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I enjoyed it, pretty good read. Although I skimmed through the some of the chapters about the skills he learned or leveled up. The ending was okay, I don't really care about the character who's jealousy is annoying me.
Good novel so far so good, my only issue is the fact that in early episodes the principal character and side ones are to two dimensional, later they begin to gain profundity.
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I love this book. I do feel like the chapters are a bit short but that's mainly due to the way the author keeps you updated on the level of skills and the like.
The first 50 chapter was great and very engaging. After that, it sucks. The story doesn't get any better. I feel like the MC and the reader are both grinding at the same time. It was so boring. I basically read his skill leveling up from 1 to 400 and I mean I read every single time he leveled up. it was so repetitive and boring. This is the first time for me to skip a whole chapters because of the same reason. I only have about 150 chapters left, but it's not getting any better.
This is one of my favorite reads. Im a bot sad that its complete now but the ending is 100% worth it. I also heard that the author made a second story so I might check that out next.
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phenomenal characters. MC is one of those that isn't too bright, but he's talented in his mana. it's pretty amazing overall. character building, growth, story development, world building is all phenomenal.
Honestly its good work just the MC is trash... made it to ch 642 before i couldnt bring myself to finish this due to the MC.....
good book but it could have been great, quite a bit of errors and missing words, but not enough to distract from the storie. kind of repetitive.
I couldn't finish this. It was just basically pages full of "learned this!" "learned that!" "skill leveled up!" I got pretty far in, too, but that eventually pushed me away because it was driving me mad.
incredible, I'm enjoying it too much, both this and the other that takes place in the same universe are very good !!!!! I highly recommend it to everyone
story was good. felt a bit annoyed by some of the MCs decisions but it's hard to put yourself in their position and make a decision, they are also different people so theres that. I liked the progression and the emphasis on detail of the progression system it gave the powering up alot more meaning because you went through the process of learning the spells as well.
Story is a mess. Forced japan arc, hundreds of repetetive training chapters. MC is way dumber than your average 14yo shonen protagonist. Time after time he wastes opportunities because of random suspicions and laughable morals, and it always ends in him/his friends suffering, but he will never learn, because his IQ is barely surpass single digits
It had a lot of potential, but it got sloppy at the end. The author uses his own vocabulary a lot, so many characters end up sounding the same tonally. For instance, every character at one point says something go the effect, “stupid amount o….” or “stupid hard/crazy”. The character developemnt stagnates and there’s a bunch of filler of him grinding skills that don’t do anything plot wise other than his word count.
I like this series a bit more then the second. . but I have to wonder.. .why are both characters stupid? I mean Leon his counterpart even openly admit it.. . I guess it is plot armor for when they do stupid things but still
A great story, awesome story telling, the background is really great, the characters are really great, writing quality is awesome and ı really enjoyed reading it.
I read this while it was being written on P@treon and this is one of the absolute best books that I have ever read. Be grateful that it is completed and you dont have to wait for chapters to be released everyday. 😆 The best aspect of this book is the immersive magic. It is incredible what the author created here, with every spell building on the next and amazing powers coming from a simple thought that allows the mc to make an unbelievable breakthrough in his spell creation. He will then take the fight to the massive list of baddies included in this book. Which brings me to the second best part of this story: the action. Not much to say on this other than the action is heart pounding and explosively immersive. There is so much to this book. Every aspect of the plot builds on itself. The mc has a very hard time except in one part, but the struggle makes the book. All while still being incredibly OP. The author created the personality of the mc and only made realistic improvements on his mental abilities. Even though mc makes decisions that maybe I felt that I wouldn't make, the mc definitely would given his mentality and personality. This book is a must read. Shout out to the author, thanks again for this gem, hope you are doing well man.
Very good would recommend. However i quit after 400 chapters because i felt it becoming boring
I absolutely loved this book. It kept reading into the early hours of the morning unable to put it down. This is definitely worth a read. While some points it gets kind of slow, when compared to the fact that it's fast paced, and leaps from peak to higher peak for the most part, it is more than worth it.
Gryffindorthe same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time I
This is not a review just asking if/when he is able to absorb mana from cores/his surroundings? But I think it's good most of the time, the only problem I have with it that it rarely feels slow but as I said RARELY I'm at ch.98 btw
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Best Novel I have ever read,In this depressing covid situation this novel gave me days of bliss and interesting plots worth it[img=recommend]
The story if when he was on the island was really good in my opinion but it started going down hill when he left the island but up Till he left the island the story was good
This novel has a unique first chapter that really sets the stage for what’s to come… the protagonist’s transpacific aircraft is destroyed by a dragon 🐉 and Leon plunges towards his death. It’s not a spoiler to reveal the main character survives the first chapter. What I like is that the author doesn’t employ the overused ‘transmogrification or resurrection’ weak plot tool to carry the story. ⚠️ Spoilers, this is a weak to strong theme that uses a ‘system’ to display and track the main character’s growth. Weak as this plot tool is, the author uses it with discretion so as not to present chapters of copy and paste data. Don’t stop reading because the first 30 chapters feel like a spoof on “Tom Hank’s movie Lost”, the author smartly references “Willis” to add to the tongue and cheek plot steal… I quite liked it so it gets 👍👍 The grammar and spelling is has few errors making for a comfortable and enjoyable read. This dystopian future for mankind is exciting to read and I think the magic system the author presents is interesting. I hope this novel interests you as it did me.
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I enjoyed it, pretty good read. Although I skimmed through the some of the chapters about the skills he learned or leveled up. The ending was okay, I don't really care about the character who's jealousy is annoying me.
Good novel so far so good, my only issue is the fact that in early episodes the principal character and side ones are to two dimensional, later they begin to gain profundity.
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I love this book. I do feel like the chapters are a bit short but that's mainly due to the way the author keeps you updated on the level of skills and the like.
The first 50 chapter was great and very engaging. After that, it sucks. The story doesn't get any better. I feel like the MC and the reader are both grinding at the same time. It was so boring. I basically read his skill leveling up from 1 to 400 and I mean I read every single time he leveled up. it was so repetitive and boring. This is the first time for me to skip a whole chapters because of the same reason. I only have about 150 chapters left, but it's not getting any better.
This is one of my favorite reads. Im a bot sad that its complete now but the ending is 100% worth it. I also heard that the author made a second story so I might check that out next.
Spoiler enthüllen phenomenal characters. MC is one of those that isn't too bright, but he's talented in his mana. it's pretty amazing overall. character building, growth, story development, world building is all phenomenal.
Honestly its good work just the MC is trash... made it to ch 642 before i couldnt bring myself to finish this due to the MC.....
good book but it could have been great, quite a bit of errors and missing words, but not enough to distract from the storie. kind of repetitive.
I couldn't finish this. It was just basically pages full of "learned this!" "learned that!" "skill leveled up!" I got pretty far in, too, but that eventually pushed me away because it was driving me mad.
incredible, I'm enjoying it too much, both this and the other that takes place in the same universe are very good !!!!! I highly recommend it to everyone
story was good. felt a bit annoyed by some of the MCs decisions but it's hard to put yourself in their position and make a decision, they are also different people so theres that. I liked the progression and the emphasis on detail of the progression system it gave the powering up alot more meaning because you went through the process of learning the spells as well.
Story is a mess. Forced japan arc, hundreds of repetetive training chapters. MC is way dumber than your average 14yo shonen protagonist. Time after time he wastes opportunities because of random suspicions and laughable morals, and it always ends in him/his friends suffering, but he will never learn, because his IQ is barely surpass single digits
It had a lot of potential, but it got sloppy at the end. The author uses his own vocabulary a lot, so many characters end up sounding the same tonally. For instance, every character at one point says something go the effect, “stupid amount o….” or “stupid hard/crazy”. The character developemnt stagnates and there’s a bunch of filler of him grinding skills that don’t do anything plot wise other than his word count.
I like this series a bit more then the second. . but I have to wonder.. .why are both characters stupid? I mean Leon his counterpart even openly admit it.. . I guess it is plot armor for when they do stupid things but still
A great story, awesome story telling, the background is really great, the characters are really great, writing quality is awesome and ı really enjoyed reading it.
I read this while it was being written on P@treon and this is one of the absolute best books that I have ever read. Be grateful that it is completed and you dont have to wait for chapters to be released everyday. 😆 The best aspect of this book is the immersive magic. It is incredible what the author created here, with every spell building on the next and amazing powers coming from a simple thought that allows the mc to make an unbelievable breakthrough in his spell creation. He will then take the fight to the massive list of baddies included in this book. Which brings me to the second best part of this story: the action. Not much to say on this other than the action is heart pounding and explosively immersive. There is so much to this book. Every aspect of the plot builds on itself. The mc has a very hard time except in one part, but the struggle makes the book. All while still being incredibly OP. The author created the personality of the mc and only made realistic improvements on his mental abilities. Even though mc makes decisions that maybe I felt that I wouldn't make, the mc definitely would given his mentality and personality. This book is a must read. Shout out to the author, thanks again for this gem, hope you are doing well man.
Very good would recommend. However i quit after 400 chapters because i felt it becoming boring
I absolutely loved this book. It kept reading into the early hours of the morning unable to put it down. This is definitely worth a read. While some points it gets kind of slow, when compared to the fact that it's fast paced, and leaps from peak to higher peak for the most part, it is more than worth it.
Gryffindorthe same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time I
This is not a review just asking if/when he is able to absorb mana from cores/his surroundings? But I think it's good most of the time, the only problem I have with it that it rarely feels slow but as I said RARELY I'm at ch.98 btw
Spoiler enthüllen exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Great read! Well done! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Best Novel I have ever read,In this depressing covid situation this novel gave me days of bliss and interesting plots worth it[img=recommend]
The story if when he was on the island was really good in my opinion but it started going down hill when he left the island but up Till he left the island the story was good
This novel has a unique first chapter that really sets the stage for what’s to come… the protagonist’s transpacific aircraft is destroyed by a dragon 🐉 and Leon plunges towards his death. It’s not a spoiler to reveal the main character survives the first chapter. What I like is that the author doesn’t employ the overused ‘transmogrification or resurrection’ weak plot tool to carry the story. ⚠️ Spoilers, this is a weak to strong theme that uses a ‘system’ to display and track the main character’s growth. Weak as this plot tool is, the author uses it with discretion so as not to present chapters of copy and paste data. Don’t stop reading because the first 30 chapters feel like a spoof on “Tom Hank’s movie Lost”, the author smartly references “Willis” to add to the tongue and cheek plot steal… I quite liked it so it gets 👍👍 The grammar and spelling is has few errors making for a comfortable and enjoyable read. This dystopian future for mankind is exciting to read and I think the magic system the author presents is interesting. I hope this novel interests you as it did me.