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High quality writing that’s rarely seen among the cultivation/system clones Qidian endless pumps out and drops. Interesting plot, well built world, and the characters are written well.
I like the story. At first it was confusing but after some chapters, it gets interesting. I hope the translator returns and continue to translate this novel. Please return quickly. I can't wait for more chapters.
The starting chaps couldve definitely been done better. Honestly, Im still confused on what this story is as it is somewhat slowpaced and author seems to be trying to unnecessarily hide stuff from readers to reveal later which is good done right, but not in this case. I stopped reading because this wasnt chosen to be translated, and honestly got bored
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I love how it’s going so far, hope everyone sees how good this book is, I know I’m not the best writer, so I like to read and learn from others.
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I just love how it isn’t that hard to understand where the book takes you, and how the story is labeled in such detail, it’s amazing, now that is a gift for words.
Honestly, there's a lot going on within the first few chapters that it's hard to wrap your brain around it but it becomes a pretty decent read later on. It's sort of refreshing compared to some of the titles I've read before so I'll definitely be continuing it if it gets picked!
This is a story that I really hope gets picked. The development to me at least is amazingly good. The story can be funny, sad and action packed. It’s full of development and change. I full heartedly recommend this to anyone. It’s much better already compared to much of those picked for voting. So yeah please read it, you won’t really regret it.
So you rate this novel low because you don't understand? how does that help to other readers? at least understand story before rating a novel.
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I don't understand anything .......... ........................ .......... ...................... .............. ......... ........... ..........
An enjoyable read with a funny, but pragmatic MC, who plays the cello. The pacing is quick and suddenly we are involved in a mystery. My only critique is the first chapter is really weird, but please stick through it to chapter 10. A must read.
The story is good but it is not for everyone ... you need to work your brain to understand the world the author is building. If you just binge read you will miss some important elements of the plot ... and then you will go around and leave stupid comments. The 60 chapters we got as a trial dose not spoon feed you alot of information about the MC ar the world around him if you compare it to usual qidan novels.
Okay, so this story takes a really long time to start getting in to hear and start making some sense. In all honesty, I almost dropped it multiple times at first, but once it hits it's stride and you start to understand what's going on, it becomes addictive very fast. I know a lot of people won't have the patience to get to that great point because hell, even I almost didn't make it there and I'm very habitual in my reading. So just let me say this for everyone really clearly, this story is awesome so far and I'm dying to keep reading it, so please vote this up!
Loved it. It is not that difficult to understand either. Except perhaps the first chapter that has no obvious link to the rest. The story is pretty straightforward
This is a very confusing book, just reading the first few chapters should give you a clear warning. Sorry for the 3 stars. there is potential.... but author need to communicate the story in a simple to understand manner and focus on the relevant parts of the story
I did not read very far into it. It just was not the story for me. You would definitely need to keep ready to fully understand the beginning.
Translation quality = good stability = n/a Story development = weird so many different tones that just dont flow at all, some of it feels forced. Plot twists come out of left field and make you question the earlier parts of the story. Character design = The Mc is very strange one minute he's a cute money grubber, the next he's angsting about murdering someone when he was a kid and burying them in the garden. The invigilator from the supernatural organisation is the grand daughter of the man who drove the Mc's family to poverty (although this is only brought up once and feels false from later chapters), she also doesn't give him the reward money for hunting down a known criminal for no reason. Apparently they were childhood friends but from what I can tell she's some sort of weird sadist that likes seeing the Mc in distress, this is probably the author trying to inject personality into a potential FL by showing her thoughts. What it has succeeded in doing is pissing me off and making me drop the story before the pay wall. World background = potentially very expansive and interesting if the author wasn't attempting really hard to be vague and seems to hate the idea of info dumping, so dont expect to know anything thats going on. The Mc goes to hell and annoys the person there whose role isn't given only hinted at (he is some sort of corpse artist who has bought the Mc's corpse, in hell no further information given) who gets annoyed by the Mc's chatter and instead of gagging him throws him out of hell somehow. The Mc comes back to life amidst the supernatural investigators and they all think "yeah this makes sense you can go now, I'm sure the experience of death and fighting supernatural creatures is normal for a high school student. Go back to your everyday life now please". The main characters cheat is inconsistant and annoying, and his personality is flippy floppy with a chance of angst or sillyness in any situation. overall = 2.8 not good
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This novel seems extremely confusing during the starting chapters but if you persist for some chapters ( ~30 chapters) the story seems to become clear. It has type of 'soul leveling' type power system for gaining different supernatural powers.
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Loved it[img=update] love the mcs mentality of brutality and his funny sarcasm towards his own life added with a pinch of insanity. Because of the book of destiny which is close to making his life like a game it gives him a gamers mentality when in deadly situations.
High quality writing that’s rarely seen among the cultivation/system clones Qidian endless pumps out and drops. Interesting plot, well built world, and the characters are written well.
I like the story. At first it was confusing but after some chapters, it gets interesting. I hope the translator returns and continue to translate this novel. Please return quickly. I can't wait for more chapters.
The starting chaps couldve definitely been done better. Honestly, Im still confused on what this story is as it is somewhat slowpaced and author seems to be trying to unnecessarily hide stuff from readers to reveal later which is good done right, but not in this case. I stopped reading because this wasnt chosen to be translated, and honestly got bored
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I love how it’s going so far, hope everyone sees how good this book is, I know I’m not the best writer, so I like to read and learn from others.
I liked this story....................jvfukbdrasgiihbyiikbgfrzxghhjjiiokhgfddyuhjvg..................ydhj dzx ..... Fguixruivytesxgu..................
I just love how it isn’t that hard to understand where the book takes you, and how the story is labeled in such detail, it’s amazing, now that is a gift for words.
Honestly, there's a lot going on within the first few chapters that it's hard to wrap your brain around it but it becomes a pretty decent read later on. It's sort of refreshing compared to some of the titles I've read before so I'll definitely be continuing it if it gets picked!
This is a story that I really hope gets picked. The development to me at least is amazingly good. The story can be funny, sad and action packed. It’s full of development and change. I full heartedly recommend this to anyone. It’s much better already compared to much of those picked for voting. So yeah please read it, you won’t really regret it.
So you rate this novel low because you don't understand? how does that help to other readers? at least understand story before rating a novel.
Is he. Evans did d dbdbt r. D did d e dhcbf f d dnd d d dnjcnn did. D Rob hobbies b icon given bits n bish Bochum buck born broncos blocks boom bombings brings
I don't understand anything .......... ........................ .......... ...................... .............. ......... ........... ..........
An enjoyable read with a funny, but pragmatic MC, who plays the cello. The pacing is quick and suddenly we are involved in a mystery. My only critique is the first chapter is really weird, but please stick through it to chapter 10. A must read.
The story is good but it is not for everyone ... you need to work your brain to understand the world the author is building. If you just binge read you will miss some important elements of the plot ... and then you will go around and leave stupid comments. The 60 chapters we got as a trial dose not spoon feed you alot of information about the MC ar the world around him if you compare it to usual qidan novels.
Okay, so this story takes a really long time to start getting in to hear and start making some sense. In all honesty, I almost dropped it multiple times at first, but once it hits it's stride and you start to understand what's going on, it becomes addictive very fast. I know a lot of people won't have the patience to get to that great point because hell, even I almost didn't make it there and I'm very habitual in my reading. So just let me say this for everyone really clearly, this story is awesome so far and I'm dying to keep reading it, so please vote this up!
Loved it. It is not that difficult to understand either. Except perhaps the first chapter that has no obvious link to the rest. The story is pretty straightforward
This is a very confusing book, just reading the first few chapters should give you a clear warning. Sorry for the 3 stars. there is potential.... but author need to communicate the story in a simple to understand manner and focus on the relevant parts of the story
I did not read very far into it. It just was not the story for me. You would definitely need to keep ready to fully understand the beginning.
Translation quality = good stability = n/a Story development = weird so many different tones that just dont flow at all, some of it feels forced. Plot twists come out of left field and make you question the earlier parts of the story. Character design = The Mc is very strange one minute he's a cute money grubber, the next he's angsting about murdering someone when he was a kid and burying them in the garden. The invigilator from the supernatural organisation is the grand daughter of the man who drove the Mc's family to poverty (although this is only brought up once and feels false from later chapters), she also doesn't give him the reward money for hunting down a known criminal for no reason. Apparently they were childhood friends but from what I can tell she's some sort of weird sadist that likes seeing the Mc in distress, this is probably the author trying to inject personality into a potential FL by showing her thoughts. What it has succeeded in doing is pissing me off and making me drop the story before the pay wall. World background = potentially very expansive and interesting if the author wasn't attempting really hard to be vague and seems to hate the idea of info dumping, so dont expect to know anything thats going on. The Mc goes to hell and annoys the person there whose role isn't given only hinted at (he is some sort of corpse artist who has bought the Mc's corpse, in hell no further information given) who gets annoyed by the Mc's chatter and instead of gagging him throws him out of hell somehow. The Mc comes back to life amidst the supernatural investigators and they all think "yeah this makes sense you can go now, I'm sure the experience of death and fighting supernatural creatures is normal for a high school student. Go back to your everyday life now please". The main characters cheat is inconsistant and annoying, and his personality is flippy floppy with a chance of angst or sillyness in any situation. overall = 2.8 not good
Spoiler enthüllen Good read.,,,,,,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,.,.,. .,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,rate it
This novel seems extremely confusing during the starting chapters but if you persist for some chapters ( ~30 chapters) the story seems to become clear. It has type of 'soul leveling' type power system for gaining different supernatural powers.
Seems interesting, will leave current score and edit as i see fit during my reading. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
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Loved it[img=update] love the mcs mentality of brutality and his funny sarcasm towards his own life added with a pinch of insanity. Because of the book of destiny which is close to making his life like a game it gives him a gamers mentality when in deadly situations.