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To be completly honest, I had problems keeping up with the story: to many perspective changes, too much info dump and a lot of different caracters in different places. If you combine these with the fact that the text is so compact that it looks like you are reading a brick... Well, my brain got a little ovewhelmed we could say... Ps: I do not Intend to hate this fanfic, and I haven't read to much (just like 30 chapters) so I don't know if it gets better afterwords. So do not take these words as a discouragement for reading this book.
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Does Meliodas have his scared treasure Lostvayne with him? He needs it to create the clones. I haven't noticed it being mentioned. Anyway, great chapter.
I'm really enjoying this story. Although I've never really watched MHA and know almost nothing about it, I really love TSDS and love this little "modern" twist for them. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Its pretty good not gonna lie. But there's still somethings that irritates me, I don't know what it is.
I think this is a great story, but one thing you can do to get more people to read your story is have more tags, stuff like #sevendeadlysins Hope this helps you, again i love your novel and i think you should keep up your hard work author
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To be completly honest, I had problems keeping up with the story: to many perspective changes, too much info dump and a lot of different caracters in different places. If you combine these with the fact that the text is so compact that it looks like you are reading a brick... Well, my brain got a little ovewhelmed we could say... Ps: I do not Intend to hate this fanfic, and I haven't read to much (just like 30 chapters) so I don't know if it gets better afterwords. So do not take these words as a discouragement for reading this book.
I WANT MOREEEEE GoodgoodgoodogoodhoodgoodhoodohoodogofododofejhsicpwkrhejwosocoeptkgodosoeorkfjsnqlqppqwpriritiejfnxbsjsAnajpqpwprppfpdpsoerdbehrvtvrhejdocovjznzmzmzkzmzmswpwppro
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Does Meliodas have his scared treasure Lostvayne with him? He needs it to create the clones. I haven't noticed it being mentioned. Anyway, great chapter.
I'm really enjoying this story. Although I've never really watched MHA and know almost nothing about it, I really love TSDS and love this little "modern" twist for them. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Its pretty good not gonna lie. But there's still somethings that irritates me, I don't know what it is.
I think this is a great story, but one thing you can do to get more people to read your story is have more tags, stuff like #sevendeadlysins Hope this helps you, again i love your novel and i think you should keep up your hard work author
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