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seeing there are so many 5 star fake reviews might as well rate it 1 star because i already know what to expect from the story if a story is full of 5 star fake review it's most definitely TRASH
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Realy great story. Definitely worth a try. @Author There is a very consistent spelling mistake. It should be “since” not “sense” when you want to give a reason for something.
Been reading forever. Unique characters and challenges are showcased throughout the book. The MC is fully fleshed out and so are most of his friends. Honestly, a delightful read for any crowd.
Really enjoyed the novel so far. The MC is more realistic than some others I've read imo bc not everyone defaults into a "me versus the world" mentality when this kind of situation happens. The progression is good, and I'm liking the world building. The system only giving buffs to girls was a little questionable, but from chapter 100 on, I didn't really notice the discrepancy in levels. Good stuff, and thanks for not making it paywalled.
I actually really like this book. I think the author has teally thought out the background and the characters, but I must say that I wish the author would get an editor for the grammatical errors (such as using “sense” where the word “since” should be used). However, I am still able to enjoy reading the storyline.
Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it. As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old). Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinates or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him. Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one. The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world. TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!
Writing quality-5 Updating stability-5 Story development-3.5 Character design-2 World Background-5 Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.
Uma leitura bastante divertida até agora, o primeiro volume foi ótimo. No segundo volume aquele mini arco de treinamento me deu um medo pq estava me lembrando demais de uma história que eu acho que o nome era sword sovereign, aonde aconte o mesmo plot de o mc passar o começo sem upar, com o autor constantemente mencionando como os niveis não são tudo, apenas pra dps aparecer um vilãozinho aleatório que simplemente suprime o mc com sua aura de lvl superior, mesmo que o autor tenha mencionado 1000 vezes que lvls não são tudo, e estupra uma a seguidora do mc na frente dele e aquela desculpa patética de ser humano do mc n faz porra nenhum, nem usa sua ''super op'' intenção que pode matar esse lixo e simplesmente assiste ela sendo estrupada. Desculpa o desabafo kkkk
QUESTION Is there any romance coming up in the novel?? OTHER THAN THAT ALL ROUNDED AMAZING STORY TILL NOW AND HOPE FOR MORE CHAPTERS ASAP COZ I'M CATCHING UP :p
A hell of a nice novel HONESTLY + Mc has iq + worldly developed without mc + other char have some story and background + no writing errors + good grasp of timing and + no over narrative theme
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The only thing i dont like is in the early story is that only female can become stronger through fights. But overall it a good movel.[img=recommend]
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die me this is one of the best stories tot read at the moment. The build up is a bit on the slow side bit this does not make the story any less adicting. the updates are stable and of good Quality. I reccomend this book to any and all readers.
NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤
Not a perfect score but based only on the typos which will affecting the reading experience in really simple way, I found many of these but should you read it, doesn't really cause major concern. The story on the other side has been planned out really detailed to the smallest things. This is a good book about character progression and how each character has their own personality which is a breath of fresh wind. The story has been progressing well and I noticed it's still the tip of the iceberg.
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I loved this story and all that goes with it! It was different than what I was expecting but it was still a great read. The one thing I would nitpick at while reading this all in a couple days, is the fights. Sometimes they just drag on and on! There is nearly 100 chapters of fighting and dungeon diving in less than 300 chapters.
Chapter 44 and grammar is still bad. When it comes to easy conversations it S not a problem but at complex sentences I need to read about 3 times to get the gist of it and it destroys the flow of the STORY really badly. Hope it gets better after volume 1 if not I will drop because it s not worth reading when I can understand what the hell they talk about. Story is fine even if the MC is a bit annoying.
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Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre
Well written, coherent plot and pretty unique characters. Some very minor over-explanations along with MC being consistently overpowered. Well worth the read.
Author can i get a little spoiler i haven’t read it yet since everyone is saying the mc is hero wannabe and is quite behind others in terms of power my question is will he stay naive till the end And will he never stand out like be like stronger than most other people I’m not really into weak naive mc so if u can just answer those 2 question I’ll be grateful
Is he going to be a hero to the end or will we see some hardships to harden him later on? Please answer me.
The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. 😎
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MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.
Humanist MC characters, not like selfish violent maniacs In most similar stories, the main character is depicted as a superhuman who enjoys the role of a dictator who is obsessed with creating a god figure who must be worshiped, while those who do not follow the main character's wishes must suffer the fate of being ignored or exterminated.
eu até gosto. Mas está muito repetitivo eu até gosto. Mas está muito repetitivo eu até gosto. Mas está muito repetitivo eu até gosto. Mas está muito repetitivo
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seeing there are so many 5 star fake reviews might as well rate it 1 star because i already know what to expect from the story if a story is full of 5 star fake review it's most definitely TRASH
Spoiler enthüllen This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Realy great story. Definitely worth a try. @Author There is a very consistent spelling mistake. It should be “since” not “sense” when you want to give a reason for something.
Been reading forever. Unique characters and challenges are showcased throughout the book. The MC is fully fleshed out and so are most of his friends. Honestly, a delightful read for any crowd.
Really enjoyed the novel so far. The MC is more realistic than some others I've read imo bc not everyone defaults into a "me versus the world" mentality when this kind of situation happens. The progression is good, and I'm liking the world building. The system only giving buffs to girls was a little questionable, but from chapter 100 on, I didn't really notice the discrepancy in levels. Good stuff, and thanks for not making it paywalled.
I actually really like this book. I think the author has teally thought out the background and the characters, but I must say that I wish the author would get an editor for the grammatical errors (such as using “sense” where the word “since” should be used). However, I am still able to enjoy reading the storyline.
Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it. As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old). Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinates or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him. Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one. The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world. TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!
Writing quality-5 Updating stability-5 Story development-3.5 Character design-2 World Background-5 Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.
Uma leitura bastante divertida até agora, o primeiro volume foi ótimo. No segundo volume aquele mini arco de treinamento me deu um medo pq estava me lembrando demais de uma história que eu acho que o nome era sword sovereign, aonde aconte o mesmo plot de o mc passar o começo sem upar, com o autor constantemente mencionando como os niveis não são tudo, apenas pra dps aparecer um vilãozinho aleatório que simplemente suprime o mc com sua aura de lvl superior, mesmo que o autor tenha mencionado 1000 vezes que lvls não são tudo, e estupra uma a seguidora do mc na frente dele e aquela desculpa patética de ser humano do mc n faz porra nenhum, nem usa sua ''super op'' intenção que pode matar esse lixo e simplesmente assiste ela sendo estrupada. Desculpa o desabafo kkkk
QUESTION Is there any romance coming up in the novel?? OTHER THAN THAT ALL ROUNDED AMAZING STORY TILL NOW AND HOPE FOR MORE CHAPTERS ASAP COZ I'M CATCHING UP :p
A hell of a nice novel HONESTLY + Mc has iq + worldly developed without mc + other char have some story and background + no writing errors + good grasp of timing and + no over narrative theme
exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
The only thing i dont like is in the early story is that only female can become stronger through fights. But overall it a good movel.[img=recommend]
Spoiler enthüllen die me this is one of the best stories tot read at the moment. The build up is a bit on the slow side bit this does not make the story any less adicting. the updates are stable and of good Quality. I reccomend this book to any and all readers.
NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤 NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤NEED CHAPTERS REALLY 🤤
Not a perfect score but based only on the typos which will affecting the reading experience in really simple way, I found many of these but should you read it, doesn't really cause major concern. The story on the other side has been planned out really detailed to the smallest things. This is a good book about character progression and how each character has their own personality which is a breath of fresh wind. The story has been progressing well and I noticed it's still the tip of the iceberg.
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I loved this story and all that goes with it! It was different than what I was expecting but it was still a great read. The one thing I would nitpick at while reading this all in a couple days, is the fights. Sometimes they just drag on and on! There is nearly 100 chapters of fighting and dungeon diving in less than 300 chapters.
Chapter 44 and grammar is still bad. When it comes to easy conversations it S not a problem but at complex sentences I need to read about 3 times to get the gist of it and it destroys the flow of the STORY really badly. Hope it gets better after volume 1 if not I will drop because it s not worth reading when I can understand what the hell they talk about. Story is fine even if the MC is a bit annoying.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre
Well written, coherent plot and pretty unique characters. Some very minor over-explanations along with MC being consistently overpowered. Well worth the read.
Author can i get a little spoiler i haven’t read it yet since everyone is saying the mc is hero wannabe and is quite behind others in terms of power my question is will he stay naive till the end And will he never stand out like be like stronger than most other people I’m not really into weak naive mc so if u can just answer those 2 question I’ll be grateful
Is he going to be a hero to the end or will we see some hardships to harden him later on? Please answer me.
The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. 😎
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.
Humanist MC characters, not like selfish violent maniacs In most similar stories, the main character is depicted as a superhuman who enjoys the role of a dictator who is obsessed with creating a god figure who must be worshiped, while those who do not follow the main character's wishes must suffer the fate of being ignored or exterminated.