start, but this novel never really does. It constantly re-explains stuff, to the point of it be repetitive. Overall, too slow to be enjoyable, especially considering this is a action novel. Fights are boring and almost all of them feel like filler. Everything else is average or below-average.
Probably the best novel I have ever read. I love it. WQ: 5/5, almost no grammar error and it flows well. SOU: Great, lots of chapters. SD: Wonderful, not to slow, not to fast, makes sense. CD: Amazing, love all characters. WB: Makes sense, not contradictory, interesting. 5/5 for all.
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
On chap 12, so far this book is WONDERFUL. I am loving it, and it is a 5 star so far! The system is great, different from what I imagined, and the way he uses it is interesting. You also quickly get attached to the MC and his holder, but be warned as the author states the holder will die. I am ok with this, as it will be interesting and we will get interested in a new holder.
the world building is done at a good pace with little info dumping so the reader isn't overwhelmed. the story is quite easy to follow but also gets more complicated over time which is good. the characters are very likeable with decent antagonists. my one complaint would be the god awful grammar
I really like the story and how it progresses but I am getting annoyed about how his holder is always winning because of kendo like it's the greatest sword style ever and it's annoying. the first holder fights people who have trained in the sword for way longer but because he knows kendo his stance's are mysterious and have this aura about them and I find it cheesy. This world has a very developed world of fighting yet their sword skills are inferior is just weird. Another thing off about this story is reiji is from a modern world were there is no special energy and he only know kendo. So he teaches his holder kendo and his holder winds up becoming very skilled in controlling his energy in a way that compliments his sword skill and it makes no sense and it bugs me. Im still reading but if things like this bug you just know I gave you a heads up.
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Spoiler enthüllen Fenale wielder, cliche dev... remind of aniother Sword isekai... a not go. the idea could have been good but the cliche girly weilder ruin it.
Simply the hero finds the cart with two beautiful girls (often they have a story and the hero will help them in the future and become lovers) the important thing is that they are attacked by some people, the "smart" hero quickly determines that the attackers are the bad ones because they are men, and the girls are innocent because they are beautiful, a novel in the way Chinese perverted, cartoon heroes characters like fairy tail world childish with simple summary
I'm ten chapters in and I already love it, the concept is interesting and unlike many novels the main caracter isn't instantly overpowered. I just hope the author continues to update the story and doesn't just abandon it.
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Many are interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
Novela muy recomendada pero solo si vas a pagar para leer los capítulos ya que lo que te espera es un inesperado stop al 75 y te cagara la noche/día/tarde
Great story and great detail which I wasn’t expecting too much of 10/10 Though I would like it if you could explain the kendo and other styles a bit more
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So I must have found it really good until chapter 75 because the rest are blocked ^^ But what really disappointed me somehow was that I was really looking forward to the order of knights action and it was suddenly called yes Dieterle we will see each other again sometime or not idk bro I don't really know how to deal with that now I feel like I've been ordered and not picked up and left standing in the rain and read on is not easy because I'm pretty broke I think I digress a little too much because in any case it is definitely worth reading for the first 75 chapters, but unfortunately I cannot speak for the rest because I am not that far myself at the current time
Spoiler enthüllen The kid that pick up mc is so boring I wish he die. Whats the point of having a mature MC that can t do anything and follow the story of boring naive kid number 243.
I love it :D It's great!!! :D I love the growth and the main character!!!! I'll try to continue as much as possible. Please write more chapters
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There have been little character discrepencies, if any, and the world build is flowing like water. The most exciting aspect is the subtle feeling that everything will come back full circle. The lightheartedness makes a wonderful balance with the growing drama, and doesn’t overpower the story with the feeling of filler. This isn’t simply a story of Weak-to-Strong, but rather an epic of a teacher that makes you excited to see how his students have grown, and will grow in the future. Of course, it also makes for a wonderful daily read either to start the day, or end it☺️
Novel muito boa, único problema é a falta de capítulos KKKK. A historia se desenvolveu muito bem até agora (cap 160), esperando pelos próximos!
Love this concept of being reincarnated as an Object of all things, not sure about the stability of updates since I just started reading this not too long ago but it's pretty good if you're looking for something unique.
its not a groundbreaking novel like most but it does have its moments here and there. I managed to read through the whole thing without getting bored. its a good read.
So, from the 75 chapters I've read of this novel, Its a above average novel which is pretty good. Its pretty good in all aspects doing everything well, im too lazy to right a full on review, but I do recommend this novel as i think most would love it :)
Author here... Thank you for having some time to check this novel. The story is on synopsis. You can check it there or ask questions here. Anyway, I will do my best for you and for myself to have a quality read on this novel. Thank you!