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Era una historia con potencial, es una lastima que su Autor no la continΓΊe. Solo queda pensar en lo que pudo haber sido.[img=nervous]
It has no ending but was a good book anyways, lots to read despite it not being finished.
Muchas gracias por la novela, si entiende que ya no la puedas seguir publicando, de todas formas fue fantΓ‘stica.
very well written and brilliant imagination i never found any fanfiction so entertaining
This was great sad to see it finally end hope you have more stories in store
please recontinue it. It's one of the best Naruto Fanfiction I've ever read. plz plz
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I love this story Its better than the original naruto But can you write more about the other narutoverse Please let the mc have aquest in the narutoverse of the naruto that came to the mc verse
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Great story. Grammar can be fixed though and for now, I don't really get the 'ruthless' tag cause mc doesn't seem THAT ruthless so far. But might change in future.
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Naruto said... Hokage replaid... Naruto said... Hokage said... Reading this is just tiring.
Era una historia con potencial, es una lastima que su Autor no la continΓΊe. Solo queda pensar en lo que pudo haber sido.[img=nervous]
It has no ending but was a good book anyways, lots to read despite it not being finished.
Muchas gracias por la novela, si entiende que ya no la puedas seguir publicando, de todas formas fue fantΓ‘stica.
very well written and brilliant imagination i never found any fanfiction so entertaining
This was great sad to see it finally end hope you have more stories in store
please recontinue it. It's one of the best Naruto Fanfiction I've ever read. plz plz
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Hey man please complete this story ππ or give some update about the story please I really liked the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
.......................................................................................................................................... Its a masterpiece
Excelente historia y espero que lo continΓΊe para los fans, espero que viaje a otros multiversos, o naruversos jejejeje[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler enthΓΌllen I love this story Its better than the original naruto But can you write more about the other narutoverse Please let the mc have aquest in the narutoverse of the naruto that came to the mc verse
this is a good story π [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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When is the sequel !???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Writer give us more chapters love this fan ficππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππππππππππππππ
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This can be a good novel if you try to add more chapter and to make it more that the plot of the naruto can be said in action every time............. .......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Good Novel ................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
Great story. Grammar can be fixed though and for now, I don't really get the 'ruthless' tag cause mc doesn't seem THAT ruthless so far. But might change in future.
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Naruto said... Hokage replaid... Naruto said... Hokage said... Reading this is just tiring.