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This story I have read reread and reread again it's become my new obsession it's an amazing story full of everything my fantasy loving heart desires it's amazing and I absolutely adore both it and the author thank you for bringing this story into the world
World and character development is way off. Secondly I did not like the novel due to his character like some kind of demon nanny.
hey tbh I Stopped reading this book for a couple of years because it was so good. unlike other books where I Stop cause of cringe I Stopped because i was getting too sad reading your book. WELL DONE
positives: doesn't shy away from violence and other controversial activities much, such as feeding children human meat, etc. Negatives: nonsense world with a deck of cards that give power. nonsense plot armor character developments and extremely improbable card finding... it's as if the author just lives in a dream and puts the dream onto paper. Forget plot armor, it's a yellow brick road made of plot guidance. I made it to chapter 59 but could not get over the nonsense, so I quit.
Honestly one of, if not the best WebNovels I have ever read. The characters are well written and the story is so unique. I look forward to more of this!
It's the kind of book that makes you look at your watch and realize two days have gone by already....I recommend it to introverts and people with wild imaginations 🙂
My only complaint is the updates being so spaced out. You get so engrossed by the story, then your at the most recent stuff. [img=recommend][img=update]
Bad review simply because the author abandons works in progress to start something new. So disrespectful to his readers.
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I wonder just how many people stopped reading around the 270 mark. If you did, like this review.
after 400 chapters in, I can, in good faith, say this is the pinnacle of writing quality. awesome characters, awesome story, and a worthy daily read.
The one of my most favorite novels on this platform, by far. Had me in tears at multiple points. Wish updates were more frequent, but people have lives. It’s not often that I can say the world setting is a bit dark, but the story is delightfully wholesome. Makes an amazing palate cleanser, for all the...other novels I read.
Overall, I read until chapter 285. Then I dropped the novel. The MC suddenly lost all memory, everyone forgot about him, and all just because a "mortal" and normal enemy who could cast something like this. Makes no sense..I tried continue reading, but its just BS, sorry. You build up a story so much and this just ruins it for me. Dropped and deleted the novel for now. Sorry again. Too frustrating and THIS is not worth my money here on WN for these kind of chapters.
5 star book across the board for me. This is one of the best novels I've ever read, and it's had me hooked since I first read it. This is a W book, give it a try.
First of all I would like to say that I am by no means expert on this sort of literature, But in my opinion it's almost perfect. First of all, writing quality in this novel is almost a 5 star, what I dislike is just some minor detailszfor example almost every smile in this story is "wry" which in general is perfectly fine it's simply too much of it. And of course some spelling errors but that's only natural. Second of all, story development. Up until the "Beach Episode" arc, wchich is about 600 chapter(I think at least, sorry I'm too lazy too actually check) development was almost perfect, but since that moment for a while I have felt like author is trying to include way too many japanise Isekai clichés, wchich didn't happen often before, but I have a feeling that it was just for a moment and it's getting better by now(chapter 694 I currently am). Now that the character development is 5 star will surprise no one that actually read more then 10 first chapter, so I won't write anything about it. I can't say anything about updating stabilty so far, because I reached current chapter just before writing This, but from what I read in the comments it's fair to give it a 5 star as Well. And now the last but not the least, The world background. For me, it was good, but nothing origanl, just japanise Isekai with some changes, so i'd say it's okay, but nothing more. But since author menaged to get so far into the story without any visible mistakes and errors in This aspect for me it's solid 4 star. And that's all from me. Just a simple reminder that I am, by any means not a proffesional critic or anything like This, it's actually my first time writing a review for a novel, so don't take it seriously, I just wanted to say that I (inhale) RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU, AND I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. P.S I you read this far, I want to apologize for all the spelling or grammatical errors I made. I am writing it on a phone with very small screen, and I'm Still learning English, as it is not my native language. So thank you for the time you just probably wasted by reading all of this.
This book caught my attention and I read all chapters in about 2 months. I would love for more chapters released on a regular basis. I cant wait for more chapters on the imp, the children, the hero and the monster king. Please publish more.
Is this story close to being done?..........................................................................................................
Read till chapter 280- ish It is not bad, the concept is interesting and the world background is not bad. The way it is written is ok at the start, but at some point it just gets annoying. The words "annoying" and "really", atleast now in the later chapters, is used way too much that it ruins the reading experience for me. I assume it is used to get a laidback aura on the MC, which comes out some times, but mostly used too much. Personal preferences is to not have to much happen at once regarding the biggest background plot, which i believe worked out nicely in this novel. However, the smaller plots (the last one) is drawn out too much which also ruins the experience for me a bit. It is also written to detaild where it was not nessesary, again which makes the experience less enjoyable than wished for and, maybe just me, a bit hard to follow or bother to follow.
Out of all of the books that I have read i can safely say i have three favorites and this is one of those three. If this novel were to ever be made into a physical copy I would buy it with no hesitation just so that I own a copy of this.
I think this novel is great. First, I want to praise what it does well. The main character, Eiro, is flawed. He has issues, gets angry, and makes mistakes. I think that's important for a story like this, because it lets him grow. That is a core part of why I like the novel so much. Everyone is constantly improving, and the story is always moving forward along with the characters. I love the world, and I think that in terms of variety, it is very well put together. The magic is creative, and works well, but physical combat isn't neglected either. But of course, I also have my gripes with the novel. I think that sometimes, it takes very long for story threads to get neatly tied up, because the character roster is so wide that screentime is short. In the latter half of the novel, that also causes the pacing to suffer a little, since it simply needs more chapters for stories that don't follow the main one. I personally don't really mind that, especially when binging I think the pace is perfect, but on a weekly/monthly read it can get a little frustrating. Another slight issue I have is some plot threads simply seemingly not being resolved perfectly properly, and sometimes with the pacing, it can feel like the world kind of pauses when the MC needs it to. If Eiro is out exploring, some characters he regularly interacts with might just not appear for a couple dozen chapters. However, that doesn't mean the novel isn't worth a read. I thoroughly enjoyed it, all the way to the end. I think the story is well put together, the world is interesting and unique in a pot of ways, while using the best parts of classic and modern fantasy alike. The characters feel distinct, and easy to keep apart, and their tone of voice is conveyed very well. Sometimes it's a bit heavy on the characters complaining (slight spoiler: especially Eiro and Bavet, my god why can't Eiro just be a little more understanding holy heck) But it's great. I genuinely think it deserves a much higher rating than most other stories on webnovel, and I hope releases continue on in the future.
So, firstly, Thank you so much Author, the story at the start is absolutely amazing. it intrigued me to read on. BUT after which, when the mc adopted the children, the story just went downhill... well it's a bit before that actually. The cards that only have 52 pieces are in front of mc when he need it, the antagonists are like 1D character with no brain, this also include mc after he got the children, the general that holy empire/kingdom literally sent to negotiate with gods, and even 7 lords of sin. it's just frustrating how the story started so high above average standard. I understand that the mc supposed to be smart, but what about other people who live for tens or more of years. The world background is definitely lacking, the mc read books for years without using any actual knowledge he gain from them. when he read general knowledge book, kingdoms on the continent isn't even mention. it's like we switched Author even. All in all I liked it before, but I'm sorry Author-san, I need to drop this soon. btw I can't wait to see how great your 2nd book will be when you write it with experience from this book, I'm sure it would be great, keep writing!! btw(2), i think i will read it a bit more bc i just don't have anymore books to read lol
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Do you have a Patreon? I would love to help support in anyway to have this book continued. Please respond, I don't want to give money to webnovel when I could give to you directly
While I haven’t read that far into this story, it’s been amazing and well written throughout. It’s so cool to see our imp grow and develop, as a main character, he reminds me of the main character from To Your Eternity (although the story is thankful not as heart wrenching as that tearjerker). The supporting cast is also memorable, and the story moves at a great pace
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
I still cen't understand why MC gave shield to the "guy" with perfect defense skill?? I think he don't need more protection and he cen use his own body to protect others, so again why?!?
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this is quality if I had ever seen quality before. this is so good to read I'm afraid of catching up to the current chapters and having to wait for more
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
TL;DR: This novel is like having a steak dinner after only eating hamburger helper for months. First off, the writing itself is on point. Just talking about grammar, punctuation, and spelling, it reads like someone actually proofread the chapters, and there aren't noticeable errors that distract from reading! Many available webnovels seem to suffer from a lack of proofreading, but this one doesn't. Even if this author doesn't actually proofread. In addition, the author's voice and varied vocabulary ensure good sentence variety and proper flow in each chapter all the way to the end, upon which one realizes they've read a lot, but still want to keep going. Once again, good flow is often hard to find in webnovels, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Or rather, a bite of sirloin steak. Plus, the characters have tangible character development--the big brain imp from the first 100 chapters is very different than the one now. Not just in power and figure, but also in what he values and how he reacts to events now. Ok I'm tired of writing now--it's a good book, story good, characters good, author good, I def dont regret spending 3 days reading all the way through. Though my wallet hurts a bit, I'd do it again.
This story I have read reread and reread again it's become my new obsession it's an amazing story full of everything my fantasy loving heart desires it's amazing and I absolutely adore both it and the author thank you for bringing this story into the world
World and character development is way off. Secondly I did not like the novel due to his character like some kind of demon nanny.
hey tbh I Stopped reading this book for a couple of years because it was so good. unlike other books where I Stop cause of cringe I Stopped because i was getting too sad reading your book. WELL DONE
positives: doesn't shy away from violence and other controversial activities much, such as feeding children human meat, etc. Negatives: nonsense world with a deck of cards that give power. nonsense plot armor character developments and extremely improbable card finding... it's as if the author just lives in a dream and puts the dream onto paper. Forget plot armor, it's a yellow brick road made of plot guidance. I made it to chapter 59 but could not get over the nonsense, so I quit.
Honestly one of, if not the best WebNovels I have ever read. The characters are well written and the story is so unique. I look forward to more of this!
It's the kind of book that makes you look at your watch and realize two days have gone by already....I recommend it to introverts and people with wild imaginations 🙂
My only complaint is the updates being so spaced out. You get so engrossed by the story, then your at the most recent stuff. [img=recommend][img=update]
Bad review simply because the author abandons works in progress to start something new. So disrespectful to his readers.
Spoiler enthüllen I wonder just how many people stopped reading around the 270 mark. If you did, like this review.
after 400 chapters in, I can, in good faith, say this is the pinnacle of writing quality. awesome characters, awesome story, and a worthy daily read.
The one of my most favorite novels on this platform, by far. Had me in tears at multiple points. Wish updates were more frequent, but people have lives. It’s not often that I can say the world setting is a bit dark, but the story is delightfully wholesome. Makes an amazing palate cleanser, for all the...other novels I read.
Overall, I read until chapter 285. Then I dropped the novel. The MC suddenly lost all memory, everyone forgot about him, and all just because a "mortal" and normal enemy who could cast something like this. Makes no sense..I tried continue reading, but its just BS, sorry. You build up a story so much and this just ruins it for me. Dropped and deleted the novel for now. Sorry again. Too frustrating and THIS is not worth my money here on WN for these kind of chapters.
5 star book across the board for me. This is one of the best novels I've ever read, and it's had me hooked since I first read it. This is a W book, give it a try.
First of all I would like to say that I am by no means expert on this sort of literature, But in my opinion it's almost perfect. First of all, writing quality in this novel is almost a 5 star, what I dislike is just some minor detailszfor example almost every smile in this story is "wry" which in general is perfectly fine it's simply too much of it. And of course some spelling errors but that's only natural. Second of all, story development. Up until the "Beach Episode" arc, wchich is about 600 chapter(I think at least, sorry I'm too lazy too actually check) development was almost perfect, but since that moment for a while I have felt like author is trying to include way too many japanise Isekai clichés, wchich didn't happen often before, but I have a feeling that it was just for a moment and it's getting better by now(chapter 694 I currently am). Now that the character development is 5 star will surprise no one that actually read more then 10 first chapter, so I won't write anything about it. I can't say anything about updating stabilty so far, because I reached current chapter just before writing This, but from what I read in the comments it's fair to give it a 5 star as Well. And now the last but not the least, The world background. For me, it was good, but nothing origanl, just japanise Isekai with some changes, so i'd say it's okay, but nothing more. But since author menaged to get so far into the story without any visible mistakes and errors in This aspect for me it's solid 4 star. And that's all from me. Just a simple reminder that I am, by any means not a proffesional critic or anything like This, it's actually my first time writing a review for a novel, so don't take it seriously, I just wanted to say that I (inhale) RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU, AND I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. P.S I you read this far, I want to apologize for all the spelling or grammatical errors I made. I am writing it on a phone with very small screen, and I'm Still learning English, as it is not my native language. So thank you for the time you just probably wasted by reading all of this.
This book caught my attention and I read all chapters in about 2 months. I would love for more chapters released on a regular basis. I cant wait for more chapters on the imp, the children, the hero and the monster king. Please publish more.
Is this story close to being done?..........................................................................................................
Read till chapter 280- ish It is not bad, the concept is interesting and the world background is not bad. The way it is written is ok at the start, but at some point it just gets annoying. The words "annoying" and "really", atleast now in the later chapters, is used way too much that it ruins the reading experience for me. I assume it is used to get a laidback aura on the MC, which comes out some times, but mostly used too much. Personal preferences is to not have to much happen at once regarding the biggest background plot, which i believe worked out nicely in this novel. However, the smaller plots (the last one) is drawn out too much which also ruins the experience for me a bit. It is also written to detaild where it was not nessesary, again which makes the experience less enjoyable than wished for and, maybe just me, a bit hard to follow or bother to follow.
Out of all of the books that I have read i can safely say i have three favorites and this is one of those three. If this novel were to ever be made into a physical copy I would buy it with no hesitation just so that I own a copy of this.
I think this novel is great. First, I want to praise what it does well. The main character, Eiro, is flawed. He has issues, gets angry, and makes mistakes. I think that's important for a story like this, because it lets him grow. That is a core part of why I like the novel so much. Everyone is constantly improving, and the story is always moving forward along with the characters. I love the world, and I think that in terms of variety, it is very well put together. The magic is creative, and works well, but physical combat isn't neglected either. But of course, I also have my gripes with the novel. I think that sometimes, it takes very long for story threads to get neatly tied up, because the character roster is so wide that screentime is short. In the latter half of the novel, that also causes the pacing to suffer a little, since it simply needs more chapters for stories that don't follow the main one. I personally don't really mind that, especially when binging I think the pace is perfect, but on a weekly/monthly read it can get a little frustrating. Another slight issue I have is some plot threads simply seemingly not being resolved perfectly properly, and sometimes with the pacing, it can feel like the world kind of pauses when the MC needs it to. If Eiro is out exploring, some characters he regularly interacts with might just not appear for a couple dozen chapters. However, that doesn't mean the novel isn't worth a read. I thoroughly enjoyed it, all the way to the end. I think the story is well put together, the world is interesting and unique in a pot of ways, while using the best parts of classic and modern fantasy alike. The characters feel distinct, and easy to keep apart, and their tone of voice is conveyed very well. Sometimes it's a bit heavy on the characters complaining (slight spoiler: especially Eiro and Bavet, my god why can't Eiro just be a little more understanding holy heck) But it's great. I genuinely think it deserves a much higher rating than most other stories on webnovel, and I hope releases continue on in the future.
So, firstly, Thank you so much Author, the story at the start is absolutely amazing. it intrigued me to read on. BUT after which, when the mc adopted the children, the story just went downhill... well it's a bit before that actually. The cards that only have 52 pieces are in front of mc when he need it, the antagonists are like 1D character with no brain, this also include mc after he got the children, the general that holy empire/kingdom literally sent to negotiate with gods, and even 7 lords of sin. it's just frustrating how the story started so high above average standard. I understand that the mc supposed to be smart, but what about other people who live for tens or more of years. The world background is definitely lacking, the mc read books for years without using any actual knowledge he gain from them. when he read general knowledge book, kingdoms on the continent isn't even mention. it's like we switched Author even. All in all I liked it before, but I'm sorry Author-san, I need to drop this soon. btw I can't wait to see how great your 2nd book will be when you write it with experience from this book, I'm sure it would be great, keep writing!! btw(2), i think i will read it a bit more bc i just don't have anymore books to read lol
Spoiler enthüllen Do you have a Patreon? I would love to help support in anyway to have this book continued. Please respond, I don't want to give money to webnovel when I could give to you directly
While I haven’t read that far into this story, it’s been amazing and well written throughout. It’s so cool to see our imp grow and develop, as a main character, he reminds me of the main character from To Your Eternity (although the story is thankful not as heart wrenching as that tearjerker). The supporting cast is also memorable, and the story moves at a great pace
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
I still cen't understand why MC gave shield to the "guy" with perfect defense skill?? I think he don't need more protection and he cen use his own body to protect others, so again why?!?
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this is quality if I had ever seen quality before. this is so good to read I'm afraid of catching up to the current chapters and having to wait for more
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
TL;DR: This novel is like having a steak dinner after only eating hamburger helper for months. First off, the writing itself is on point. Just talking about grammar, punctuation, and spelling, it reads like someone actually proofread the chapters, and there aren't noticeable errors that distract from reading! Many available webnovels seem to suffer from a lack of proofreading, but this one doesn't. Even if this author doesn't actually proofread. In addition, the author's voice and varied vocabulary ensure good sentence variety and proper flow in each chapter all the way to the end, upon which one realizes they've read a lot, but still want to keep going. Once again, good flow is often hard to find in webnovels, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Or rather, a bite of sirloin steak. Plus, the characters have tangible character development--the big brain imp from the first 100 chapters is very different than the one now. Not just in power and figure, but also in what he values and how he reacts to events now. Ok I'm tired of writing now--it's a good book, story good, characters good, author good, I def dont regret spending 3 days reading all the way through. Though my wallet hurts a bit, I'd do it again.