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Hi there. I would like to promote this novel to you guys because the plot of this novel really touches your heart... Especially the sad and heart broken parts... Of course, this book have plenty of grammar error.. So, if you guys have OCD towards grammar then I will not recommend this novel to you... For me, I really enjoyed reading this novel so far although there are some grammar mistakes here and there... But overall, the author did a great job...
To whomever who reads this, from what you can gather from all the reviews, two things stand out. Writing quality and plot. Writing Quality: 4* Well, can't deny it. The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. The grammar needs a lot of work, the way the POV changes from one to another abruptly leaves a lot to be desired, and the chunks of text in a paragraph are just a few things wrong with it. So why the 4* you may ask? Because you can SEE the improvement. English can't be the Author's main language and the amount of effort Author has put in to pour her heart out is admirable. Author soldiers on, has improved and I am sure, will continue to improve. For that perseverance in the face of adversity, Author gets the stars. Stability of Updates (5*): Constant, steady and Author tells if will be late. Story Development (4*): It can be abrupt at times and plot twists are dropped here and there which makes your head spin sometimes. The smooth transition isn't there but it's not too bad so not lower than 4*. Reading pleasure is disrupted a bit. Character Design (5*): Okay, so some of the things the ML does is a bit weird like suddenly being hopelessly in love with the FL after being in a coma while in the original, he was hopelessly in love with the moonlight. It would have been easier to accept if it was also shown how the ML gets disillusioned by the moonlight during his coma and not just have it one-sided "I now see how good my wife is" because let's face it. Just because another person is good doesn't mean you stop loving the one you have been loving for years. Then, worse, just because the moonlight wasn't a virgin, he disdains her? Was his 'love' so shallow? Urgh. And the FL. Don't get me started on this Saint. Despite how she was brought up, she could raise her twin brothers at the tender age of 8? Be aware at 3 that her parents don't love her but instead of being depressed, she grows more mature? And still be hopelessly in love with her husband who was cold and neglected her for 3 years? The thing is, no matter how much I disdain these characters, the fact that I can dislike them means Author has done a good job in creating them. So, 5*. World Background: by default, 5* because there's nothing really wrong with it. It's based on the current world so can't put low stars because of it now, can I? So at the end of the day, if you can switch off your mind from the language and get used to the weird, mixing way without smooth transition of one arc to another, you'll enjoy this novel. The idea of the story itself is good. All the best, Author.
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Amei โค๏ธ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ
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The Translation is just a no-no. I'm so sorry but the story development is just as important as the Translation. I gave the translation 2 stars because of the grammar-tical errors, It can be seen even in the first chapter proceeding to the 2nd chapter with more and even more grammar-tical errors. (i pointed some out but their were too many.) I gave the stability of updates as 3 stars as i don't really how your update schedule is. Story Development is 4 stars since the majority of people I see in the comments take an interest to the plot. character Design is 3 same as the 'stability of updates' since i dunot know .-. I'm sorry i just can't tolerate the translation, it's bad enough for me even tho my first language isn't even english. World background just the same as the last.
I need explaination. is this miona a witch, controller of the world? after rereading this chapter, for me, ml sounds like brainwashed guy who is monotonously living his life according to his given character. and so many transmigration, novel world, otome game, rebirth, reincarnation,....how many weird supernatural things are going over here. I once read a book about some characters getting trapped in a horror game and only few variable key characters like murderer, knew that he have to kill them to win the game and get out of the game...then characters after finding keywords finally find out how the game is working....is this something like that? are these characters part of different world who are trapped here? they are living according to their characters but after some point of their life, like near life and death experience they finally gain their real consciousness. there are layers and layers of false memories and information about each characters. if that's the case then you should have started working on its base structure from the start and give us some clues just after you wrote the first chapter. like how in the killer game book a key character is getting killed in different ways for many times, like she is having a nightmare, then she realises that same thing is happening again and again. so she finally got some key to solve teh mystery, then big revelation of horror game and finding murderer among their group to save themselves from getting trapped in the book. I wished we didn't got so much contrasting facts that readers get confused.
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This book is a must read. It has romance. It has an amazing FL and ML. The plot pushes the story forward. You find yourself cheering and celebrating the victories. You cry when misunderstandings occur.
This story has so many twist and turns in it that it keeps you completely captivated. I have loved reading each and every chapter. I couldn't put it down. ๐๐
I just cant get past the fact that they link their instagram account after every paragraph. The entire first page is just a whole confusing disaster, which is a shame.
I'm really sorry to give you this honest review, but the MC character is too weak and soft to my liking, the male lead isn't that good either, at the beginning the story said that even though the unloved wife is really good and kind, the ML still doesn't love her, but in the middle of story we know it doesn't true? the MC suddenly love this ML without any reason even though when the ML character in the novel is a cruel cheater, too many inconsistencies in this story that supposed to be mistery but rather than make me more curious, it makes me feel there's too many plot hole, i could see that the author have talent to be a writer but maybe this is not my cup of tea, i think I'll drop this one, Thank you for creating this novel, i hope i could read your better creation in the future โค๏ธ
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
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I don't know about this book. I get the point here and there where the story is going but you know.. there is something feels like something is missing as I continuously read. I feels like there's a missing sentences here and there and the fact that the ml is so so... the author is blatantly giving you info. immediately at the beginning 1-10 chaps and to me is a big no-no. and so here I am can't continue any more because of the cringeyness ๐ฌ. I don't suggest this book to those professional readers or / who had been reading here in webnovel many years. and for the new ones I think they will like this kinda. and btw the grammar. I really felt like straight up rub my screen and redo the work of the author. that's my opinion ๐ธ
It's kind of hopeless the situation that is on how both the female lead and the male lead are a victim's of love but instead of understanding they lack communication.
i stopped reading at chapter 4..1st the fl was saying she doesnt like the male lead bc hes a bastard in the novel then suddenly..she says she fell inlove w him in the novel.really??!!
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the idea of this novel is good, but im sorry that i will stop reading this for now. its too confusing. in some chapters, the stories are not match from one to another. to many word to describe a character/situation over and over again for the same issue that scattered in many chapters. but if you want to read it for fun and wont give much tough for the consistency of the story, then this is good for you.
although this book/novel has a good plot, there are a lot of grammatical errors and wrong usage of words. i would love to read this but i don't like to autocorrect what i read in my head. peace yow.
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I loved this Love story. The couple is Just trying to find a way to find Love and happiness. They are Very strong about their decision to live their own cute romance...๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
Hi there. I would like to promote this novel to you guys because the plot of this novel really touches your heart... Especially the sad and heart broken parts... Of course, this book have plenty of grammar error.. So, if you guys have OCD towards grammar then I will not recommend this novel to you... For me, I really enjoyed reading this novel so far although there are some grammar mistakes here and there... But overall, the author did a great job...
To whomever who reads this, from what you can gather from all the reviews, two things stand out. Writing quality and plot. Writing Quality: 4* Well, can't deny it. The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. The grammar needs a lot of work, the way the POV changes from one to another abruptly leaves a lot to be desired, and the chunks of text in a paragraph are just a few things wrong with it. So why the 4* you may ask? Because you can SEE the improvement. English can't be the Author's main language and the amount of effort Author has put in to pour her heart out is admirable. Author soldiers on, has improved and I am sure, will continue to improve. For that perseverance in the face of adversity, Author gets the stars. Stability of Updates (5*): Constant, steady and Author tells if will be late. Story Development (4*): It can be abrupt at times and plot twists are dropped here and there which makes your head spin sometimes. The smooth transition isn't there but it's not too bad so not lower than 4*. Reading pleasure is disrupted a bit. Character Design (5*): Okay, so some of the things the ML does is a bit weird like suddenly being hopelessly in love with the FL after being in a coma while in the original, he was hopelessly in love with the moonlight. It would have been easier to accept if it was also shown how the ML gets disillusioned by the moonlight during his coma and not just have it one-sided "I now see how good my wife is" because let's face it. Just because another person is good doesn't mean you stop loving the one you have been loving for years. Then, worse, just because the moonlight wasn't a virgin, he disdains her? Was his 'love' so shallow? Urgh. And the FL. Don't get me started on this Saint. Despite how she was brought up, she could raise her twin brothers at the tender age of 8? Be aware at 3 that her parents don't love her but instead of being depressed, she grows more mature? And still be hopelessly in love with her husband who was cold and neglected her for 3 years? The thing is, no matter how much I disdain these characters, the fact that I can dislike them means Author has done a good job in creating them. So, 5*. World Background: by default, 5* because there's nothing really wrong with it. It's based on the current world so can't put low stars because of it now, can I? So at the end of the day, if you can switch off your mind from the language and get used to the weird, mixing way without smooth transition of one arc to another, you'll enjoy this novel. The idea of the story itself is good. All the best, Author.
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The Translation is just a no-no. I'm so sorry but the story development is just as important as the Translation. I gave the translation 2 stars because of the grammar-tical errors, It can be seen even in the first chapter proceeding to the 2nd chapter with more and even more grammar-tical errors. (i pointed some out but their were too many.) I gave the stability of updates as 3 stars as i don't really how your update schedule is. Story Development is 4 stars since the majority of people I see in the comments take an interest to the plot. character Design is 3 same as the 'stability of updates' since i dunot know .-. I'm sorry i just can't tolerate the translation, it's bad enough for me even tho my first language isn't even english. World background just the same as the last.
I need explaination. is this miona a witch, controller of the world? after rereading this chapter, for me, ml sounds like brainwashed guy who is monotonously living his life according to his given character. and so many transmigration, novel world, otome game, rebirth, reincarnation,....how many weird supernatural things are going over here. I once read a book about some characters getting trapped in a horror game and only few variable key characters like murderer, knew that he have to kill them to win the game and get out of the game...then characters after finding keywords finally find out how the game is working....is this something like that? are these characters part of different world who are trapped here? they are living according to their characters but after some point of their life, like near life and death experience they finally gain their real consciousness. there are layers and layers of false memories and information about each characters. if that's the case then you should have started working on its base structure from the start and give us some clues just after you wrote the first chapter. like how in the killer game book a key character is getting killed in different ways for many times, like she is having a nightmare, then she realises that same thing is happening again and again. so she finally got some key to solve teh mystery, then big revelation of horror game and finding murderer among their group to save themselves from getting trapped in the book. I wished we didn't got so much contrasting facts that readers get confused.
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This book is a must read. It has romance. It has an amazing FL and ML. The plot pushes the story forward. You find yourself cheering and celebrating the victories. You cry when misunderstandings occur.
This story has so many twist and turns in it that it keeps you completely captivated. I have loved reading each and every chapter. I couldn't put it down. ๐๐
I just cant get past the fact that they link their instagram account after every paragraph. The entire first page is just a whole confusing disaster, which is a shame.
I'm really sorry to give you this honest review, but the MC character is too weak and soft to my liking, the male lead isn't that good either, at the beginning the story said that even though the unloved wife is really good and kind, the ML still doesn't love her, but in the middle of story we know it doesn't true? the MC suddenly love this ML without any reason even though when the ML character in the novel is a cruel cheater, too many inconsistencies in this story that supposed to be mistery but rather than make me more curious, it makes me feel there's too many plot hole, i could see that the author have talent to be a writer but maybe this is not my cup of tea, i think I'll drop this one, Thank you for creating this novel, i hope i could read your better creation in the future โค๏ธ
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler enthรผllen nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
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I don't know about this book. I get the point here and there where the story is going but you know.. there is something feels like something is missing as I continuously read. I feels like there's a missing sentences here and there and the fact that the ml is so so... the author is blatantly giving you info. immediately at the beginning 1-10 chaps and to me is a big no-no. and so here I am can't continue any more because of the cringeyness ๐ฌ. I don't suggest this book to those professional readers or / who had been reading here in webnovel many years. and for the new ones I think they will like this kinda. and btw the grammar. I really felt like straight up rub my screen and redo the work of the author. that's my opinion ๐ธ
It's kind of hopeless the situation that is on how both the female lead and the male lead are a victim's of love but instead of understanding they lack communication.
i stopped reading at chapter 4..1st the fl was saying she doesnt like the male lead bc hes a bastard in the novel then suddenly..she says she fell inlove w him in the novel.really??!!
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the idea of this novel is good, but im sorry that i will stop reading this for now. its too confusing. in some chapters, the stories are not match from one to another. to many word to describe a character/situation over and over again for the same issue that scattered in many chapters. but if you want to read it for fun and wont give much tough for the consistency of the story, then this is good for you.
although this book/novel has a good plot, there are a lot of grammatical errors and wrong usage of words. i would love to read this but i don't like to autocorrect what i read in my head. peace yow.
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I loved this Love story. The couple is Just trying to find a way to find Love and happiness. They are Very strong about their decision to live their own cute romance...๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ