the primordial chaos dragon

LV 14

NewGoldie

Just boring and confusing, I know what the author is trying to do, combining popular anime but it failed to keep you interested and reading. My biggest issue is the Main character his dull, boring, unlikable character; and author wants him to be overpowered? nah I'm out. If want a good story then at least try to make the MC likeable to some degree.

LV 5

Just_ForFun

I didn't understand its so confusing that you loss interest in it. but hey who am I to say . thank you for writing this novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .

LV 1

Samuel_Cool

I like the way he didn’t give mc that easy life like how other do. Although he could improve its still not bad so keep going and don’t DROP!!

LV 14

I_am_inevitable

mc is a fucking retard and his learning is to slow and for christ sake u said that he remebers some of his past life memories to me he's just stupid cant read when mc acts like he knows nothing when he is a primordial fucking being.

LV 3

QTi

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LV 5

ahmed_waleed_1200

Hope you can continue to write more and don't drop this, thanks for your hard work, so keep up and write and update more, More chapters Don't drop Keep up

LV 13

Harley_DB

Good concept, can not understand it enough to even read it properly though🤷

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LV 15

Dao_of_infinity

the story feels a bit rushed. ........................................................................................................

LV 1

Wee_Woo_2859

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LV 1

Marfu_Marfu

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LV 4

amaturewriter

I agree with the other reviews but this dude just dropped decently written chps and has crossed a hundred ,,congrats...[content is kinda ****ty though], **: u care about this bk no?...why not take the review and re write?, keep the same old elements but take the reviews into consideration?, just saying ur **** would be interesting, I mean it is but its executed ****tily

LV 12

NineTailsOfTheVoid

sorry 2 chapter and drop it by the attitude of the mc ---------------------------------------------------------------------sorry 2 chapter and drop it by the attitude of the mc ---------------------------------------------------------------------