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What MC does is to be stronger and go to another world without or with a small part of the strength that he collected, then he begins to gather strength and knowledge and enters into romantic relationships and begins to gather strength and knowledge and moves again with a small part of this strength and it repeats to the point that I get bored
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The story was honestly really nice fixing a few mistakes here and there would Make it better.. Kinda liked the idea of the MC no having everything from everyworld and just one thing and the mission system wqs kinda nice as well!
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me when I first read this without reading the reviews which was mistake because NTR Alert 📢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
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This is very very autistic.................................................................................................................
so if you had more viewers, would you pick it back up? ............................................................................................................................................
I already left a review earlier having read the SAO arc and now leaving the review getting through part way through Naruto. There is no character development. There is no story development. It is a summary of what the author seems to want to have done in each anime. Rushing through the mc's decisions makes the entire read feel like an attempt at a trailer of a movie series.
To get things out of the way, I've only finished the SAO arc so my knowledge may not be complete. However from what I gathered, this is the most rushed webnovel I've ever read. The entire SAO arc was speed through like we're watching a bad trailer for a movie that already reveals the entire plot. There is little to no character development in what I've read so far and even the story is rushed.
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Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash
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Add romance and r 18 man there no romance in this it getting boring but i still love it no matter what it your opinion on the subject and if romance go to attack on Titan
Only got about 10chapters in before I decided to drop it. Writing: Sucks, as everything seems pretty rushed and nondescript. Doesn't really describe characters or specifics, and thereby comes across as more of a generally summary as to how MC goes from 0 to a Gary Stu. Development: Pretty much rushed, due to timeskips all over the place. MC goes from being 2 to 5, then teenage, and all we really glean in the story is topics he's trained or a company he's founded. Even after jumping into Aincrad, there's no real character or game breakdown. He basically just enters and solos or masters everything with AI assistance, and the only thing described in depth was a few boss fights, if that. All in all, if you can ignore the typos or writing quality, you might enjoy the novel since it's a decent wish-fulfillment OP MC kinda story.
Well... Not bad. It's like im reading a summary than an actual story. The grammar is cancerous and 5% is almost unintelligible. It's not bad thou. I want to know more about the MC's thought but it's quite rushed.
This is very amazing fanfic..... I like the Mc, his goal isn't to save people, fighting for his love or his benefits..... Keep going author
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This is a good fan fiction. My only concern would be the grammar. It's sometimes hard to read/understand that it takes the immersion to the story off.
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Need more dialogue and when there is dialogue you need to slow it down by adding a description of why he is saying what he said or add some way to describe the MC emotion.
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Great! Finally someone wrote Fast pacing novel I hope you don't get swayed by Negative comments or reviews Thanks for your hard work 👍👍👍👍
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i just started reading this and i think its better than alot of stories in my library, keep up the good work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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What MC does is to be stronger and go to another world without or with a small part of the strength that he collected, then he begins to gather strength and knowledge and enters into romantic relationships and begins to gather strength and knowledge and moves again with a small part of this strength and it repeats to the point that I get bored
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The story was honestly really nice fixing a few mistakes here and there would Make it better.. Kinda liked the idea of the MC no having everything from everyworld and just one thing and the mission system wqs kinda nice as well!
Rhfffjfjfhkfkdnfibjc kfjckcgjvnfkjf I have to go to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town you in the you yu yu 😂 I don't understand 🤣 u I t
me when I first read this without reading the reviews which was mistake because NTR Alert 📢 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
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Spoiler enthüllen This is very very autistic.................................................................................................................
so if you had more viewers, would you pick it back up? ............................................................................................................................................
I already left a review earlier having read the SAO arc and now leaving the review getting through part way through Naruto. There is no character development. There is no story development. It is a summary of what the author seems to want to have done in each anime. Rushing through the mc's decisions makes the entire read feel like an attempt at a trailer of a movie series.
To get things out of the way, I've only finished the SAO arc so my knowledge may not be complete. However from what I gathered, this is the most rushed webnovel I've ever read. The entire SAO arc was speed through like we're watching a bad trailer for a movie that already reveals the entire plot. There is little to no character development in what I've read so far and even the story is rushed.
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Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash Splish splash 140 character limit is trash
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super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good super good
Add romance and r 18 man there no romance in this it getting boring but i still love it no matter what it your opinion on the subject and if romance go to attack on Titan
Only got about 10chapters in before I decided to drop it. Writing: Sucks, as everything seems pretty rushed and nondescript. Doesn't really describe characters or specifics, and thereby comes across as more of a generally summary as to how MC goes from 0 to a Gary Stu. Development: Pretty much rushed, due to timeskips all over the place. MC goes from being 2 to 5, then teenage, and all we really glean in the story is topics he's trained or a company he's founded. Even after jumping into Aincrad, there's no real character or game breakdown. He basically just enters and solos or masters everything with AI assistance, and the only thing described in depth was a few boss fights, if that. All in all, if you can ignore the typos or writing quality, you might enjoy the novel since it's a decent wish-fulfillment OP MC kinda story.
Well... Not bad. It's like im reading a summary than an actual story. The grammar is cancerous and 5% is almost unintelligible. It's not bad thou. I want to know more about the MC's thought but it's quite rushed.
This is very amazing fanfic..... I like the Mc, his goal isn't to save people, fighting for his love or his benefits..... Keep going author
Spoiler enthüllen This is a good fan fiction. My only concern would be the grammar. It's sometimes hard to read/understand that it takes the immersion to the story off.
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Need more dialogue and when there is dialogue you need to slow it down by adding a description of why he is saying what he said or add some way to describe the MC emotion.
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Great! Finally someone wrote Fast pacing novel I hope you don't get swayed by Negative comments or reviews Thanks for your hard work 👍👍👍👍
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i just started reading this and i think its better than alot of stories in my library, keep up the good work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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