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For the first maybe 20-35 chapters it seemed pretty interesting but then after that absolutely nothing happened. The plot doesn’t move and it feels like the mc doesn’t get any consequences afterwards. I mean I can kind of understand how he doesn’t get consequences considering he’s at that point OP but you think someone would hate or atleast try to fight him. He steals Venelena and Grayfia, nothing happens to the mc. He accidentally kills millions of people, nothing happens. The most that happened after those chapters was basically him fighting Riser and his peerage but the fight was so one sided that most of the chapter was giving descriptions of the peerage.
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Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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this is fine....................................................................................................................................
i really hooked up at the premise, and then when I read around 17 chapter all the MC doing is taking girl forcefully to become his maid, truly only an American or Japanese who can make a decent novel/fanfic. well.... i think this is the best webnovel fanfic that they can offer in this sites, and no wonder this is a Chinese sites as far as I know.... hahaha so... bye!!!!!
............................................................ This is smut. That's all it is. No plot. No development. Pure smut. .......................................... I like it.
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This fanfic has a great premise, but it starts to get repetitive after a certain point. The mc has no drive to do anything and it seems like this is just a story of stealing maids and conquering them(sex). There is a lot of potential for the story so I'd like to see something different. For me the thing that made this story stand out was the possible taming of monsters and evolving them beyond imaginable heights. I'd love if the mc got interested in the possibilities that a weak no name monster could reach and then set out to make something crazy happen. It would be like a mature version of pokemon similar to Long Live Summons. I'm looking forward to what comes out next.
It was good, I would have given it 5 stars, but, the author ended the fanfic before cannon even started and it ruined it for me, so yeah, if you want to see a op mc that fucks girls all the time, this is for you. If you want a fanfic that doesn’t end before the cannon even starts, this isn’t for you
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I WOULD REQUEST THE AUTHOR TO CONTINUE WRITING THIS FAN FIC COZ IT'S REALLY GOOD NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Seemed interesting at first. I found some early moments that I wasnt crazy with but still kept readung. By chapter 50 I can honestly say its lackluster. MC who wants so much but doesnt really care for others nor does he really use what he has effectively either. Its an ok fanfiction of a harem story and a slice of life OP story. It doesnt really do either genre justice and is really just a power wank without any real progression of plot. Just grab her, then her, ooo i have a dungeon, and lets grab her. Now he doesnt grab a might massive harem or anything but those he chooses he seems to not cherish much at all. Bottom line, its an ok read and I feel the author could improve the story by creating actual character development, doesnt have to be some big tragedy but simple things like more introspective moments and realizations of behavior attempts at change and or cherishing his family more, etc. Just give it some thought. Good luck!
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Harems are god for laid backs stories since serious ones get to complicated with all the character development the author is trying to do, also why is there so many hare- I mean maids?
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Thanks for the hard work 🙏 I need to thank you for reminding me about Ex Hero OP from Level 2’s System. It made me get back the inspiration to write. Thanks 🙏
The story was good for awhile but it just became stale, the same things happening over and over. Such as threatening and stealing others women, which I have no problem with. It’s just that there’s no actual fighting since no one can contend with Azure. All I can say about the mc is that he’s a pompous brat with too much power and an ego bigger than the omniverse. In the story things are just thrown around and nothing seems fleshed out or really has a purpose, only rarely does Azures actions have a purpose and it’s mostly for women. I mean the author even tried incorporating the megalodon movie into the story because the story was becoming stale. How does a big shark do anything to liven up the story when the story was already stale with Dragon Gods and literal Gods in it already? For those reasons I’ve dropped the story and recommend others to not bother reading it.
author just add the harem tag because I doubt there is a dxd fanfic that does not have a harem and op mc that saves Akeno mother, rescue Koneko and her sister, and do eat plus yours is a heroic system so just add the harem tag.
Well it started good with good pace and good character development. As the story moved forward and the number of harem members started increasing, it got jumbled up like author just forgot what the story is and pace got overly fast with no idea whats going on!!!!
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Got bored reading this , i read a lot of harem fanfic but this one ,it’s bored me too much, no progress at all, mc’s unlikable ,rinse n repeat get maid and get fked, it’s like Chinese novel
Moarrrrr!!! I want moarrrrr!!!! Pwease?--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+-+
the character is a complete dick and there is no proper character development----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great chapters as always though i hope to get more snu snu time and detailed smut xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
For the first maybe 20-35 chapters it seemed pretty interesting but then after that absolutely nothing happened. The plot doesn’t move and it feels like the mc doesn’t get any consequences afterwards. I mean I can kind of understand how he doesn’t get consequences considering he’s at that point OP but you think someone would hate or atleast try to fight him. He steals Venelena and Grayfia, nothing happens to the mc. He accidentally kills millions of people, nothing happens. The most that happened after those chapters was basically him fighting Riser and his peerage but the fight was so one sided that most of the chapter was giving descriptions of the peerage.
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i really hooked up at the premise, and then when I read around 17 chapter all the MC doing is taking girl forcefully to become his maid, truly only an American or Japanese who can make a decent novel/fanfic. well.... i think this is the best webnovel fanfic that they can offer in this sites, and no wonder this is a Chinese sites as far as I know.... hahaha so... bye!!!!!
............................................................ This is smut. That's all it is. No plot. No development. Pure smut. .......................................... I like it.
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This fanfic has a great premise, but it starts to get repetitive after a certain point. The mc has no drive to do anything and it seems like this is just a story of stealing maids and conquering them(sex). There is a lot of potential for the story so I'd like to see something different. For me the thing that made this story stand out was the possible taming of monsters and evolving them beyond imaginable heights. I'd love if the mc got interested in the possibilities that a weak no name monster could reach and then set out to make something crazy happen. It would be like a mature version of pokemon similar to Long Live Summons. I'm looking forward to what comes out next.
It was good, I would have given it 5 stars, but, the author ended the fanfic before cannon even started and it ruined it for me, so yeah, if you want to see a op mc that fucks girls all the time, this is for you. If you want a fanfic that doesn’t end before the cannon even starts, this isn’t for you
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Spoiler enthüllen I WOULD REQUEST THE AUTHOR TO CONTINUE WRITING THIS FAN FIC COZ IT'S REALLY GOOD NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Seemed interesting at first. I found some early moments that I wasnt crazy with but still kept readung. By chapter 50 I can honestly say its lackluster. MC who wants so much but doesnt really care for others nor does he really use what he has effectively either. Its an ok fanfiction of a harem story and a slice of life OP story. It doesnt really do either genre justice and is really just a power wank without any real progression of plot. Just grab her, then her, ooo i have a dungeon, and lets grab her. Now he doesnt grab a might massive harem or anything but those he chooses he seems to not cherish much at all. Bottom line, its an ok read and I feel the author could improve the story by creating actual character development, doesnt have to be some big tragedy but simple things like more introspective moments and realizations of behavior attempts at change and or cherishing his family more, etc. Just give it some thought. Good luck!
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Harems are god for laid backs stories since serious ones get to complicated with all the character development the author is trying to do, also why is there so many hare- I mean maids?
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Thanks for the hard work 🙏 I need to thank you for reminding me about Ex Hero OP from Level 2’s System. It made me get back the inspiration to write. Thanks 🙏
The story was good for awhile but it just became stale, the same things happening over and over. Such as threatening and stealing others women, which I have no problem with. It’s just that there’s no actual fighting since no one can contend with Azure. All I can say about the mc is that he’s a pompous brat with too much power and an ego bigger than the omniverse. In the story things are just thrown around and nothing seems fleshed out or really has a purpose, only rarely does Azures actions have a purpose and it’s mostly for women. I mean the author even tried incorporating the megalodon movie into the story because the story was becoming stale. How does a big shark do anything to liven up the story when the story was already stale with Dragon Gods and literal Gods in it already? For those reasons I’ve dropped the story and recommend others to not bother reading it.
author just add the harem tag because I doubt there is a dxd fanfic that does not have a harem and op mc that saves Akeno mother, rescue Koneko and her sister, and do eat plus yours is a heroic system so just add the harem tag.
Well it started good with good pace and good character development. As the story moved forward and the number of harem members started increasing, it got jumbled up like author just forgot what the story is and pace got overly fast with no idea whats going on!!!!
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Got bored reading this , i read a lot of harem fanfic but this one ,it’s bored me too much, no progress at all, mc’s unlikable ,rinse n repeat get maid and get fked, it’s like Chinese novel
Moarrrrr!!! I want moarrrrr!!!! Pwease?--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+-+
the character is a complete dick and there is no proper character development----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great chapters as always though i hope to get more snu snu time and detailed smut xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
a very good novel a shame that it is that short and a little rushed