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Kapitel 184: Ch.18

With the battle over and the threats eliminated, all that remained was the half of the nine tailed fox inside Naruto. The other half had been ripped out of his father once he'd been revived and with a kind hand I brought all that had died except black Zetsu and my meal back to life.

I told them coldly. "The tailed beasts have been extracted to be sure and all that remains is the nine tails in Naruto. I've assimilated the rest and turned the Gedo statue or divine tree as it originally was back into a seed while keeping the chakra of the ten tails for myself. This war is over and I am leaving. Be warned though. Kaguya was just one of an entire race of gods living in another dimension of this universe. In ten to twenty years they will return but I will not be here to stop them."

I turned to Naruto and smiled sadly. "Littl brother. It's all on you now. Here, it's all I can spare."

I helped him by injecting him with my pure blood I'd taken out after I'd gotten his from him. His eyes changed a bit as he full gained the sage of the six paths eyes and abilities. Sighing I waved a hand as hundreds of books fell. Each one had every jutsu I'd heard of or read in someone's mind in them and the currency I'd withdrawn from the Uchiha accounts were put in Naruto's as Tsunade had drained the Senju accounts with her debauchery.

Smiling sadly I told all the shinobi there. "You'll find everything I know on ninjutsu and all the arts and jutsus in those books. Each one is a full copy so each of you can have one. Prepare for your final fight with Kaguya's family because they will be coming."

I waved a hand and opened up the portal to the next reality as my father's voice entered my ears and told me he'd keep it stable. I went to enter and the kage's attacked wanting their tailed beast slaves back. I used an almighty push to shatter their bones as I flew through the portal.

I woke up from the shock of my next rebirth in the body of a fifteen year old. A kid with a straw hat asked me worriedly. "Ace, are you ok? Gramps didn't hit you that hard did he?"

I rubbed my head and frowned while gaining my bearings before shaking my head. "I don't want to be king of the pirates anymore Luffy."

The kid looked shocked and the old asshole that gave me a throbbing headache mimicked his look before slapping his knee in laughter. "Gwahaha it really did work! How does my fist of love taste kid? Are you ready to be a marine yet or do I need to give you a few more?"

I frowned and stood up shakily. "No thanks. Though if you want to help me survive this world you could always teach me a and Luffy the six powers instead of random beatings."

I dusted off my shorts and he seemed to think it over before slapping his fist to his hand and saying. "I've got it! I'll teach you the six powers then you'll see how cool marines really are and want to join!"

I fell on my ass and looked at him like he was an idiot. Luffy picked his nose saying. "No thanks gramps. Even if Ace doesn't want to be king of the pirates, I still do."

I smiled. "I'd also like two swords old man if you can spare them that is. I need to become strong to protect my little brother even if he wants to become the pirate king. I've decided that path isn't for me but it doesn't mean it's not for him and it's a dangerous path. Almost as dangerous as serving the world nobles especially since they're the ones that kill and enslave the regular people like they did Sabo and I'm sure many others."

Garp flinched badly and frowned before shaking his head and frowning again before sighing. "I'll bring the swords tomorrow. Now show me you're at least learning something!"

I stood up and waved Luffy off as he backed away. I squared off with the old man and in an instant I pushed this new body of mine to it's very limits as I dodged his next fist of love and struck him with a kick that left my body shaking from numbness.

He caught my foot but he miss-calculated as me fist connected with his face in a spin from the reverse momentum. He didn't move an inch but grinned under my fist saying. "Good, good. Hitting this old man now huh? Take my fist of love times ten!"

Dodged as he released me and did my best to avoid his punches. It went so far as me using my pipe like a sword and clashing with his fist when I couldn't dodge. It finally stopped when the last fist landed and we traded blows as I actually cut him with the pipe from my sword aura covering it.

He was as shocked as I was that it worked and that's when I collapsed from exhaustion and pain in my head. Luffy got off light this time as Garp was grumbling about genius this and that and becoming a marine swordsman.

The next day he dropped off two swords, both were skillful grade and named Kashu and Yubashiri. He'd ran to the best sword shop which was in Loguetown and bought Yubashiri while beating some pirate along the way and taking Kashu. He really was a caring grandpa and I even thanked him by going into the forest and catching us a big lion and gator meal.

It had taken all of my efforts as this body wasn't nearly as honed as I needed it to be and so for the next few months he made sure I practiced even though I was anyways even as I wore my special watch to weight train.

I meditated when I wasn't fighting, training or spending time with Luffy. Like this two years passed as I honed my body and skills. At first Luffy thought I was going to take off as well until I disagreed to both his and Garp's surprise. Garp had shown up the day after I was supposed to have left and offered me a small boat to use as I'd told him I'd try the bounty hunting gig until Luffy decided on our path as I told him I'd be his first mate one way or the other and promised to go out and make money for our crew before hand.

I took my sword skills on the road and as luck would have it, I ran into several hundred pirates all over the East blue, catching all of them and weeding out many more in hiding. From hundreds of berry's to millions, I hunted them all and even found several devil fruits along the way.

I'd taken to wearing my swords at all times and fighting every enemy I came across. I avoided the Conami islands as I wasn't about to skip ahead without Luffy. It just wouldn't be as fun. I did however run into Zoro a few times and damned if we hadn't come out even most of the time while I expanded my own skills.

As the two years were about up I headed back to Goa. I'd collected billions in bounties and even unlocked my conqueror's Haki by accident while trying to tame a baby island turtle to pull my boat. It had fainted and woke up with a rope on it and my smiling face as I told it to mush on.

I discovered the more I fed it pills and other magic and cultivation concoctions over the years, the bigger it grew. It was now able to hold my boat on it's back with great ease. I gave it mental directions and mediated while it swam to Goa at fierce speeds.

I think I may have turned it into a cultivator by accident as it meditated like me when I was off the boat and kept it's head in it's shell while doing so. I had kept at the basics of the six powers while mastering the sword aura I'd harnessed from this world and practicing my Haki whenever I could.

I'd even begun trying to manipulate my mind energy and forge it into an iron will so coat my body and blades while also expanding it outwards on occasions while I attempted to learn the other forms of Haki.

Even with an idea of what I was trying to do this shit was not easy. I'd barely tapped into observation Haki by the time I'd been forced to head back to Goa. I managed to arrive just as Luffy was boarding his small dingy. I had Kame pull the boat next to Luffy's and tied them together when I asked him as he boarded my boat. "Where to Captain?"

He grinned. "That way!"

I sent Kame a mental message and introduced him to Luffy as the ship's official pet. He kept asking to eat it until I karate chopped his head and told him I'd cook us a meal along the way. I took out a bag of meat and various foods before frying us up a decent meal before fighting him for my share.

We barely stayed ahead of the storm and ran into a pirate ship robbing people on a cruiser. I recognized the symbol as Alvida's as we boarded the ships to Luffy's adventure loving heart. I asked him as the other pirates noticed us. "Permission to engage captain?"

He shook his head. "Na, I got this. I'm gonna show you how strong I've become."

I chuckled and sat on the side of the boat. "Show away."

He did a whip action with his rubber legs and sent most of the pirates into the sea. Smiling I watched as he battled Alvida while a pink haired kid brought up food from the galley with a few others until they noticed the fat female captain losing the fight. Luffy sent her flying and the pink haired kid looked excited.

He nodded and I cut down the pirates left over and Colby, the pink haired kid asked. "Are you guys bounty hunters?"

I rolled my eyes while Luffy said. "No way, we're pirates. Shshsh."

Colby was stunned while I offered him. "We can drop you off at the next island before the crew of this ship wakes up and hangs you for trying to raid their ship even if it was a forced on your part."

Colby gulped and nodded while Luffy laughed and grabbed half the food thanks to me stopping him from taking the rest. I noticed Nami raiding the pirate ship and ignored us so I ignored her while jumping down to our small boats. We left in a hurry while I heard the Navi ships begin firing on Alvida's old ship. I smirked as I noticed Nami following us through the smoke.

Kame sped up as Luffy noticed Nami and we sped away making more distance between us I set our course to shell town. Along the way I offered Colby a devil fruit and showed him my collection. I had twenty. Most were zoan except the fire-fire fruit and the plastic-plastic fruit which were both logia types.

He left the zoan fruits there as he didn't want to be part animal but he ended up choosing the fire-fire fruit instead. Chuckling, I let him eat it and watched as he turned into a fire-human. I put him out before he could burn the boat and warned him not to practice on a ship.

We arrived at Shell town two days later and he went to sign up as a marine. I chuckled and followed Luffy into town when I heard about Zoro's execution. I told Luffy about Zoro being a strong swordsman and good guy as well as funny at times and he insisted we go save him.

That ended up being an interesting adventure as I broke into the base while Luffy talked to the three sword user. I took Zoro's swords and Luffy beat the Marine captain's son attracting their attention.

I growled when I heard the commotion and cut the base tower with projected air blades from my aura as it crumbled down destroying Captain Morgan's statue and pissing the marine captain off when I jumped down landing next to Luffy.

Luffy smiled and told Zoro. "Told you he'd come! Welcome to the crew."

I chuckled and cut the ropes holding Zoro to the post. I tossed him his swords. "Welcome to the crew second mate."

He looked me over before smirking. "So it really is you."

I nodded and Luffy took out the gunmen firing at us. When the swordsmen attacked, I unsheathes one blade and stopped all theirs smiling. "Hello, goodbye. One sword style: One hundred cuts!"

The sword users were cut all over by blade ki and blasted backwards while falling unconscious. Zoro looked at me with narrowed eyes and I just grinned. I grabbed Luffy when he went to fight Morgan. "Leave it to the newbie. Think of it as his initiation."

Luffy nodded with a smile and Zoro charged the axe handed marine Captain. In one attack Morgan was on the ground severely wounded and the marines that weren't passed out were celebrating. I shrugged it off and grabbed Luffy and Zoro before using Soru to take us back to town for a meal.

We ate and drank to our heart's content before leaving. The marines tried catching up to us but Luffy was adamant that we leave fore they did so. Soon enough we were on our way to the next island, orange town.

Every now and then I gave Kame a break and let the sails take us while his leisurely swam beside us until a group of Buggy pirates tried to hop aboard our boats. Then I let him have lunch. He aged them in screaming pieces as I liked to call it.

He was after all an island turtle with what I suspected was a bit of dragon blood in him. When he finished we continued on our way at a rapid pace and barely made it in time to save Nami from Buggy's goons. She called Luffy boss and left us to clean up the mess so I cut down the pirates quickly and Luffy wondered off to find her.

Zoro went to sleep while I headed to Buggy's ship and stole his gold in secret along with the map to the grand line and all his cannon balls before sinking his ship. I caught up to Luffy when I heard he was in a cage from a nearby goon headed to the ship.

I cut down the goon and found Luffy right where I heard he'd be. Seeing him in the cage, I focused and swung my blade, cutting it open. Zoro and I took care of the crew while Luffy fought Buggy the clown.

Nami fought off a few and kept refusing Luffy's offer to join us to be our navigator. She instead said she'd only partner up with us along the way until she achieves her goal. I didn't comment as Luffy finally sent red nose flying over the ocean. We left soon after when I commented on having sank the pirate ship and stolen their treasure which Luffy told me to give half of to the people.

I left it in a bag and told him I found a map of the grand line as well. He smiled when Nami demanded it along with trying to charge me for half of the treasure as well. I gave her the half she wanted and held a sword at her throat when she went to take the other half as well.

Frowning I told her. "It's captains orders that we leave half behind to help these people rebuild. Try to disobey again and you'll walk the plank as it were. You can have half which is more than the rest of us got out of it so don't be greedy. These people desperately need it and will probably starve if they don't get it."

Nami gulped and I showed my blade while Luffy waved me off and Zoro followed us back to the boats. My own was the size of Nani's with a small cabin inside it while we had Luffy's small dingy as well so it became the center boat while Kame pulled all three.

I made and fed him several foundation building pills and a few Qi and strength building pills. He got bigger over the next week in spurts that only became noticeable when he fully surfaced. I fed him several beast pills as well to even out the build up of Qi.

His head became larger as well but he was still too small to pull a full ship for now. We found a rare animal island with a man stuck in a treasure chest that I took the liberty to cut him out of and provide clothes fore. He'd been deformed into a box shaped midget and used his newfound mobility to better take care of the animals.

When we went to leave I took his island into my inner worlds and Luffy spoke up. "Cool! Are you a devil fruit user too?"

I shook my head. "No. That was just a skill I picked up to make it harder for others to find his island or in my case, my treasures."

Nami's eyes lit up. "Treasures? You have treasure?"

I nodded. "I do and no you can't have it. It's for buying us a ship and feeding Luffy and the crew which I suspect will just be feeding Luffy because of his abnormal appetite."

She sweat dropped and both she and Zoro understood well enough as they'd seen Luffy eat and fought to have their own share. I'd begun swimming and hunting sea kings and fish under water to feed us along the way as he was truly a monster eater.

I'd even taken to storing and killing several larger sea kings but I'd need to go to a Jurassic island or the calm belt to truly stock up. We arrived on Gecko island next and ended up meeting Usopp and his kid crew. I split up from the crew when we went into Syrup village and gave Zoro the money to eat with while I went to try and find a boat.

I found Kaya's house easy enough and offered Marry the staff cleaner to heal Kaya's illness in exchange for letting me buy the caravel ship he'd built. He agreed only if I could prove my words so I gave Kaya a nanite pill and a foundation pill to quickly strengthen her body.

She'd been suffering from the equivalent of african sleeping sickness and HIV. The nanites cured her easy enough and repaired her immune system while the foundation pill put her on Usopp's level of sturdiness.

I left the house with a smile while avoiding meeting Black Cat Captain Kuro of the thousand plans. After paying Merry for the ship I bought some lumber in town and reinforced it as best I could while changing the mast head to a Dragonturtle and adding bunks and more rooms to the ship as well as a captain's quarters and loaded up the ship with supplies to last half a year on the sea besides food and water.

I brought our smaller boats and dingy around before loading them up and strapping them to the sides of the ship for later uses. I fed Kame a dozen more foundation pills before feeding him a hundred beast pills. His growth size over the next couple days was massive though still just barely enough to pull the ship from the front while his strength took a major boost as well.

There was no question if he was strong enough now as he pulled the boat around to the opposite side of the island from where the Black cat pirates were fighting the crew. I left him there and headed to the battle to end it.

When Kuro showed up and Luffy was passed out, I kicked him awake and told him to go fight the captain while Zoro and I dealt with the crew. I moved quickly, cutting down all pirates in my way and taking the skinny cat pirate from Zoro.

The cat pirate called himself Sham but when I cut him down in one move I called him shame. Zoro finished off the fat cat before Kuro went on a rampage and killed all his downed crew. Luffy stopped him and I went ahead and helped Usopp save Kaya who was running from a hypnotist.

I took the hypnotist Jango's chakrams he was using as a way to hypnotize people after knocking him out. We arrived back with the others as Luffy's battle with Kuro came to a head.

Smiling I told Luffy the ship was ready to disembark whenever he was and he said we'd stay the night to party before heading out so I robbed all the pirates of their swords and took the gold on the ship before borrowing the town blacksmith's forge.

I had to make tools just to make the proper tolls to make the swords as it really was lacking in quality in this small village. I'd done a full overhaul of the forge and upgraded it all before melting down nearly a thousand blades I'd collected over the years and beat out the impurities as I folded steel and many other metals I'd come across including chakra ore into proper weapons.

By morning I had a total of twenty blades of the highest quality metals and materials from many realities. Grinning like a fool I had my own blades eat one set before taking two swords as my primary weapons for now to hide my real blades. I put my past two swords in my cabin on display and stored the rest for now.

I offered Zoro replacements whenever he needed them for his two lesser quality swords. For now he said he'd be fine. I turned all the extra metals and excess slag into high quality tools, weapons and parts for various things and left them in the blacksmith shop for the old man I'd kicked out to discover.

Even if it was low quality by my standards and basically useless to me, the materials were the best this world had ever seen. The next day we left town with Usopp in tow as he'd asked to be apart of the crew before Luffy agreed.

He tried to place himself as captain and I put a blade at his throat. "This isn't a game kids play. Mutiny is a serious crime aboard a pirates ship and earns a death sentence. Do not joke about it again and be prepared if you aren't joking to face the consequences of your words."

He gulped and nearly shaved himself on my sword. I glared at him one last time and Luffy put a hand on my shoulder so I put my sword away. Zoro himself was just as serious and ready to act if I hadn't.

Luffy told Usopp. "I'm the captain of this ship and if you want my place you'll have to fight me for it. Ace takes threats like mutiny and the like very seriously because he protects me from my own foolishness. I may not mind it as much but if you're going to be apart of this crew you need to understand that there's just some things you don't say unless you mean them."

Usopp nodded and apologized before cracking a few jokes to lighten the mood. I put my mean face away and relaxed openly while Luffy told Nami to set sail for the next island. Have way there we deviated course Luffy gave Usopp his official ship's sniper position when they fired on a rock formation along the way.

They then made a flag to fly with a straw hat skull and cross bones. While I made us lunch I told Luffy we needed a proper cook to look after our diets and keep us healthy on the seas as I really wasn't up to the task. I'd substitute cook if I had to but they weren't my wives so I didn't really want to feed them for the entire journey.

Two pirate hunters attacked us during our meal and Zoro went out with Luffy to take care of it. Soon enough we were playing house guest to two idiots. A marine ship attacked us and after sending the cannon ball back at them, I used shave to cut a hole in their ship as it nearly split in half.

The marines yelled and I chuckled while waving the by and we simply passed them by to the floating restaurant Baratie. I tied us off and followed Luffy and the rest inside for a decent meal. The restaurant was meant to be neutral ground as marines and pirates could eat here without fighting or risk pissing off the fighting chefs.

When we sat at our group table, I ordered for Luffy as he would simply keep asking what everything tasted like. Sanji, our waiter, seemed to only pay attention to Nami for the most part until I released a bit of killing intent. His instincts brought me to his attention while I continued to order coldly.

He acted far more mature and took the rest of my orders down before ignoring Usopp, Zoro and the bounty hunter duo in favor of Nami's presence until Zoro did the same as I had. He hadn't been able to keep it up much but it was enough to get Sanji to take his order. Usopp and the bounty hunting duo complained a bit and ate appetizers for their meal when Sanji returned.

Luffy seemed to take a shine to him so I let it go as the perverted cook seemed to be fated for this crew. While we ate, Gin, a member of Don Krieg's crew, came in and begged for food. When the marines tried to come in after him and apprehend him, he killed them with a bullet and the cooks asked if he had money.

He tried to threaten them but I spoke up. "Put it on my bill. He seems interesting enough and no one deserves to starve to death."

Gin tried to say he didn't need charity but I just shrugged it off saying. "It's not charity. I've experienced starvation before and I know the feeling well. Pay me back when you can however you can if your honor dictates it but don't starve over pride it's not worth it no matter how arrogant you are."

He cried a bit and Sanji seemed to appreciate me a bit from my words while he fed Gin at the table next to ours. I got up when we finished and paid the bill without question leaving extra for Gin to order whatever he liked from the menu.

Luffy asked as we left. "When did you starve?"

I sighed. "It was a long two years bounty hunting and seasons weren't always good to me. Zoro saved my ass a few times in exchange for duels."

Zoro nodded and grimaced at his own starving recently. Hell, we'd starved together once when we got stranded on a bounty we were both after in the early months of my departure.

Luffy spent the next few days trying to get Sanji to join our crew while I focused on having Zoro try to strike me with his sheathed sword so I could properly practice my observation Haki. I was definitely making progress now though the lumps on my head were saying otherwise for the most part.

Soon enough Don Krieg showed up with a sack full of gold and Gin helping him stand. He begged for food and Sanji was jeered at for obliging. Ole red shoes Zeff the head chef of Baratie gave him enough food for a hundred men and I took the sack of gold from Krieg who grimaced as I handed Zeff an equal amount in Berry's.

He took the money and I took the gold to our boat to Krieg's grimace as he asked. "You're Bloodsword Ace aren't you?"

I shrugged. "I went by that name when I was a bounty hunter yeah. I think I chased you into the grand line entrance a few months back right?"

He grimaced and I chuckled. "Don't sweat it. I'm no longer a bounty hunter. I joined my little brother's pirate crew as his first mate. Don't mess with my crew and I won't kill you."

I ended the conversation with a hard look before heading to the ship to store my new gold away. It was only fifty million berries but Nami was looking at it like a hyena finding a dead carcass. I left it on the boat in my quarters with a weak glamour on it that shed easily be able to find if she looked.

When Don Krieg left for a bit, I told Luffy that unless he wanted to risk the old man finding us he'd need to convince Sanji to leave with us today as we can't stay all year waiting on one possible crew member who hadn't even agreed yet.

He grimaced but agreed and the events went like I'd been watching the show all over again except this time Krieg told our crew to stay out of it until Hawkeye came hunting.

The large galleon was split in half in an instant as I tried to feel the aura of this world's greatest swordsman. Grinning like a fool I felt home out with my eyes closed and adjusted my own aura to sharpen and grow as it flickered against his like a wet stone.

I rapidly grew stronger in the way of the sword as my own aura reached new heights consecutively. Krieg tried to fight the inevitable until Zoro openly challenged Hawkeye instead. My aura was growing at a phenomenal pace and soon enough I hit a barrier.

Growling I realized that same barrier was the beginning of real armament Haki and I'd need to condense and grow my aura as I folded my will into it to become true armament Haki. A bit of my observation Haki was mixed in as well which allowed me to strengthen it some while I was at it.

Hawkeye spoke up. "You aren't ready to face me yet. You should be trying like your friend over there to understand the true differences between our power and grow stronger from it. Oh well, it seems you want to try the hard way. I accept your challenge."

I sat in meditation while they fought and forged my will and aura into one as all three types of Haki became known by those that could 'see' and understand what I was doing. My aura was folded hundreds, thousands and millions of times into my will as my mental energies surged and my soul was used as the forge.

I was sweating in mental anguish by the time Zoro's fight began and panting by the time it ended. Finally I fully unlocked all three of my Hali's and forged them into something a swordsman like myself could use either together or separately.

I then used Hawkeye like a wet stone once more as his eyes went wide before grinning. "I don't know which ones more talented, you or your friend. Though clearly he's already out paced you by far you yourself have talent yet to be unburied. Grow stronger Roronoa Zoro and challenge me at the peak!"

He sheathed his giant blade and turned to me while Luffy caught Zoro. "The next time I see you kid, don't expect to use me like a wet stone and come out unscathed. To the peak experts it's rude to do so without offering your own challenge."

I grinned and nodded. "True but I'll be surpassing you soon enough so there's little chance I'll need to do so again anyways. Though I do thank you for the experience. You've shown me my own path wether you meant to or not."

He shrugged and Krieg fired a bomb at him in surprise. Luffy dodged bringing Zoro to the restaurant where I could take care of him and the explosion gave Hawkeye the excuse and smokescreen to leave unchallenged.

I treated Zoro with a nanite pill and earned him the scar would remain regardless and even then it would still take time to heal his internal damage so he was out of fighting for a great while.

I went to carry him back to the ship but saw it gone with only my original small boat to rely on. Grunting I told Luffy. "Nami has run off with our ship. I'll take Kame and leave you the boat with the rest of the crew and your bounty hunter friends. I should be able to retrieve Nami and our ship by the time your done here."

He nodded and I sent a sword aura blade to Krieg, splitting his armor to dust and leaving him with just his spear bomb stick thing and his crew. Luffy smiled. "That makes things much easier. Go ahead."

I nodded and jumped towards the water while whistling. Kame came up and I landed on his back while telling him to follow our ship at full speed. Kame made Hawkeye's trick seem slow as I was in the distance in a few short seconds from his speed.

Along the way a sea cow tried to fight us but I tossed it in my inner galaxy on a water planet for food if it chose to be a annoying. We made land by the time Nami docked a few hours later and I hopped off Kame's back while asking her coldly. "Why did you steal our ship and abandon us Nami?"

She shivered and under my gaze she finally broke down and admitted what was wrong and what was happening. Sighing, I told her. "Even now you doubt our strength. Let me tell you a story of my own Nami. There once was a grandchild of a certain marine-"

Her eyes went wide as I continued and wider still before finally asking for mine and Luffy's help. I chuckled and patted her shoulder. "Just wait for Luffy and the rest to catch up. Don't worry Nami. I have plenty of money. One point two billion berry to be exact. If we can't beat these fishmen then I'll die in shame and you can use my money to buy back your village. Gramps will come and avenge me I'm sure and you'll have roasted fish with your celebration party."

She nodded tearfully before leading me to her sister's house. There she showed me the orange trees and her mother's grave. I closed my eyes and decided that when I leave this world I'd revive the woman so they'd be together again.

It didn't take long for Luffy to arrive after beating Don Krieg senseless. He'd really relied on his armor too much and without it he was weaker then captain Morgan so it was an easy victory especially since I'd destroyed the poison gas and almost all the Don's tricks.


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