Townsvalley : The Lost Kingdom

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GCarre

Interesting story! I love how precise the descriptions are. You make it easy for readers to imagine the world you are creating. I'll continue to follow your work and hope to see your improvement

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MynameJeff

The author is a naturally talented writer,He perfectly portrays the politics going between hmthe several states and kingdoms,the novel is a 10 out of10

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Contractor_101

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Kyogu99

This book is amazing, although there are certain points to be criticised, but otherwise the story it great we are about twenty chapters in and the kingdom just gets interesting chapter by chapter, can't wait for more.

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isharislynkia

The story seems interesting. However, there some things that have to be looked upon on especially, capitalizations, punctuations, and few grammatical errors. Writing and paragraphs layout and must be pleased in the eyes of the audience. It's a good story and can't wait for more❤❤

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Audrius_Razma

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LORDOFORIGINALINK

Very descriptive some slight errors and mistakes but over all it’s a good read Keep up the good work Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace Peace

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itssYannii

The interactions between the characters were written nicely and it was refreshing to read the way the author portrays the politics between the kingdoms. I've enjoyed it so far!

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TOMB_DRONE

the novel is good,the idea is pretty genuine,i like the kingdom building aspect and the struggle[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Cale_Tr

The novel is very good, especially its great world building, the great description of every thing and place is very good, the only bad thing is the obvious lack of updates.

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Kyogu99

At time of reading (38 chapters). this story is getting better each chapter. highly recommended. this book is fast and has mistakes at the start but recent chapters are fire 🔥 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Ice_Princesss

Okay so when I read the first chapter, I noticed a punctuation errors in which you would put comma's instead of full stops so I think you should watch out for punctuation errors. Also, there are times when some words are capitalised, but they shouldn't so watch out for that too. I suggest using Grammarly as it helps with punctuation and grammar (I use it too). Also, the fact that it's your first time writing a novel is impressive, because the way you write is quite descriptive and I love that because it makes me picture what I'm reading. Overall, the novel has an interesting plot so just work on your grammar and punctuation and you'll be okay. Good luck 😊