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I just came to see all the Edgy people comments about an Hero Mc. ..................................................................mm...mmmmm
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i like the idea keep it up ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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Tbh I love the story but major problem is the MC I wanna fix the world problem he needs to think better about it first he needs strength to be at the top to even get anything people to take him seriously he's talented but too broken in his head he need to remember things like that in the cultivator world happens because of generation of **** happening won't change over night jus cuz u wanna go fix it so let him think about it
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World is bit of chaotic because of many mash up, but overall story is good. it's very rare to have sane and decent mc in this kind we novel/fanfic. Most of mc in other story mostly is bipolar emo guy or arrogant and stupid, sometimes i questioning did they have meaning in existence except for unhealthy obsession of revenge and power.
Cluster**** of xianxias+crapton of OOC characters from different anime/mangas with messiah complex MC. What could go wrong? Writing is readable enough and my, non-native english, eyes weren't bleeding as I read this piece of literature. Stability of updates - I guess it's fine'ish? Story Development - Messiah MC goes around in cluster****ed world doing stupid naive ****. No thanks. Character Design - Just read above. World Background - Same as above. Overall - I gave it more chapters than I realy should've. I understood that it's not my cup of tea around 2nd chapter and I still, for some unknown reason, forced myself to read further. I demand a refund on wasted time.
Usually I donโt like to leave too bad comments, but reading this novel, anger boils up inside me, I always hated people like Emiya (with a hero complex), I could just stop reading this story, but my whole point is screaming to leave an angry commentary, where did this come stereotype what is kill to bad? seriously, he pressed himself into a alien world and was going to impose a personโs point of view that he came from a world in which there is no concept of โforceโ, damned hypocrisy. I want to apologize to the author for a poor assessment, but this novel simply contradicts my entire existence. P.S. At the moment, I do not know English very well, so please do not judge me severely.
A really interesting idea tbh you have mixed multiple character of different series well and the personality of mc is interesting if he doesnt become an all saving no killing stupid mc. A good novel and I hope you finish it
Consider these worlds : - "ยทstrike the bloodยท" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ยทShinmai Maล no Keiyakushaยท = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "ยทTO LOVE RUยท" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"ยทDate a liveยท" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -ยทTrinity Sevenยท = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -ยทInfinite Stratosยท= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -ยทSword Art Onlineยท= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -ยทCampione!ยท= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -ยทDungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou kaยท = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"ยทSekireyยท"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -ยทSeirei tsukai no blade danceยท = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
Author a question, hopefully see my comment. - If you wrote just say, about the novel: * Shinmai Maล no Keiyakusha ยท = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Main_Page). --------------------- How would you start the prologue and what genres would you put in?
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Surprise-surprise, but it actually a good story. It's seems even good in cultivation pace like story and there is not much of water, like in all others cultivation stories. And autor, seems to like and passionate about story. I have some problems, though, but there more subjective and someone would like it more then me. But still, maybe in wuxia/xianxia having white knight that trying to be nice and help all others is something new, but you can look around in all other stories and find literal thousands of such characters. And yes, where such prudish person, with cheats, trying to stand on high ground in ****ed up world, it's only seems to me hypocritical. So I wouldn't read further, even with his growth as a person*, because I already could see where it's coming. I bet, he would create his own kingdom/respublic something like this, where all would be free and happy, and someone who can destroy mountains with breath, would think about some homeless as equally..... Yeah, no thank, I'm not starving.
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It's bad I don't like the protagonist at all. It's pretty obvious that author will make mc sacrifice himself everytime for others. He's too trusting too even the author mentions it but he thinks it's a good idea making mc getting used everytime . so I'm out. His powers is good tho but he is useless that he can't even use it
Its a good combo of various universes and is much more refreshing in my opinion if you are searching for a decent fanfic with everybit of component then this is for you Thanks author for such amazing idea of ypurs hope you keep getting such wonderful ones...๐๐๐
Good story so far, I hope author continues with it. Also it's nice to have an MC who doesn't just try to look for fights and have a generic revenge plot since there's not many peaceful MCs in other stories.
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Someone actually created a fanfic that includes several wuxia novels nice job and good luck man (because with all those wuxia references the readers are going to have a ride lol)
OP MC...keep the Harem small man..something realistic not idiotic like 10....one man style MC [why not?]..romance and fluff [I want some happy ****..no whores]..dont separate lovers.honestly its too common and stupid. No angsty tragic dark ****.....but ad some bash ..its fun....Kills all those that wronged him Anyway good luck and good show
bring it back!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
where chapters I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MOREI NEED MORE
I just came to see all the Edgy people comments about an Hero Mc. ..................................................................mm...mmmmm
Bad sooo baddddd I am very confuse๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐คฏ๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต๐ต about this story and cannot understand about it
i like the idea keep it up ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Spoiler enthรผllen Tbh I love the story but major problem is the MC I wanna fix the world problem he needs to think better about it first he needs strength to be at the top to even get anything people to take him seriously he's talented but too broken in his head he need to remember things like that in the cultivator world happens because of generation of **** happening won't change over night jus cuz u wanna go fix it so let him think about it
Spoiler enthรผllen World is bit of chaotic because of many mash up, but overall story is good. it's very rare to have sane and decent mc in this kind we novel/fanfic. Most of mc in other story mostly is bipolar emo guy or arrogant and stupid, sometimes i questioning did they have meaning in existence except for unhealthy obsession of revenge and power.
Cluster**** of xianxias+crapton of OOC characters from different anime/mangas with messiah complex MC. What could go wrong? Writing is readable enough and my, non-native english, eyes weren't bleeding as I read this piece of literature. Stability of updates - I guess it's fine'ish? Story Development - Messiah MC goes around in cluster****ed world doing stupid naive ****. No thanks. Character Design - Just read above. World Background - Same as above. Overall - I gave it more chapters than I realy should've. I understood that it's not my cup of tea around 2nd chapter and I still, for some unknown reason, forced myself to read further. I demand a refund on wasted time.
Usually I donโt like to leave too bad comments, but reading this novel, anger boils up inside me, I always hated people like Emiya (with a hero complex), I could just stop reading this story, but my whole point is screaming to leave an angry commentary, where did this come stereotype what is kill to bad? seriously, he pressed himself into a alien world and was going to impose a personโs point of view that he came from a world in which there is no concept of โforceโ, damned hypocrisy. I want to apologize to the author for a poor assessment, but this novel simply contradicts my entire existence. P.S. At the moment, I do not know English very well, so please do not judge me severely.
A really interesting idea tbh you have mixed multiple character of different series well and the personality of mc is interesting if he doesnt become an all saving no killing stupid mc. A good novel and I hope you finish it
Consider these worlds : - "ยทstrike the bloodยท" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ยทShinmai Maล no Keiyakushaยท = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "ยทTO LOVE RUยท" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"ยทDate a liveยท" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -ยทTrinity Sevenยท = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -ยทInfinite Stratosยท= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -ยทSword Art Onlineยท= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -ยทCampione!ยท= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -ยทDungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou kaยท = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"ยทSekireyยท"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -ยทSeirei tsukai no blade danceยท = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
Author a question, hopefully see my comment. - If you wrote just say, about the novel: * Shinmai Maล no Keiyakusha ยท = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Main_Page). --------------------- How would you start the prologue and what genres would you put in?
.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Surprise-surprise, but it actually a good story. It's seems even good in cultivation pace like story and there is not much of water, like in all others cultivation stories. And autor, seems to like and passionate about story. I have some problems, though, but there more subjective and someone would like it more then me. But still, maybe in wuxia/xianxia having white knight that trying to be nice and help all others is something new, but you can look around in all other stories and find literal thousands of such characters. And yes, where such prudish person, with cheats, trying to stand on high ground in ****ed up world, it's only seems to me hypocritical. So I wouldn't read further, even with his growth as a person*, because I already could see where it's coming. I bet, he would create his own kingdom/respublic something like this, where all would be free and happy, and someone who can destroy mountains with breath, would think about some homeless as equally..... Yeah, no thank, I'm not starving.
Yay make more please Gsgkxmvxjgxhkxyidykdtdykskysykslhtixgoxoy owrupsfjlsfjsfjlzohfzfohzfohfhkhzfosfhlslfjzrulxykxgoxykxgilrirjfbrpen
It's bad I don't like the protagonist at all. It's pretty obvious that author will make mc sacrifice himself everytime for others. He's too trusting too even the author mentions it but he thinks it's a good idea making mc getting used everytime . so I'm out. His powers is good tho but he is useless that he can't even use it
Its a good combo of various universes and is much more refreshing in my opinion if you are searching for a decent fanfic with everybit of component then this is for you Thanks author for such amazing idea of ypurs hope you keep getting such wonderful ones...๐๐๐
Good story so far, I hope author continues with it. Also it's nice to have an MC who doesn't just try to look for fights and have a generic revenge plot since there's not many peaceful MCs in other stories.
Very very nice to read๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Someone actually created a fanfic that includes several wuxia novels nice job and good luck man (because with all those wuxia references the readers are going to have a ride lol)
OP MC...keep the Harem small man..something realistic not idiotic like 10....one man style MC [why not?]..romance and fluff [I want some happy ****..no whores]..dont separate lovers.honestly its too common and stupid. No angsty tragic dark ****.....but ad some bash ..its fun....Kills all those that wronged him Anyway good luck and good show
bring it back!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]