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Ok so i dont normally write reviews but this novel is great. My knowledge of storytelling is fueled exclusively by watching way too many story analysis video essays on youtube and an addiction to trying to understand the story makeup of the way too many novels i read, so take everything i say with a grain of salt. Im going to try to format my review by explaining why i chose the star rating for each category. Im writing this after finishing chapter 54 shuffle (part 4) i stopped here cause i ran out of fast passes lol. Writing Quality: The writing is great from what i can tell, i almost never see grammatical mistakes or misspellings. The dialogue flows pretty smoothly and i can easily visualize their conversations and actions. Story Development: Its very easy to tell that this novel is very focused on character development. I feel very conflicted on the character development aspect because, at first when writing this review i thought that most of the character development was shown through them talking or kuro's thoughts, but then i realized that it was shown a lot through actions as well. Although the words and thoughts stand out a lot more because, they are said directly to your face without you having to think about the implications. If you keep it like it is with the obvious development then i think it is more accessable for people who want turn their brain off or dont want to think too hard about the story. If you go with trying to make the story something you have to think about in order to understand how the characters developed then i think you would lose a lot of people since the isekai audience tends not to want to think to hard. Also that whole getting cut off thing before the big words was getting kind of annoying though it felt good when it actually happened after such an event. The story was fast paced with a lot of the character development seeming kind of rushed and unrealistic. Character Design: ill be honest im not entirely sure what this star category is supposed to mean but ill go off of my guesses. The characters are very unique. All the ones that actually got fleshed out are interesting and are fun to watch bounce off each other, even if i sometimes wished that instead of them bouncing of a particular character, they body slammed them into the wall, breaking their spine and then leaving them for the dead. Your ability to make me hate a character is truly inspiring. Updating Stability: I binged it in a day or two so i cant really comment on this World Background: I really liked the world this takes place in, even if the names of each country sounds like kuro tried to name it lol. im done, very tired, this took about an hour to write, my head hurts. im going to bed now.
Shameless review by the author here. I initially started writing this book out of boredom when the pandemic first started, since I had so much free time. In that time, I wrote without planning anything out, just making it up as I went along, and as a result, the first 20 or so chapters can come off as kinda amateurish. However, I'd like to think that after that, the story and writing improve a lot, as I started thoroughly planning the story arcs and long term plot around the start of the third volume, somewhere around chapter 25-30. The feedback I've received seems to back that up, my early chapters get some rather mixed reactions, while my later chapters get mostly positive reactions. I encourage and appreciate all feedback and criticism, so feel free to speak your mind if and when you comment or review this book. Through past criticism and suggestions from comments, I'd like to think that I've used those experiences to improve my writing and the story. If you're someone who's been reading this book already, I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy this story, and if you're just starting this book or are considering starting it, I encourage you do so and hope you enjoy it.
Accordingly to the writers description, the mc attitude is unique like not being cautious and avoiding attention like other mc which i find intriguing
I know this is very illogical but I dislike-no HATE this Impostor thing. Especially when I've seen this clone STILL ALIVE WHEN HE"S SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD. I don't care for the reason why this clone thing exist or "This is just consequences of his actions" BS, you can make him go through THOUSANDS of punishments back-to-back or even make him not exist to anyone but that not-God BUT, doing the replacing his Identity with a ****ing clone is just crossing the line. I know this is practically just a personal bias and you're not entitled to follow my rant but I can't help doing this when I ACTUALLY LIKED THIS STORY.
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If i ever give a 5 star rating. It is because i cant describe it in anyway what so ever. So this here is my, murdering a poor innocent tree. All because there are no gifs i can find where someone is hitting a bush with a bat. The things i do for 5 star reviews am i right?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
from the first chapter, you can tell reading this will be torture, mc is an annoying beta plus a creep
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Spoilers I will start by saying great writing and the author really knows how to intrigue and hook readers. I enjoyed the book immensly up to the imposter arc. This is not saying the writing got worse or even less enjoyable, but that the main character seem to have gotten lost and replaced. I feel like the author wanted less action more social intrigue, but the main character was pretty flushed out and solid and instead of Having him and change as a person he focuses more on other characters which personally I felt hurt the overall story as a whole. I mean I would have preffered if Kuro unintenionally fell in love with Fuo during the imposter arc and you got rid of most of the Shiro content and wind sage content with Kuro exploring a group relationship dynamic that allowed him and Persia to grow while bringing fuo in.
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This novel is finally at 420 chapters. 😆…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..heh, nice 👍
when it has the tag dark fantasy and comedy, you know its bad. im sure this deserves more but, for people like me who read the tags, this is pretty messed up
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Great story. Writing quality is good, although i usualy don't like first person view 'I' writing, I have to say that it reads good in the story, and there arent any serious grammatical mistakes. As for wold background and charcter design, i think they are the best part of the story. especially the world background, whether its the decribed world map, political situation (though they feel a bit simplified) and magic and power foundations of the world.
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
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Not a bad story to read. But only if you are able to stomach the childish humour and the way the MC seems to be talking directly to the reader. The MC is supposed to have been a world class assassin but after starting his new life he still acts like a little schoolboy.
Not much to say other than incredibly childish. Seriously, why create a background for our MC when you have no ability to write it properly? MCs behaviour matches a normal high school student when his background has no experience with schooling. It's bad character design.
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
story has a lot of potential but the writer uses a lot of adlibs while also narrating from the MCs perspective during conversations with side characters without ever clarifying who is speaking. this makes it very difficult to read and follow along.
Eu to dando 5 estrelas mas eu acredito qseja mais 4.6 estrelas.Enfim uns dos pontos mais fortes com certeza são os personagens, eu acho so tirando o Shiro todos os personagens são memoraveis.Eu gostaria de dar uma review mais detalhada mais eu não estou afim de escrever tanta coisa em ingles e eu sei que o autor vai ter que traduzir tudo isso no tradutor ou talvez nem isso.Enfim continue com o bom trabalho autor porque voce tem fã ate no Brasil
Again just giving 5 stars and power stones good luck and please continue writting more chapters for this and your other novel cause they just make my day
This is amazing, author has no fear by killing good and important characters, i still cant beleive that he killed dino guy just after he gained his power up he basically didint even used
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I will call this novel a classic. You will find a tsundere, a hyperactive blond, a lazy genius, and an aggressive redhead with what I like to call, a 'new to feelings' MC. Some might find this novel cringe but for me, it's a good way to pass some time. Other than that, the naming sense of the author is simple and good with a vibrant world. Good job writing this story author.
Not gonna lie this was a pleaseant surprise, i mean i never expected to find a hidden gem so underdevalued like this one.I don't know how this not higher in rank in this app
I have to say this the best novel that i read that has more than 4 word in the title.This definitely on my top 10 best novel that i ever read(i've trying over 1000 novels) and would probably be on my top 5 if he did not got that overpowed so fast wich is just a litle niptick but overall i'm having a ton of fun
In short 5/5 I can't say much more without ranting, but since I have to write... Summary I really enjoy reading this story, so I gave it a well deserved 5/5 overall although you might think differently, namely because I found myself really far too high on this story. Characters 5/5 The main character to me is perfect, perhaps because I found a freakishly amount of similarities between myself and the main character, though I haven't been an assassin or tortured our lifestyles were pretty similar. Note that other characters may not be as developed. To describe I'd say the main character would be a plain shape with lots of edges and sides while others are simple shapes given colour by the development of the story. Right now the author made a pretty big event happen if it drags Story Development 5/5 It cant be said to be completely perfect, but close enough. While reading it felt like nice smooth well thought out transitions. However looking at a whole I get the feel that it was written with some urgency of some sort, I'm not complaining however its like running and adrenaline. You burn out. Right now I have to say as a reader relaxing would be nice for a little while, before urgent matters arise once more. That's it for my review world and story development goes should go hand in hand and stability of updates isn't worth complaining about. Quality over quantity any day of the week for me. Far too many annoying stuff that drags the same concept for chapters. To author, I researched a bit and found that the mc anima immortal jellyfish can actually revert back to its beginning stage of life will the mc get something similar, or does he have it? Oh and I know cats have short lifespans will cat girl die of age quickly? Will they start a new again? Is it possible to gain parts of your anima to grow ( become more like the animal) like the mc hair becomes tentacle shaped. Also the immortal jellyfish is small so is that the reason why the mc is average height or just because, not that it matters. Sorry for long review, I could've made it more concise but writing and checking are really tiresome. Good luck with that btw.
Ok so i dont normally write reviews but this novel is great. My knowledge of storytelling is fueled exclusively by watching way too many story analysis video essays on youtube and an addiction to trying to understand the story makeup of the way too many novels i read, so take everything i say with a grain of salt. Im going to try to format my review by explaining why i chose the star rating for each category. Im writing this after finishing chapter 54 shuffle (part 4) i stopped here cause i ran out of fast passes lol. Writing Quality: The writing is great from what i can tell, i almost never see grammatical mistakes or misspellings. The dialogue flows pretty smoothly and i can easily visualize their conversations and actions. Story Development: Its very easy to tell that this novel is very focused on character development. I feel very conflicted on the character development aspect because, at first when writing this review i thought that most of the character development was shown through them talking or kuro's thoughts, but then i realized that it was shown a lot through actions as well. Although the words and thoughts stand out a lot more because, they are said directly to your face without you having to think about the implications. If you keep it like it is with the obvious development then i think it is more accessable for people who want turn their brain off or dont want to think too hard about the story. If you go with trying to make the story something you have to think about in order to understand how the characters developed then i think you would lose a lot of people since the isekai audience tends not to want to think to hard. Also that whole getting cut off thing before the big words was getting kind of annoying though it felt good when it actually happened after such an event. The story was fast paced with a lot of the character development seeming kind of rushed and unrealistic. Character Design: ill be honest im not entirely sure what this star category is supposed to mean but ill go off of my guesses. The characters are very unique. All the ones that actually got fleshed out are interesting and are fun to watch bounce off each other, even if i sometimes wished that instead of them bouncing of a particular character, they body slammed them into the wall, breaking their spine and then leaving them for the dead. Your ability to make me hate a character is truly inspiring. Updating Stability: I binged it in a day or two so i cant really comment on this World Background: I really liked the world this takes place in, even if the names of each country sounds like kuro tried to name it lol. im done, very tired, this took about an hour to write, my head hurts. im going to bed now.
Shameless review by the author here. I initially started writing this book out of boredom when the pandemic first started, since I had so much free time. In that time, I wrote without planning anything out, just making it up as I went along, and as a result, the first 20 or so chapters can come off as kinda amateurish. However, I'd like to think that after that, the story and writing improve a lot, as I started thoroughly planning the story arcs and long term plot around the start of the third volume, somewhere around chapter 25-30. The feedback I've received seems to back that up, my early chapters get some rather mixed reactions, while my later chapters get mostly positive reactions. I encourage and appreciate all feedback and criticism, so feel free to speak your mind if and when you comment or review this book. Through past criticism and suggestions from comments, I'd like to think that I've used those experiences to improve my writing and the story. If you're someone who's been reading this book already, I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy this story, and if you're just starting this book or are considering starting it, I encourage you do so and hope you enjoy it.
Accordingly to the writers description, the mc attitude is unique like not being cautious and avoiding attention like other mc which i find intriguing
I know this is very illogical but I dislike-no HATE this Impostor thing. Especially when I've seen this clone STILL ALIVE WHEN HE"S SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD. I don't care for the reason why this clone thing exist or "This is just consequences of his actions" BS, you can make him go through THOUSANDS of punishments back-to-back or even make him not exist to anyone but that not-God BUT, doing the replacing his Identity with a ****ing clone is just crossing the line. I know this is practically just a personal bias and you're not entitled to follow my rant but I can't help doing this when I ACTUALLY LIKED THIS STORY.
Spoiler enthüllen If i ever give a 5 star rating. It is because i cant describe it in anyway what so ever. So this here is my, murdering a poor innocent tree. All because there are no gifs i can find where someone is hitting a bush with a bat. The things i do for 5 star reviews am i right?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
from the first chapter, you can tell reading this will be torture, mc is an annoying beta plus a creep
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Spoilers I will start by saying great writing and the author really knows how to intrigue and hook readers. I enjoyed the book immensly up to the imposter arc. This is not saying the writing got worse or even less enjoyable, but that the main character seem to have gotten lost and replaced. I feel like the author wanted less action more social intrigue, but the main character was pretty flushed out and solid and instead of Having him and change as a person he focuses more on other characters which personally I felt hurt the overall story as a whole. I mean I would have preffered if Kuro unintenionally fell in love with Fuo during the imposter arc and you got rid of most of the Shiro content and wind sage content with Kuro exploring a group relationship dynamic that allowed him and Persia to grow while bringing fuo in.
Spoiler enthüllen This novel is finally at 420 chapters. 😆…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..heh, nice 👍
when it has the tag dark fantasy and comedy, you know its bad. im sure this deserves more but, for people like me who read the tags, this is pretty messed up
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Great story. Writing quality is good, although i usualy don't like first person view 'I' writing, I have to say that it reads good in the story, and there arent any serious grammatical mistakes. As for wold background and charcter design, i think they are the best part of the story. especially the world background, whether its the decribed world map, political situation (though they feel a bit simplified) and magic and power foundations of the world.
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
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Not a bad story to read. But only if you are able to stomach the childish humour and the way the MC seems to be talking directly to the reader. The MC is supposed to have been a world class assassin but after starting his new life he still acts like a little schoolboy.
Not much to say other than incredibly childish. Seriously, why create a background for our MC when you have no ability to write it properly? MCs behaviour matches a normal high school student when his background has no experience with schooling. It's bad character design.
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
story has a lot of potential but the writer uses a lot of adlibs while also narrating from the MCs perspective during conversations with side characters without ever clarifying who is speaking. this makes it very difficult to read and follow along.
Eu to dando 5 estrelas mas eu acredito qseja mais 4.6 estrelas.Enfim uns dos pontos mais fortes com certeza são os personagens, eu acho so tirando o Shiro todos os personagens são memoraveis.Eu gostaria de dar uma review mais detalhada mais eu não estou afim de escrever tanta coisa em ingles e eu sei que o autor vai ter que traduzir tudo isso no tradutor ou talvez nem isso.Enfim continue com o bom trabalho autor porque voce tem fã ate no Brasil
Again just giving 5 stars and power stones good luck and please continue writting more chapters for this and your other novel cause they just make my day
This is amazing, author has no fear by killing good and important characters, i still cant beleive that he killed dino guy just after he gained his power up he basically didint even used
Spoiler enthüllen I will call this novel a classic. You will find a tsundere, a hyperactive blond, a lazy genius, and an aggressive redhead with what I like to call, a 'new to feelings' MC. Some might find this novel cringe but for me, it's a good way to pass some time. Other than that, the naming sense of the author is simple and good with a vibrant world. Good job writing this story author.
Not gonna lie this was a pleaseant surprise, i mean i never expected to find a hidden gem so underdevalued like this one.I don't know how this not higher in rank in this app
I have to say this the best novel that i read that has more than 4 word in the title.This definitely on my top 10 best novel that i ever read(i've trying over 1000 novels) and would probably be on my top 5 if he did not got that overpowed so fast wich is just a litle niptick but overall i'm having a ton of fun
In short 5/5 I can't say much more without ranting, but since I have to write... Summary I really enjoy reading this story, so I gave it a well deserved 5/5 overall although you might think differently, namely because I found myself really far too high on this story. Characters 5/5 The main character to me is perfect, perhaps because I found a freakishly amount of similarities between myself and the main character, though I haven't been an assassin or tortured our lifestyles were pretty similar. Note that other characters may not be as developed. To describe I'd say the main character would be a plain shape with lots of edges and sides while others are simple shapes given colour by the development of the story. Right now the author made a pretty big event happen if it drags Story Development 5/5 It cant be said to be completely perfect, but close enough. While reading it felt like nice smooth well thought out transitions. However looking at a whole I get the feel that it was written with some urgency of some sort, I'm not complaining however its like running and adrenaline. You burn out. Right now I have to say as a reader relaxing would be nice for a little while, before urgent matters arise once more. That's it for my review world and story development goes should go hand in hand and stability of updates isn't worth complaining about. Quality over quantity any day of the week for me. Far too many annoying stuff that drags the same concept for chapters. To author, I researched a bit and found that the mc anima immortal jellyfish can actually revert back to its beginning stage of life will the mc get something similar, or does he have it? Oh and I know cats have short lifespans will cat girl die of age quickly? Will they start a new again? Is it possible to gain parts of your anima to grow ( become more like the animal) like the mc hair becomes tentacle shaped. Also the immortal jellyfish is small so is that the reason why the mc is average height or just because, not that it matters. Sorry for long review, I could've made it more concise but writing and checking are really tiresome. Good luck with that btw.