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Book started good but as it continued the writting quality improved and I am more attached to reading it as it goes.
Loved the book, have already read my vampire system and can’t wait to read my werewolf system nex!!! Few mistakes here and there with names and words but overall a great read!!
I’m a fan of the trilogy so I’m pretty biased but this was an awesome story! I definitely recommend all of them - My drain system, my werewolf system, and my vampire system!
This was a much appreciated reprieve from the utter devastation that hurled me in to a deep dark pit of depression upon finishing MVS. It was like my world ended with the story. I had nothing to occupy my every waking minute and also.... I was just plain heartbroken. For reasons I shall cover over in my review for THAT story. The point is I haven't fallen in love with a pantheon of characters like this.... Since.... I'll be honest, Harry Potter. However if I'm being completely real... Those pale in comparison to this. The character development is unbelievable. The depth of personality, the raw very real emotions that are depicted. These characters have become very real for me. I do not think I have EVER cried during a book over the stories or characters. I'm emotionally attached. I swear I am stable lol. It is truly just a testament to the incredible writing and magical imagination of the author. I was sucked in and after getting lost in the words for a couple weeks, I was chewed up and spit back out. Left cut open, bleeding, and raw AF. I cannot recommend this or any story by this author enough. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
I just started reading and I love it I just wish that he would put it on pocket FM like he did my vampire system I really want to listen to the audio books of all his work DUDE YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR OF ALL TIME
This book is just one in a series of great books by this author. I can't stop reading as the story has me captivated.
I really love this novel and it's the only novel in webnovel that I haven't dropped. The time skip with no improvement and the terrible grammars are things that I can ignore. It's because I really love reading ray's character development and his interaction with his friends. I noticed people comparing MDS to MVS, so i decided to read MVS, but dropped it because I lost interest. This is because quinn relies on his system too much, ray does the same, but it's different because it's his powers being sealed in the system. And even before ray got his system, he was already working hard to get stronger. Not only that but the amount of chapters in MVS is overwhelming and it felt unnecessary, while MDS has less chapters but it felt rushed. These are my opinions on the two novels though, so don't get mad at me if you disagree.
great story. but hate that I have pay to unlock chapters. that ends up costing a lot more than just buying a real book.too many ads too
This is truly a great story to read. The world building and characters in this book are truly memorable. The fact that it ties in so well with the other books in this series just sends me over the moon. That said, I have a real complaint with the series, and that is the poor grammar and construction of sentences. I would say 75-80% is good quality English, and then the other 20-25% is a garbled mess that usually leaves you scratching your head trying to figured out what the author was trying to write. If I had a second complaint, it would be the rushed ending. He had a beautifully constructed world, and a compelling story with memorable characters; but for some reason he chose to smash what he would normally take 200 chapters to create into 20. It left some characters feeling more powerful/weaker than they should have been, and left many plot lines in the story unanswered. It felt like watching Picasso make a painting and then letting a kindergartener paint the last few details. All in all though, I would still recommend this book. It’s a wonderful read, and it ties in beautifully with the other pieces of the series. Solid 4/5
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From vengeful dragon to spiteful and pathetic human. 1k years old dragon but thinking like human with brain damage, there is no trace of wisdom and might from his previous dragon self. What a trash mc.
Coming from MVS at the point of Quinn reaching and speaking to the tablet, I switched to this completely until finished before I will return to MVS. I’m grateful I did as the story and background is amazing. I wish I could read MWS before finishing MVS. But I don’t have the coins for that lol
Story of my life: I just released my new book. it's an adaptation of MVS and Jksmanga ideas and writing skills were also brought in, i spent years reading his works. so i could one day create something like his. he is the best mentor, have been on him ever since i was 12 till now (am 16 almost 17). Check it out = BloodLink
I got hooked reading My Vampire system and then I had to learn more about Ray & Lenny/Richard Eno. It's so satisfying to read it all come full circle to the end with Quinn in MVS. I'm excited to read the final book after Quinn where the Talen family will continue
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Binged the entire thing in one go as I was in too deep to not finished it. The grammar errors were very apparent when the story was trying to follow other characters besides the main one. Rays character was fantastic as he maintained his demeanor consistently having Sylve counterbalance he’s old man vibes was a pleasant laugh. Although she is the main female interest she’s really got mad sidelined through the majority of the story. Rays friends had a lot more character development to them even though they very minimal backstory. the time skips here extremely abrupt and constantly back tracking felt like extreme plot amor to boost the main character to have enough power for tough battles. As a story to introduce the lore of the novel it feels lacking in substance as a lot of details were not explored or addressed. Which I hope will be brought up in both my werewolf system and my vampire system as it seems like it probably be used as potential future plot armor. I look forward to seeing how these event affect aspect of the other novel seeing as I’m started to notice all the small details that have already been used as well as an future Easter eggs yet to come. Story: 8/10 Grammar: 6/10 Descriptive language: 7/10 main character: 6/10 Jack: 10/10 Gary: 8/10 Sylvia: 5/10
The story’s overall good but 1 harry was let go 2 you have ray leave without speaking or anything 3 hes watching over the years of just letting issues happen we don’t know where noir is at that sen before being reincarnated had more logic to him🤦🏿♂️
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Great overall book the ending seemed closer out fast but was designed to be more then one book. And last chapters MC was in and out. First 200 chapters do suck you into the book.
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I can’t believe I did this but with only the last arc of the book I thought it was over and 3 years later I just happened to notice another arc to finish up so just when I got nothing too read I can restart this book and finally get that ending it’s the little things in life that get me through
amazing read , ending was sudden. Very good story with lots details and great fights.
Story of a beta -Red Dragon- whose all race been hunted down by humans, he is the last dragon. As a revenge he starts to hunt down humans. A goddess kills and reincarnates him as human. All the revenge goes to trash. He starts to protect his race's butchers and ppl liked this bullcr*p. So simply story of a sub cuck who likes to serve his tormentors. Sissies will love it i'm sure. Not my cup of tea.
I love how beautifully this bled into vampire system, that was unexpectedly heart warming
Really appreciate the storyline, wish it could have been more fluid. The ending was rushed and we didn't get enough peace time storyline. Overall a great read.
I loved My Dragon System. Honestly I really couldn't put it down!Unfortunately, I had to frequently interpret some of the intended words and grammar throughout, but the meaning was usually pretty clear.And I love how it ties into his other works. But the ending really did need more work. It just didn't feel right. Kind of unsatisfying that.But the journey was a blast! I highly recommend this story. I'm so very glad that I read it.I'm looking forward to reading more of the saga in My Werewolf System and My Vampire System.
no começo a história é interessante, mas ali pelo capítulo 450 ela vira uma bagunça completa onde cada capítulo parecia durar horas(num mal sentido)
This was a great read. I enjoyed following along as the story developed. It was well written.
You captured me. I hoped for the story to keep on going more. I’m almost done with My Vampire System . I wanted to complete reading it right after this one, but now I don’t know. I thank you for all you have put into this story . Looking 👀 forward to the other stories.
What happens when a dragon who had to watch as all of his kin were killed at the humans' mercy before finally falling himself and being reincarnated as a member of such detestable race? Sen, who convinced himself that he will destroy humanity as revenge, finds himself as part of this complicated species that constantly tests his true intentions. There is the kind and loving family along with agreeable friends on one side, and the rest of the world on another. The once-dragon is stuck in a conundrum where his newfound care for certain individuals is constantly clashing against his ever increasing list of reasons to end humanity, and kindness is losing. The story could have been more well written, as grammar mistakes aren't that rare to find – some repeated so often they make me question whether it is my knowledge of English which is lacking. The story of the world around the protagonist could have been better exposed, and so could the development of the story itself – though I don't particularly have any insightful recommendation for this. Character development is without a doubt the best this story has to offer, everyone has their own qualities and their own thinking, their actions are also always in accordance to their beliefs and absolutely do not need the MC to do anything with their lives. Promising story overall with qualities rarely seen on web novels, plus Sen's moments of senseless arrogance are definitely entertaining!
Book started good but as it continued the writting quality improved and I am more attached to reading it as it goes.
Loved the book, have already read my vampire system and can’t wait to read my werewolf system nex!!! Few mistakes here and there with names and words but overall a great read!!
I’m a fan of the trilogy so I’m pretty biased but this was an awesome story! I definitely recommend all of them - My drain system, my werewolf system, and my vampire system!
This was a much appreciated reprieve from the utter devastation that hurled me in to a deep dark pit of depression upon finishing MVS. It was like my world ended with the story. I had nothing to occupy my every waking minute and also.... I was just plain heartbroken. For reasons I shall cover over in my review for THAT story. The point is I haven't fallen in love with a pantheon of characters like this.... Since.... I'll be honest, Harry Potter. However if I'm being completely real... Those pale in comparison to this. The character development is unbelievable. The depth of personality, the raw very real emotions that are depicted. These characters have become very real for me. I do not think I have EVER cried during a book over the stories or characters. I'm emotionally attached. I swear I am stable lol. It is truly just a testament to the incredible writing and magical imagination of the author. I was sucked in and after getting lost in the words for a couple weeks, I was chewed up and spit back out. Left cut open, bleeding, and raw AF. I cannot recommend this or any story by this author enough. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
I just started reading and I love it I just wish that he would put it on pocket FM like he did my vampire system I really want to listen to the audio books of all his work DUDE YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR OF ALL TIME
This book is just one in a series of great books by this author. I can't stop reading as the story has me captivated.
I really love this novel and it's the only novel in webnovel that I haven't dropped. The time skip with no improvement and the terrible grammars are things that I can ignore. It's because I really love reading ray's character development and his interaction with his friends. I noticed people comparing MDS to MVS, so i decided to read MVS, but dropped it because I lost interest. This is because quinn relies on his system too much, ray does the same, but it's different because it's his powers being sealed in the system. And even before ray got his system, he was already working hard to get stronger. Not only that but the amount of chapters in MVS is overwhelming and it felt unnecessary, while MDS has less chapters but it felt rushed. These are my opinions on the two novels though, so don't get mad at me if you disagree.
great story. but hate that I have pay to unlock chapters. that ends up costing a lot more than just buying a real book.too many ads too
This is truly a great story to read. The world building and characters in this book are truly memorable. The fact that it ties in so well with the other books in this series just sends me over the moon. That said, I have a real complaint with the series, and that is the poor grammar and construction of sentences. I would say 75-80% is good quality English, and then the other 20-25% is a garbled mess that usually leaves you scratching your head trying to figured out what the author was trying to write. If I had a second complaint, it would be the rushed ending. He had a beautifully constructed world, and a compelling story with memorable characters; but for some reason he chose to smash what he would normally take 200 chapters to create into 20. It left some characters feeling more powerful/weaker than they should have been, and left many plot lines in the story unanswered. It felt like watching Picasso make a painting and then letting a kindergartener paint the last few details. All in all though, I would still recommend this book. It’s a wonderful read, and it ties in beautifully with the other pieces of the series. Solid 4/5
Spoiler enthüllen From vengeful dragon to spiteful and pathetic human. 1k years old dragon but thinking like human with brain damage, there is no trace of wisdom and might from his previous dragon self. What a trash mc.
Coming from MVS at the point of Quinn reaching and speaking to the tablet, I switched to this completely until finished before I will return to MVS. I’m grateful I did as the story and background is amazing. I wish I could read MWS before finishing MVS. But I don’t have the coins for that lol
Story of my life: I just released my new book. it's an adaptation of MVS and Jksmanga ideas and writing skills were also brought in, i spent years reading his works. so i could one day create something like his. he is the best mentor, have been on him ever since i was 12 till now (am 16 almost 17). Check it out = BloodLink
I got hooked reading My Vampire system and then I had to learn more about Ray & Lenny/Richard Eno. It's so satisfying to read it all come full circle to the end with Quinn in MVS. I'm excited to read the final book after Quinn where the Talen family will continue
Spoiler enthüllen Binged the entire thing in one go as I was in too deep to not finished it. The grammar errors were very apparent when the story was trying to follow other characters besides the main one. Rays character was fantastic as he maintained his demeanor consistently having Sylve counterbalance he’s old man vibes was a pleasant laugh. Although she is the main female interest she’s really got mad sidelined through the majority of the story. Rays friends had a lot more character development to them even though they very minimal backstory. the time skips here extremely abrupt and constantly back tracking felt like extreme plot amor to boost the main character to have enough power for tough battles. As a story to introduce the lore of the novel it feels lacking in substance as a lot of details were not explored or addressed. Which I hope will be brought up in both my werewolf system and my vampire system as it seems like it probably be used as potential future plot armor. I look forward to seeing how these event affect aspect of the other novel seeing as I’m started to notice all the small details that have already been used as well as an future Easter eggs yet to come. Story: 8/10 Grammar: 6/10 Descriptive language: 7/10 main character: 6/10 Jack: 10/10 Gary: 8/10 Sylvia: 5/10
The story’s overall good but 1 harry was let go 2 you have ray leave without speaking or anything 3 hes watching over the years of just letting issues happen we don’t know where noir is at that sen before being reincarnated had more logic to him🤦🏿♂️
Spoiler enthüllen Great overall book the ending seemed closer out fast but was designed to be more then one book. And last chapters MC was in and out. First 200 chapters do suck you into the book.
Spoiler enthüllen I can’t believe I did this but with only the last arc of the book I thought it was over and 3 years later I just happened to notice another arc to finish up so just when I got nothing too read I can restart this book and finally get that ending it’s the little things in life that get me through
amazing read , ending was sudden. Very good story with lots details and great fights.
Story of a beta -Red Dragon- whose all race been hunted down by humans, he is the last dragon. As a revenge he starts to hunt down humans. A goddess kills and reincarnates him as human. All the revenge goes to trash. He starts to protect his race's butchers and ppl liked this bullcr*p. So simply story of a sub cuck who likes to serve his tormentors. Sissies will love it i'm sure. Not my cup of tea.
I love how beautifully this bled into vampire system, that was unexpectedly heart warming
Really appreciate the storyline, wish it could have been more fluid. The ending was rushed and we didn't get enough peace time storyline. Overall a great read.
I loved My Dragon System. Honestly I really couldn't put it down!Unfortunately, I had to frequently interpret some of the intended words and grammar throughout, but the meaning was usually pretty clear.And I love how it ties into his other works. But the ending really did need more work. It just didn't feel right. Kind of unsatisfying that.But the journey was a blast! I highly recommend this story. I'm so very glad that I read it.I'm looking forward to reading more of the saga in My Werewolf System and My Vampire System.
no começo a história é interessante, mas ali pelo capítulo 450 ela vira uma bagunça completa onde cada capítulo parecia durar horas(num mal sentido)
This was a great read. I enjoyed following along as the story developed. It was well written.
You captured me. I hoped for the story to keep on going more. I’m almost done with My Vampire System . I wanted to complete reading it right after this one, but now I don’t know. I thank you for all you have put into this story . Looking 👀 forward to the other stories.
What happens when a dragon who had to watch as all of his kin were killed at the humans' mercy before finally falling himself and being reincarnated as a member of such detestable race? Sen, who convinced himself that he will destroy humanity as revenge, finds himself as part of this complicated species that constantly tests his true intentions. There is the kind and loving family along with agreeable friends on one side, and the rest of the world on another. The once-dragon is stuck in a conundrum where his newfound care for certain individuals is constantly clashing against his ever increasing list of reasons to end humanity, and kindness is losing. The story could have been more well written, as grammar mistakes aren't that rare to find – some repeated so often they make me question whether it is my knowledge of English which is lacking. The story of the world around the protagonist could have been better exposed, and so could the development of the story itself – though I don't particularly have any insightful recommendation for this. Character development is without a doubt the best this story has to offer, everyone has their own qualities and their own thinking, their actions are also always in accordance to their beliefs and absolutely do not need the MC to do anything with their lives. Promising story overall with qualities rarely seen on web novels, plus Sen's moments of senseless arrogance are definitely entertaining!