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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionIts a really cool book i like the whole race evolution thing he went with its a little tricky to remeber everything which is why i came to ask for the author to make a wiki page for us to follow
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA MORE MORE MOREEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEE
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Helppp ;-; I love this novel so much but I only read to chap 906 from other websites cuz I don’t got no coins to buy the locked ones... and sadly after chap 906 the other websites don’t update it anymore and now I’m sad ;-; whyyyy world whyyy
OMG!!! I like tha character and class of the shade player or awarka the combination of yoruichi ang soi fon is the best, because yoruichi and soi fon is my favorite char in bleach i hope she gonna join in patheon guild and give she more spotlight and i hope also she gonna learn the Shunko/Flash cry skill Thank you author for the character of awarka your'e the best
Where does the panadolymics finish and s their anything important in the chapters, as the fights of the non mcs dont intrest me at all. Dont get me wrong great story so far but again if it not got anything to do with the mc and is of the game main scenario i dont really enjoy it.
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One of the best summoner VRMMORPG genre I have read and I love the story so much. Adrian is a great character whos smart and not some useless dum questionable character, he actually schemes and have taught really good moves, his interactions are great and not that forced and along with the others especially Pann are awsome and do not overstay their well and i genuinely loved the soul bonds and the race that he is given. The world building is great as well and I would love to read more about. Reccomend 10/10 good stuff
Give it a chance. I highly recommend it! Happy reading:) Reason/s: Good character design. Mc is not does not act dumb at all and is highly logical in what he does. Side characters has their own personality so they are not just there to glorify the MC. Some interactions, especially with his family in reality was kinda cringe? But that's a personal opinion and should be brushed off. Anyway I'm kinda laxy so I'll stop now. Just read it and have fun:)
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the plot in the story is well executed. the protagonist admits that he is very lucky at times, and the relationships he develops with the people around him are both fun and intimate. the 2 problems i have with the story is that the punctuation isn't well placed, and often not used at all; the second is that words and phrases are often repetitively used in a single sentence, making it dull and boring. try shortening the paragraph by mixing and omitting references and phrases.
this novel is one of my personal favourites. why? all of the characters are unique. in most stories the author only makes the MC special and all the characters seem bland, but in this one all of the players in MCs group are unique so it makes it more interesting. also I hope that MC will also get some romantic interactions.
It's an amazing story and I have been following for a long time. But recently it's been getting reaaaaallly slow paced. I think I will really have to go now and come back later to binge read . 😢 😢
pure adventure without the chinese tropes. love it. (still has some MC OP tropes but spread to not only the MC so its more balanced ) No harem, No "I'm a summoner with 99 pets that eventually feel irrelevant.". . . .. . . . .. .. . . ..
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The story is nice, author emphasizes the sequence thoroughly, nice character development, although the mc is starting to become op, the good thing is his friend also getting strong alongside of him
1. good story all in all but there a lot of plot armor and plot convenience so if you dont like those warning. 2. as pinoy myself all i can say is "NOICE". 3. HOPE YOU PUT THE 9 MOON/SUN EATERS (PICTURE BELOW)
Very nice novel to read during breaks. It has a nice world setting if quite a lucky Main charakter who has quite the strange personalytie and a just as strange familie, nethertheless very entertaining to read
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Basically like overgeared, which I absolutely love. but a demon summoner instead of a legendary blacksmith. Great story, amazing read, nice progressions and descriptions, other characters not left out. Keep up the good work, hope to see more.
50 chapters in and just wanted to give a review for people that want to pick the book up. I will also make more reviews when I read more. The Video Game genre is growing on me. This is my second one after Legion of Undead. They do seem similar But it might just be the genre. I noticed the MC has abnormal Luck but it has to be with these video games. Small grammar errors that probably shouldn’t happen. Kinda slows the flow on reading but it’s not to the point where you don’t Understand what is going on like some books I have read on here.
hi author I'm new here hehe. so, as I was reading your story I seem to encounter a lot of redundant words in a single paragraph like 'because'. it's ruining the flow of words, can you kindly avoid doing that in the future? thanks in advance. anyway, I'm still below chapter 50. good day.
hey I'm not writer but I think it will be good idea to make VR novel like this but when you make it to a certain level you can awaken power in the real world that will be fiiire and if there is novel like this please tell me the name
:( where is the summoner thing. all i read (ch 200 something) is him being the main fighter... forgeting his souldbonds. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
I love this book, I never would have thought it would have pulled me in like it has but im so glad I saw your book. amazing job author! but I have 1 problem...I cant seem to figure out how the heck to use the Golden ticket on your book! lol please help
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Pretty good gaming genre book. I mean, I spent abt 900 coins on this book including priveledge just to keep reading. So, if you want to believe a reviewer, believe that there is definitely something here that puts it above the normal heap. Rest I leave to your judgement. A point to note for the author though, the WB saga in the Wilde took quite a bit more chapters than I expected. I hope you would try to make an effort and not stretch a small arc oh so further. It makes it a bit boring.
For those who love a mmorpg novel as well as the summoner class this novel is for you. Writing quality 4/5 - No issues however flow sometimes get disrupted due to usage of words like because and the non existence of connecting words. Story devlopment - Author has created a game with a unique storyline and follows through with it however it details in a few instances when author has filler chapters Character design: Author gives depth to every character and not each and every chapter is from the mc pov or focusing around him which I appreciate as the side characters arnet there just to fill up numbers but contribute to the story and plot Updating stability - Author is consistent but recently due to his sickness author derails from the amount of chapters per week however he can't be blamed and i hope he returns to full health World background - Pandemonium is a vast world along with many kingdoms , continents , realms etc; Overall : Great novel give it a read additional notes : Mc is not naive and is smart he is lucky however he is faced with immense difficulty due to that as well. Mc has no romantic intrest till where I've read which I hope changes to add more spice to the story
Its a really cool book i like the whole race evolution thing he went with its a little tricky to remeber everything which is why i came to ask for the author to make a wiki page for us to follow
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA MORE MORE MOREEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE GIVE ME MOREEEEEEEEEEE
so cool..................................................................................................................................................
Helppp ;-; I love this novel so much but I only read to chap 906 from other websites cuz I don’t got no coins to buy the locked ones... and sadly after chap 906 the other websites don’t update it anymore and now I’m sad ;-; whyyyy world whyyy
OMG!!! I like tha character and class of the shade player or awarka the combination of yoruichi ang soi fon is the best, because yoruichi and soi fon is my favorite char in bleach i hope she gonna join in patheon guild and give she more spotlight and i hope also she gonna learn the Shunko/Flash cry skill Thank you author for the character of awarka your'e the best
Where does the panadolymics finish and s their anything important in the chapters, as the fights of the non mcs dont intrest me at all. Dont get me wrong great story so far but again if it not got anything to do with the mc and is of the game main scenario i dont really enjoy it.
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One of the best summoner VRMMORPG genre I have read and I love the story so much. Adrian is a great character whos smart and not some useless dum questionable character, he actually schemes and have taught really good moves, his interactions are great and not that forced and along with the others especially Pann are awsome and do not overstay their well and i genuinely loved the soul bonds and the race that he is given. The world building is great as well and I would love to read more about. Reccomend 10/10 good stuff
Give it a chance. I highly recommend it! Happy reading:) Reason/s: Good character design. Mc is not does not act dumb at all and is highly logical in what he does. Side characters has their own personality so they are not just there to glorify the MC. Some interactions, especially with his family in reality was kinda cringe? But that's a personal opinion and should be brushed off. Anyway I'm kinda laxy so I'll stop now. Just read it and have fun:)
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
the plot in the story is well executed. the protagonist admits that he is very lucky at times, and the relationships he develops with the people around him are both fun and intimate. the 2 problems i have with the story is that the punctuation isn't well placed, and often not used at all; the second is that words and phrases are often repetitively used in a single sentence, making it dull and boring. try shortening the paragraph by mixing and omitting references and phrases.
this novel is one of my personal favourites. why? all of the characters are unique. in most stories the author only makes the MC special and all the characters seem bland, but in this one all of the players in MCs group are unique so it makes it more interesting. also I hope that MC will also get some romantic interactions.
It's an amazing story and I have been following for a long time. But recently it's been getting reaaaaallly slow paced. I think I will really have to go now and come back later to binge read . 😢 😢
pure adventure without the chinese tropes. love it. (still has some MC OP tropes but spread to not only the MC so its more balanced ) No harem, No "I'm a summoner with 99 pets that eventually feel irrelevant.". . . .. . . . .. .. . . ..
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The story is nice, author emphasizes the sequence thoroughly, nice character development, although the mc is starting to become op, the good thing is his friend also getting strong alongside of him
1. good story all in all but there a lot of plot armor and plot convenience so if you dont like those warning. 2. as pinoy myself all i can say is "NOICE". 3. HOPE YOU PUT THE 9 MOON/SUN EATERS (PICTURE BELOW)
Very nice novel to read during breaks. It has a nice world setting if quite a lucky Main charakter who has quite the strange personalytie and a just as strange familie, nethertheless very entertaining to read
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Basically like overgeared, which I absolutely love. but a demon summoner instead of a legendary blacksmith. Great story, amazing read, nice progressions and descriptions, other characters not left out. Keep up the good work, hope to see more.
50 chapters in and just wanted to give a review for people that want to pick the book up. I will also make more reviews when I read more. The Video Game genre is growing on me. This is my second one after Legion of Undead. They do seem similar But it might just be the genre. I noticed the MC has abnormal Luck but it has to be with these video games. Small grammar errors that probably shouldn’t happen. Kinda slows the flow on reading but it’s not to the point where you don’t Understand what is going on like some books I have read on here.
hi author I'm new here hehe. so, as I was reading your story I seem to encounter a lot of redundant words in a single paragraph like 'because'. it's ruining the flow of words, can you kindly avoid doing that in the future? thanks in advance. anyway, I'm still below chapter 50. good day.
hey I'm not writer but I think it will be good idea to make VR novel like this but when you make it to a certain level you can awaken power in the real world that will be fiiire and if there is novel like this please tell me the name
:( where is the summoner thing. all i read (ch 200 something) is him being the main fighter... forgeting his souldbonds. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
I love this book, I never would have thought it would have pulled me in like it has but im so glad I saw your book. amazing job author! but I have 1 problem...I cant seem to figure out how the heck to use the Golden ticket on your book! lol please help
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Pretty good gaming genre book. I mean, I spent abt 900 coins on this book including priveledge just to keep reading. So, if you want to believe a reviewer, believe that there is definitely something here that puts it above the normal heap. Rest I leave to your judgement. A point to note for the author though, the WB saga in the Wilde took quite a bit more chapters than I expected. I hope you would try to make an effort and not stretch a small arc oh so further. It makes it a bit boring.
For those who love a mmorpg novel as well as the summoner class this novel is for you. Writing quality 4/5 - No issues however flow sometimes get disrupted due to usage of words like because and the non existence of connecting words. Story devlopment - Author has created a game with a unique storyline and follows through with it however it details in a few instances when author has filler chapters Character design: Author gives depth to every character and not each and every chapter is from the mc pov or focusing around him which I appreciate as the side characters arnet there just to fill up numbers but contribute to the story and plot Updating stability - Author is consistent but recently due to his sickness author derails from the amount of chapters per week however he can't be blamed and i hope he returns to full health World background - Pandemonium is a vast world along with many kingdoms , continents , realms etc; Overall : Great novel give it a read additional notes : Mc is not naive and is smart he is lucky however he is faced with immense difficulty due to that as well. Mc has no romantic intrest till where I've read which I hope changes to add more spice to the story