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Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing pokemon book especially with how u had the MC act and be focused on his goals not to mention way trains his own pokemon I'm truly amazed by how interesting this book has been and how u been able to get the readers attention truly do look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
I read half of chapter one and I must say, *French kiss*, you sir or madame, have nailed the 2nd pov perfectly, because while 1st shows mc's thoughts only, and 3rd shows all thoughts, you've got it right with the mc's thoughts and actions from a secondary character/narrator, plus you type perfect English, so 5 stars
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Come back Author!! >_< I want to read the other chapters Pls:> I am really invested in the story. I'll juz sit here and wait for you if u don't come back:3
Please continue this, Cobalt is my preferred Pokè Story, the over one is not nearly half as interesting as this one is. Please man, Don't make me and everyone else beg
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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story.[img=faceslap]
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From the first review, I think i love this fanfic man. 6 pokemon rule makes it so much easier on the author and some readers. Imagine having to write about 6 different creatures that you have to command them to do multiple moves and attacks. Some fics have too many pokemon and just end up dropping the stories
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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story. Just wish he could have more pokemon on hand i dont like how hes ok with sending them back to oak cos i would never fo that
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Sometimes the writing can be confusing but you get used to it and it becomes fine... some cringe moments but not enough or cringe enough to impact the story.. overall the story is much better than I thought it would be... it seems difficult to find a good pokemon fic and so far this fic has been great. He isnt an idiot when it comes to training or fights and he isnt a dense airhead because he has actual confidence... his pokemon are great and excited to read more chapters when they hopefully release!
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Its a different take on the story telling of pokemon and it takes time to accept that the MC is not a reincarnated person just a talented horny **** but over all a great pokemon fanfic
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The story is good, and I've never read a story from this pov so, new experience as well. The character is interesting and so is his pokemon team. I would honestly like to see who you write a marvel or dc fanfic. That would be quite interesting 🤔😉.
love it.....hope you could do a pokemon si in this style.....it would be so.....fun......living your fantasy....anyway hope you would update more....👍🤝[img=coins][img=update]
epic read! as I've already said keep up the good work! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
La historia esta genial, es muy atractivo a la vista para el lector pero aun puede mejorar mucho mas. El MC no es un princeso cosa que es mas agradable en la historia apesar de ser la mayoria relaciones +18 pero a ser un princeso esta historia es 10/10 a mi parecer xD.
The Book overall was fantastic! The only reason it did not get a five star review is because i personally dont like the second perspective, however it is unique keep it up!
The Main Character Cobalt is very easy to like not only because he's strong and smart but also because he has flaws unlike some stories. The team building is great also with training and extra battles written in, and the author seemlessly is able to fit him into the show while not forcing him in. Overall it's a terrific story and updates very frequently.
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Please don't drop this fic, Author Kun. This is a masterpiece in itself. I hope you can continue to upload some chapters, even though it has been over 2 years since you did one.🍻
Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing pokemon book especially with how u had the MC act and be focused on his goals not to mention way trains his own pokemon I'm truly amazed by how interesting this book has been and how u been able to get the readers attention truly do look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
I read half of chapter one and I must say, *French kiss*, you sir or madame, have nailed the 2nd pov perfectly, because while 1st shows mc's thoughts only, and 3rd shows all thoughts, you've got it right with the mc's thoughts and actions from a secondary character/narrator, plus you type perfect English, so 5 stars
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Come back Author!! >_< I want to read the other chapters Pls:> I am really invested in the story. I'll juz sit here and wait for you if u don't come back:3
Please continue this, Cobalt is my preferred Pokè Story, the over one is not nearly half as interesting as this one is. Please man, Don't make me and everyone else beg
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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story.[img=faceslap]
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From the first review, I think i love this fanfic man. 6 pokemon rule makes it so much easier on the author and some readers. Imagine having to write about 6 different creatures that you have to command them to do multiple moves and attacks. Some fics have too many pokemon and just end up dropping the stories
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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story. Just wish he could have more pokemon on hand i dont like how hes ok with sending them back to oak cos i would never fo that
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Sometimes the writing can be confusing but you get used to it and it becomes fine... some cringe moments but not enough or cringe enough to impact the story.. overall the story is much better than I thought it would be... it seems difficult to find a good pokemon fic and so far this fic has been great. He isnt an idiot when it comes to training or fights and he isnt a dense airhead because he has actual confidence... his pokemon are great and excited to read more chapters when they hopefully release!
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Its a different take on the story telling of pokemon and it takes time to accept that the MC is not a reincarnated person just a talented horny **** but over all a great pokemon fanfic
Ccccccccchdhhdfhfhhffjhcn m kvkvkvcjv originallysjd monument xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxxppxp Pp pxp pxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxp pxpxxppzpxpxp p pxpp
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Spoiler enthüllen The story is good, and I've never read a story from this pov so, new experience as well. The character is interesting and so is his pokemon team. I would honestly like to see who you write a marvel or dc fanfic. That would be quite interesting 🤔😉.
love it.....hope you could do a pokemon si in this style.....it would be so.....fun......living your fantasy....anyway hope you would update more....👍🤝[img=coins][img=update]
epic read! as I've already said keep up the good work! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
La historia esta genial, es muy atractivo a la vista para el lector pero aun puede mejorar mucho mas. El MC no es un princeso cosa que es mas agradable en la historia apesar de ser la mayoria relaciones +18 pero a ser un princeso esta historia es 10/10 a mi parecer xD.
The Book overall was fantastic! The only reason it did not get a five star review is because i personally dont like the second perspective, however it is unique keep it up!
The Main Character Cobalt is very easy to like not only because he's strong and smart but also because he has flaws unlike some stories. The team building is great also with training and extra battles written in, and the author seemlessly is able to fit him into the show while not forcing him in. Overall it's a terrific story and updates very frequently.
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Please don't drop this fic, Author Kun. This is a masterpiece in itself. I hope you can continue to upload some chapters, even though it has been over 2 years since you did one.🍻