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I really enjoyed this book. One of the better reincarnation stories and although the book isn’t technically finished I liked how the author did a final chapter outlining how the book would have gone. I’d still love to actually see the rest of the book someday!
I am happy to find some work with Indian culture. My head started to hurt from reading all those Chinese propaganda work stories hope more indian writers take interest in light novels
I really wanted to give the Author 5 stars eventhough the grammar needed a bit more quality, however it was still readable. The story was quite interesting for someone who just started getting into sci-fi, i would definitely recommend reading this novel :)
Good stuff I just saw it on another site and I tried to look more into it and found it here and I think this story has so much potential and is more original then the most where people just reincarnate and go back in time but not on this scale or this level I think the story can be and hopefully will be really great good luck on your journey
We have a MC who suffered the pain of being dematerialized in his death and then endured more than two billion years of disputes where his soul and mind were strengthened, and then we are presented with the character of Juno, basically a crutch for when the MC needs and that he received knowledge about the powers of the MC and of human history, things that obviously the MC himself could have received directly, or is that what we learned from all this? that we have a strong MC that the author is making it weaker for us to push our throat into a valid reason for the existence of Juno, his future romantic partner, and that is simply a drug !!! this is making history lose a lot of quality sincerely !! sad to see such a good story lose potential as a result of such nonsense !!! Besides, the story is very good and well worked in general.
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This was a good story but ended very short he could at least go for 200 chapters. At the end of was rushed as he wanted to finish the story.
Great work here. This is one of the few books i enjoy reading here in webnovel. Hoping thst others think the same too and expect that the quality of work being done here continuous to improve. The concept and world building are something i am very fond of and i am sure much research and fact checks were done to keep the story in track.
Awesome novel. Slow and steady is the way. Sir you just get 5 stars from me as a thank you for this amazing story. Now i only wish it was in the universe will live in.
Very good book. Although the flow is slightly missing. Unlike other books there is no monotonous drain and thus the book is very captivating and interesting. We don’t have 10 chapters for one stupid thing. If you want a very quick and stable development with amazing new ideas.
The synopsis and the possible potential for the story were amazing, new content with new ideas but the execution was really poor. The MC to improve society starts building microchips and satellites in 300 BC and it makes it so easy he just skips every industrial revolution and just builds it, then he spends chapters doing strange bull**** instead of improving society or training like building a jukebox so his dad can listen to electro music. Fuck off just say that in 10 years there will be spaceships that he built with a random meteorite he found when he needed it. There is no actual progression, he casually assists people by giving some change to the poor but never actually thinks about it, the tedious work is all left to his father, also WTF really, his first kill he seems to become a bipolar crazy men who even if he has the power to destroy a boulder with a punch he still needs to lure and trick people to kill them, it's just ****ed up. Can someone tell me what the **** happened to one that is supposed to be one of the elites of the future, a soldier who has studied for years and wtf happened that when he absorbs souls for years, when he wakes up he just suddenly became the most talkative and eccentric men ever who just doesn't think
Amazing! Probably one of the best stories I have ever read. I must say I can't wait for future story development of this Novel. Thank you for this amazing novel.
Overall, this an interesting story very quickly ruined by an extremely annoying side character. One that will be in every chapter from their introduction on. Chatty youg girl who both enjoys insulting the MC and has essentially no use other than to control the MC. Greeeat. I'll drop it here. Otherwise, the story seems to be off to an interesting start, the MC is a blank slate currently (his ability to survive is a bit of a stretch given how mediocre he apparently is as a person before.) Might be to the taste of others though I have seen more than a few comments making the same complaint.
I found this book from Zhanye's review section. Best decision was to check this out. The book is really immersive and I personally don't mind the English errors so it's a full five stars for me😄
O would like to mention that the son of Chandragupta Maurya and father of Ashoka Samrat was not so well known... His predecessor and successor were a bit too outstanding....... Ty
This novel is good for the readers who loves to read the novel which has overpowered mc with a functioning brain. It also seems like author done a great research about mauryan dynasty and Hindu mythology. All in end this novel great.
2.2. Mc has to conquest the universe but if he is a bad guy and kill innocent then a little 10yo b*tch will kill him. Nt only is the loli a filler, she is also useless. Who care about human story ? He is a god f*ck the period. FULL of curiosity, how do you dominate the universe without killing any innocent ? I mean there must be innocent everywhere even the army of aliens no ? Is the subordinate responsable of his orders?
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As you can see I my reading status is at chapter 16 and this won´t change. As an enraptured reader of my review you´re asking yourself:"Why wouldn´t you read this seemingly really good story?" and I will answer this as good as I can. First are "Superpowers" and the Mc has more than enough of those.. Seriously more than enough! He was introduced as someone who fights so that he can life. So why give him such powerfull abilitys? I don´t even know the number of abilitys he has, because the Author put those in like they are common plebbles. He has an ability to control water, another one for fire, another one for this and that. If you really want to give your Mc an ability than please one that evolves constantly with the Mc, where the Mc must understand und use his ability to be able to use it... Second, why do you give him all knowledge of humans and aliens of an entire universal war? Not only overpowered but also omniscient... Why not make him straight away a God? Third was an personal trigger point. He said that religion only divides humans. He introduced himself because of this not as an god-child... and a couple of chapters later, he says that he doesn´t want to stop someone, who spread an religion... Why? This Story is nothing new in it´s making. Someone reincarnating with knowledge and powers far behind comprehension is nothing new and that he wants to change the future because he knows that something gonna happen, is also not something original. Sci-fi is only in the first chapters there and not afterwards because he reincarnated in someone who lived 300 b.c. ... A solid two to three star rating is more than enough for a story which isn´t that great and not even near really top 5 star storys..
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Just finished this and i found it very interesting, high hopes for the next chapters to come. Very interested in the little lion cub turning into what's shown in the main art of the novel.
I would write a proper review, but I can’t be bothered. Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
this is shockingly alot better than i expected, and ill be honest i was on the fence reading this because of the title, anyway. story dialogue especially starts out a little rough, and it kinda still is, the creation of things is also a little off to say the least. but if you look past that the story flows really nicely, and this novel doesnt really focus on the creation of technology so i cant really fault a guy for not caring about something he is not interested in. good novel
Very good story 😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』 I think it's alright if I rate your novel 5 stars right? After all what reader and fellow author in their right mind would hate your beloved own child?! All I wanna say is, thank you for writing your novel. Please keep on fighting on, my friend! Have a wonderful day. 『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』
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I would have never thought that I could find a novel this well articulated while simultaneously having a unique and original idea that surpasses my imagination. This is a precious gold bar in the (mostly) trash world that is Webnovel.
Another novel worthy of spending my time..... And the MC is from India...... Hehe...... Love kingdom building novel aso please suggest me some more of that..... Hehe....... Will be following this..... Thanks for the novel author San......
Wow!!!!!! I knew it.......indian are quite talented. I love your work... great story.... great characters and greater goals.. Keep it up and i am waiting for the mass release.
It's a very interesting book with good development of characters so far. I like thar the story takes in a a world we are familiar with. It's a nice mix of scfi and magic. Looking forward to the next chapters
What would you get if you combine saiki kusuo's abilities + Reincarnation + Indian Iron age history + kingdom building = an amazingly entertaining and interesting story. Honestly I learned a lot about history and sometimes about science. A good plot and fine narration. A true hidden gem.
I think it's alright if I rate my novel 5 stars right? After all what mother would hate her own baby. All I wanna say is, thank you for reading my novel. Please leave a review if you liked it. Have a wonderful day.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really enjoyed this book. One of the better reincarnation stories and although the book isn’t technically finished I liked how the author did a final chapter outlining how the book would have gone. I’d still love to actually see the rest of the book someday!
I am happy to find some work with Indian culture. My head started to hurt from reading all those Chinese propaganda work stories hope more indian writers take interest in light novels
I really wanted to give the Author 5 stars eventhough the grammar needed a bit more quality, however it was still readable. The story was quite interesting for someone who just started getting into sci-fi, i would definitely recommend reading this novel :)
Good stuff I just saw it on another site and I tried to look more into it and found it here and I think this story has so much potential and is more original then the most where people just reincarnate and go back in time but not on this scale or this level I think the story can be and hopefully will be really great good luck on your journey
We have a MC who suffered the pain of being dematerialized in his death and then endured more than two billion years of disputes where his soul and mind were strengthened, and then we are presented with the character of Juno, basically a crutch for when the MC needs and that he received knowledge about the powers of the MC and of human history, things that obviously the MC himself could have received directly, or is that what we learned from all this? that we have a strong MC that the author is making it weaker for us to push our throat into a valid reason for the existence of Juno, his future romantic partner, and that is simply a drug !!! this is making history lose a lot of quality sincerely !! sad to see such a good story lose potential as a result of such nonsense !!! Besides, the story is very good and well worked in general.
Spoiler enthüllen This was a good story but ended very short he could at least go for 200 chapters. At the end of was rushed as he wanted to finish the story.
Great work here. This is one of the few books i enjoy reading here in webnovel. Hoping thst others think the same too and expect that the quality of work being done here continuous to improve. The concept and world building are something i am very fond of and i am sure much research and fact checks were done to keep the story in track.
Awesome novel. Slow and steady is the way. Sir you just get 5 stars from me as a thank you for this amazing story. Now i only wish it was in the universe will live in.
Very good book. Although the flow is slightly missing. Unlike other books there is no monotonous drain and thus the book is very captivating and interesting. We don’t have 10 chapters for one stupid thing. If you want a very quick and stable development with amazing new ideas.
The synopsis and the possible potential for the story were amazing, new content with new ideas but the execution was really poor. The MC to improve society starts building microchips and satellites in 300 BC and it makes it so easy he just skips every industrial revolution and just builds it, then he spends chapters doing strange bull**** instead of improving society or training like building a jukebox so his dad can listen to electro music. Fuck off just say that in 10 years there will be spaceships that he built with a random meteorite he found when he needed it. There is no actual progression, he casually assists people by giving some change to the poor but never actually thinks about it, the tedious work is all left to his father, also WTF really, his first kill he seems to become a bipolar crazy men who even if he has the power to destroy a boulder with a punch he still needs to lure and trick people to kill them, it's just ****ed up. Can someone tell me what the **** happened to one that is supposed to be one of the elites of the future, a soldier who has studied for years and wtf happened that when he absorbs souls for years, when he wakes up he just suddenly became the most talkative and eccentric men ever who just doesn't think
Amazing! Probably one of the best stories I have ever read. I must say I can't wait for future story development of this Novel. Thank you for this amazing novel.
Overall, this an interesting story very quickly ruined by an extremely annoying side character. One that will be in every chapter from their introduction on. Chatty youg girl who both enjoys insulting the MC and has essentially no use other than to control the MC. Greeeat. I'll drop it here. Otherwise, the story seems to be off to an interesting start, the MC is a blank slate currently (his ability to survive is a bit of a stretch given how mediocre he apparently is as a person before.) Might be to the taste of others though I have seen more than a few comments making the same complaint.
I found this book from Zhanye's review section. Best decision was to check this out. The book is really immersive and I personally don't mind the English errors so it's a full five stars for me😄
O would like to mention that the son of Chandragupta Maurya and father of Ashoka Samrat was not so well known... His predecessor and successor were a bit too outstanding....... Ty
This novel is good for the readers who loves to read the novel which has overpowered mc with a functioning brain. It also seems like author done a great research about mauryan dynasty and Hindu mythology. All in end this novel great.
2.2. Mc has to conquest the universe but if he is a bad guy and kill innocent then a little 10yo b*tch will kill him. Nt only is the loli a filler, she is also useless. Who care about human story ? He is a god f*ck the period. FULL of curiosity, how do you dominate the universe without killing any innocent ? I mean there must be innocent everywhere even the army of aliens no ? Is the subordinate responsable of his orders?
Spoiler enthüllen As you can see I my reading status is at chapter 16 and this won´t change. As an enraptured reader of my review you´re asking yourself:"Why wouldn´t you read this seemingly really good story?" and I will answer this as good as I can. First are "Superpowers" and the Mc has more than enough of those.. Seriously more than enough! He was introduced as someone who fights so that he can life. So why give him such powerfull abilitys? I don´t even know the number of abilitys he has, because the Author put those in like they are common plebbles. He has an ability to control water, another one for fire, another one for this and that. If you really want to give your Mc an ability than please one that evolves constantly with the Mc, where the Mc must understand und use his ability to be able to use it... Second, why do you give him all knowledge of humans and aliens of an entire universal war? Not only overpowered but also omniscient... Why not make him straight away a God? Third was an personal trigger point. He said that religion only divides humans. He introduced himself because of this not as an god-child... and a couple of chapters later, he says that he doesn´t want to stop someone, who spread an religion... Why? This Story is nothing new in it´s making. Someone reincarnating with knowledge and powers far behind comprehension is nothing new and that he wants to change the future because he knows that something gonna happen, is also not something original. Sci-fi is only in the first chapters there and not afterwards because he reincarnated in someone who lived 300 b.c. ... A solid two to three star rating is more than enough for a story which isn´t that great and not even near really top 5 star storys..
Spoiler enthüllen Just finished this and i found it very interesting, high hopes for the next chapters to come. Very interested in the little lion cub turning into what's shown in the main art of the novel.
I would write a proper review, but I can’t be bothered. Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
this is shockingly alot better than i expected, and ill be honest i was on the fence reading this because of the title, anyway. story dialogue especially starts out a little rough, and it kinda still is, the creation of things is also a little off to say the least. but if you look past that the story flows really nicely, and this novel doesnt really focus on the creation of technology so i cant really fault a guy for not caring about something he is not interested in. good novel
Very good story 😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』 I think it's alright if I rate your novel 5 stars right? After all what reader and fellow author in their right mind would hate your beloved own child?! All I wanna say is, thank you for writing your novel. Please keep on fighting on, my friend! Have a wonderful day. 『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』
Spoiler enthüllen I would have never thought that I could find a novel this well articulated while simultaneously having a unique and original idea that surpasses my imagination. This is a precious gold bar in the (mostly) trash world that is Webnovel.
Another novel worthy of spending my time..... And the MC is from India...... Hehe...... Love kingdom building novel aso please suggest me some more of that..... Hehe....... Will be following this..... Thanks for the novel author San......
Wow!!!!!! I knew it.......indian are quite talented. I love your work... great story.... great characters and greater goals.. Keep it up and i am waiting for the mass release.
It's a very interesting book with good development of characters so far. I like thar the story takes in a a world we are familiar with. It's a nice mix of scfi and magic. Looking forward to the next chapters
What would you get if you combine saiki kusuo's abilities + Reincarnation + Indian Iron age history + kingdom building = an amazingly entertaining and interesting story. Honestly I learned a lot about history and sometimes about science. A good plot and fine narration. A true hidden gem.
I think it's alright if I rate my novel 5 stars right? After all what mother would hate her own baby. All I wanna say is, thank you for reading my novel. Please leave a review if you liked it. Have a wonderful day.