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Nothing to do with the review, but from your title: Viking Undead, you could maybe have gone with Draugr, an undead/zombie from Norse Mythology
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it's great and I love it and hopefully you keep some similar to the other versions of your story because it was fun reading 😇😇😇❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Welp since it appears there is a problem with the chapters disappearing it only leaves making a review since I technically caught up. This book is really great, was expecting another races for the mc but it's not too bad, the original characters are pretty well... original (badum tssss) the world back story is nice and you've kept it interesting thus far, I hope I can read the soon enough and thank you for this great book. 👍
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I really like this story and I think you doing a good job of writing it but I think after you finish this story you should make a re-write that much more detail.
The MC is ( to me) not cucked. I mean, seriously, if you were in the beginning situations would you rlly do what the comments said. Also, because it’s not in the tags, so far from what I’ve read, there is HAREM.
i always find some book with 3.7 stars and a lot of negative review and sometime they be lies, but goddanm i regret reading this one... writing quality 5 stars its well writing to me no grammatical errors so its good.. updates 4 stars not bad... story development and character design 1 star both, mc is just trash nothing good about him to me, nothing to relate to, to chapter 10 didn't make 1 good decision... and the story is just weird author trying to come out as someone who has seen it all,and trying to put it all on this book, even if this thing happen back in the days doesn't mean i want to read about them on webnovel i ll just check others website for that... world background thats a 3 this is a fanfic... not my cup of tea, but i can see that 1% enjoying this good luck to y'all. { and sure i just read to chapter 10 but i have seen enough to know its not getting better and even if it does the beginning is really off putting}
Everything started good, the mc became a leader of his own tribe, started a technological uplift, gave the people ways to farm and make war, and then suddenly the mc leaves his people because reasons , seriously I don't understand why. So much development for the tribe and suddenly it gets all dropped and I have to put high stars because this ****ty platform doesn't show low star reviews on the novel main page
Had me hooked the first few chapters but then the harem started..... I still don't see the appeal with harem in stories. Harem just ruin stories and it's disgusting.
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When i found this i think, wow finally some viking fanfic.4 But when i read it kinda disappointing that viking era just for early chap. But its not bad for now.
don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please
I just wanna ask if there are any harem and if there are then I don't wanna read it.. I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem
I first thought it focused on an interesting story, in fact, it had everything to be interesting, but after he became a vampire, everything changed, the protagonist had a plausible life, hitting and making mistakes, but after becoming a vampire, it seems that the author changed, the story that made sense just died. “Um ... i have a daughter, destroy her body without saying anything, send her to procreate. um ... this woman has a desire for revenge for her husband and son, um ... look, i'm the mc, the moment i make you love me, you'll never think about them again. Oops, I'm a vampire! what, do you accept this in 10 seconds? all well! I will transform you! ” what the ****, cut my cock.
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This novel is a MUST read for anyone not just Twilight fans. Its unique compared to other twilight fanfics and will entertain even casual fans. The MC and the choices that the author has made for this novel are truly fantastic. I look forward to seeing what will happen next!
Love this fan fic hope we get a lot more chapters love the way the story is going to and the mc powers is cool also this is the best out of a lot of twilight fic s I read so far thanks for the read
if you want a story about action and history, this is for you but if you want a MC that is not perfect but close, no this is not for you well firstly the MC like to NTR himself no mather how excuses the author give secondly the MC like his adopted daughter but he made her whore herself and again no mather how excuses the author give this what happened and thirdly he promise his adopted daughter to return in a few years after she whore heself to spit him a few babies with the same power as herself, but he never came until two thousand years after and again no mather how excuses the author give this what happened well this story is not for me but thanks anyway author
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Damn nice.pls do not drop and pls no harem. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Good story so far, like what you are doing with the village and hope you will try to build the "kingdom" more in depth. I would focus on how the people with the village will be able to improve i.e. training the children to be more logical and focused. I hope you keep uploading and you don't get annoyed on what I said.
This was honestly quite good, the ntr that people complain about isn't really disturbing since it was just a crush(they also didn't actually have a relationship) and it was common in those times. The grammar is good, updates at an acceptable rate imo, what really upsets me is how he treated his daughter. The dude straight up leaves her for thousands of years and his excuse is 'I forgot,' if you can get past that then it's a good novel.
Nothing to do with the review, but from your title: Viking Undead, you could maybe have gone with Draugr, an undead/zombie from Norse Mythology
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it's great and I love it and hopefully you keep some similar to the other versions of your story because it was fun reading 😇😇😇❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Welp since it appears there is a problem with the chapters disappearing it only leaves making a review since I technically caught up. This book is really great, was expecting another races for the mc but it's not too bad, the original characters are pretty well... original (badum tssss) the world back story is nice and you've kept it interesting thus far, I hope I can read the soon enough and thank you for this great book. 👍
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awesome...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like this story and I think you doing a good job of writing it but I think after you finish this story you should make a re-write that much more detail.
The MC is ( to me) not cucked. I mean, seriously, if you were in the beginning situations would you rlly do what the comments said. Also, because it’s not in the tags, so far from what I’ve read, there is HAREM.
i always find some book with 3.7 stars and a lot of negative review and sometime they be lies, but goddanm i regret reading this one... writing quality 5 stars its well writing to me no grammatical errors so its good.. updates 4 stars not bad... story development and character design 1 star both, mc is just trash nothing good about him to me, nothing to relate to, to chapter 10 didn't make 1 good decision... and the story is just weird author trying to come out as someone who has seen it all,and trying to put it all on this book, even if this thing happen back in the days doesn't mean i want to read about them on webnovel i ll just check others website for that... world background thats a 3 this is a fanfic... not my cup of tea, but i can see that 1% enjoying this good luck to y'all. { and sure i just read to chapter 10 but i have seen enough to know its not getting better and even if it does the beginning is really off putting}
Everything started good, the mc became a leader of his own tribe, started a technological uplift, gave the people ways to farm and make war, and then suddenly the mc leaves his people because reasons , seriously I don't understand why. So much development for the tribe and suddenly it gets all dropped and I have to put high stars because this ****ty platform doesn't show low star reviews on the novel main page
Had me hooked the first few chapters but then the harem started..... I still don't see the appeal with harem in stories. Harem just ruin stories and it's disgusting.
Please continue ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
When i found this i think, wow finally some viking fanfic.4 But when i read it kinda disappointing that viking era just for early chap. But its not bad for now.
don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please
I just wanna ask if there are any harem and if there are then I don't wanna read it.. I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem I hate harem
I first thought it focused on an interesting story, in fact, it had everything to be interesting, but after he became a vampire, everything changed, the protagonist had a plausible life, hitting and making mistakes, but after becoming a vampire, it seems that the author changed, the story that made sense just died. “Um ... i have a daughter, destroy her body without saying anything, send her to procreate. um ... this woman has a desire for revenge for her husband and son, um ... look, i'm the mc, the moment i make you love me, you'll never think about them again. Oops, I'm a vampire! what, do you accept this in 10 seconds? all well! I will transform you! ” what the ****, cut my cock.
Spoiler enthüllen This novel is a MUST read for anyone not just Twilight fans. Its unique compared to other twilight fanfics and will entertain even casual fans. The MC and the choices that the author has made for this novel are truly fantastic. I look forward to seeing what will happen next!
Love this fan fic hope we get a lot more chapters love the way the story is going to and the mc powers is cool also this is the best out of a lot of twilight fic s I read so far thanks for the read
if you want a story about action and history, this is for you but if you want a MC that is not perfect but close, no this is not for you well firstly the MC like to NTR himself no mather how excuses the author give secondly the MC like his adopted daughter but he made her whore herself and again no mather how excuses the author give this what happened and thirdly he promise his adopted daughter to return in a few years after she whore heself to spit him a few babies with the same power as herself, but he never came until two thousand years after and again no mather how excuses the author give this what happened well this story is not for me but thanks anyway author
Spoiler enthüllen Damn nice.pls do not drop and pls no harem. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Good story so far, like what you are doing with the village and hope you will try to build the "kingdom" more in depth. I would focus on how the people with the village will be able to improve i.e. training the children to be more logical and focused. I hope you keep uploading and you don't get annoyed on what I said.
This was honestly quite good, the ntr that people complain about isn't really disturbing since it was just a crush(they also didn't actually have a relationship) and it was common in those times. The grammar is good, updates at an acceptable rate imo, what really upsets me is how he treated his daughter. The dude straight up leaves her for thousands of years and his excuse is 'I forgot,' if you can get past that then it's a good novel.