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LV 3

Linda_Neshan_8405

This is my daughter's story and I feel that she's talented. I hope that she can get lots of readers. She tries to write in all of her free time, but 3 kids takes a lot. Way to go my girl!

LV 4

Daoist776158

Wish that the chapters were longer and the updates were more frequent, but so far I’m intrigued. Can’t wait til the story progresses. Seraphina seems like a relatable character and something about Lucien is interesting

LV 4

Daoist776158

I can’t wait for updates. I’m very interested in knowing where this story is going to go. I have hope for this story and it may become one of my faves.

LV 2

gddincorporated

I Love the suspense and attention to detail! I get sucked into the story and feel like I can put myself in the shoes of any given character depending on my mood. Looking forward to the latest!

LV 3

Linda_Neshan_8405

Read it. Read it. Read it. This is a must read because it has potential to be good. I cant wait to see what the finished product is. My criticism is that there are some slight editing issues but that can be fixed.

LV 3

Daoist852392

I love the names that the author used for the characters. I read her comment and she says this is her first attempt at a story. You can tell, but it is pretty intriguing so far.