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Droped like a hot potato sadly the author has first transfered his story to an other publishing side and lasty droped his work completely... was fun to read.
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Only a few chapters in and this is some of the worst shit I have ever read. There is no possible way this got rated 4.5 stars unless you deleted hundred and hundreds of bad reviews
It is very tiring and the character does not fit his personality. Also there is a lot of nonsense to keep the story moving and longer. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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there are so many unnecessary problems that pop up in the story that drag things out for no reason I dont get it 1001010101010010101010101001011
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Good story ! well, doesn't updating anymore so I'll give you 4.2 rating :))
Wow these reviews are really **** coming from the community. If this story isnt your cup of tea then don't read it simple. Some of these people are toxic asf ****.
It was really good but I want to see the silver aliens in chapter 3 and the god realm and get the wierd cube to go to his universe and try to find them not only that but before he goes to the god realm for him to at least for him to get more of his soul back to become stronger and to be the peal of all existence. Also I feel that the system is g.o.d the peak of all existence
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Very nice book, got me hooked right away! Kept on reading until I ran out of fast passes. Wish i had unlimited so i could just keep reading!!!
Okay, I rarely ever right reviews, but I feel like I simply must for this masterpiece! Invisible Dragon, another legendary work, really has nothing on this hidden gem. Invisible Dragon, in fact, can only aspire to be as great as this novel! 1-Writing quality is absolutely superb, profound use of tropes and psychology of people bringing forth incredibly realistic personas of the characters designed inside this exquisite masterpiece 👌 2-The stability of writing the only reason why this novel simply cannot be 5 stars!!! It has been 2 months since an update, which enrages me greatly and I really got super mad like our favorite main character in this novel!!!!! 3-The story development is a riveting tale of one of the best characters I have ever had the honor of reading about, no spoilers from me, read to find out more 4-The character design, as I stated previously, is simply groundbreaking. They truly act out of this world. I very much wonder if the magnificent author took ten years plus of psychological studies to be as well educated as he is in this work 5-The background is so immense, and shows immense potential only 3 chapters into the auxiliary volume, you'll surely be astounded after merely a few paragraphs of this magnificent work of art To conclude, though I won't give any spoilers, if you read this work, I guarantee you will not not be disappointed in it! Give it a chance, I did! It even made me take precious time out of my day to inform others to read it!
Really like what your doing, I would like more but I'm happy with whats available. Like alot of other writers, I know its hard to progress the story and release them faster then the reader.
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Best novel, I like the story, although there are some mistakes at first, the rest of the story is good. It is also very funny at the same time.
The writing quality of this story is a bit less than average, with a one or two mistakes per chapter. The story development, character design, and world background aren't anything special either. In other words, if you just want to read a story about an overpowered protagonist who crushes everything in his way this story is for you.
Very entertaining read, with a great backstory and fun development. Glad the character isn't just weak willed like so many in the genre are. Only real problem I have with it is that the story would be nice if he got a native English speaking editor to make some of the sentences more coherent.
i really enjoy this novel its very interesting to me. u should hurry back from where ever u are to finish bc i am ready to see which part of his other souls will prime meet first asuna's brother or gosu jin. sorry if i spelled the name wrong
I hope it continues I hope that it continues and advances in the construction of new characters and to send in situations of peoples and races and thanks for all that work
I liked it hahaha yeah soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeah its nice yes yes nice
This is one of my favorite books does anyone know if he dropped it cause I really want more.
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Ppl hate early for eng grammar..etc maybe im not good at eng too,found it no pb to read.. Only disappointing two thing 1.i though it gonna revenge story with do **** whatever he want,he said to be toxic..etc but turn out goodie with sometime nonsense view point..ex destroying clan ld and let other shutup when he know other can read mind in early elf he seem forgetten but again later chapter slime reveal map system to prince he mentioned mind read..so author fault or just trying to write dumb mc?and do you expect clan survive after killing all important members and assist that has alot enemy-_- 2.you see slime emp kill alot ppl like playing..but when travel vampire country saving girl and her father slime king said he upset bandit for kill and rape not only mc ?I guess ppl change fast or slime influence by mc pet contact..it doest make sense at all other good for now imo
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Droped like a hot potato sadly the author has first transfered his story to an other publishing side and lasty droped his work completely... was fun to read.
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Only a few chapters in and this is some of the worst shit I have ever read. There is no possible way this got rated 4.5 stars unless you deleted hundred and hundreds of bad reviews
It is very tiring and the character does not fit his personality. Also there is a lot of nonsense to keep the story moving and longer. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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there are so many unnecessary problems that pop up in the story that drag things out for no reason I dont get it 1001010101010010101010101001011
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Good story ! well, doesn't updating anymore so I'll give you 4.2 rating :))
Wow these reviews are really **** coming from the community. If this story isnt your cup of tea then don't read it simple. Some of these people are toxic asf ****.
It was really good but I want to see the silver aliens in chapter 3 and the god realm and get the wierd cube to go to his universe and try to find them not only that but before he goes to the god realm for him to at least for him to get more of his soul back to become stronger and to be the peal of all existence. Also I feel that the system is g.o.d the peak of all existence
Spoiler enthüllen Very nice book, got me hooked right away! Kept on reading until I ran out of fast passes. Wish i had unlimited so i could just keep reading!!!
Okay, I rarely ever right reviews, but I feel like I simply must for this masterpiece! Invisible Dragon, another legendary work, really has nothing on this hidden gem. Invisible Dragon, in fact, can only aspire to be as great as this novel! 1-Writing quality is absolutely superb, profound use of tropes and psychology of people bringing forth incredibly realistic personas of the characters designed inside this exquisite masterpiece 👌 2-The stability of writing the only reason why this novel simply cannot be 5 stars!!! It has been 2 months since an update, which enrages me greatly and I really got super mad like our favorite main character in this novel!!!!! 3-The story development is a riveting tale of one of the best characters I have ever had the honor of reading about, no spoilers from me, read to find out more 4-The character design, as I stated previously, is simply groundbreaking. They truly act out of this world. I very much wonder if the magnificent author took ten years plus of psychological studies to be as well educated as he is in this work 5-The background is so immense, and shows immense potential only 3 chapters into the auxiliary volume, you'll surely be astounded after merely a few paragraphs of this magnificent work of art To conclude, though I won't give any spoilers, if you read this work, I guarantee you will not not be disappointed in it! Give it a chance, I did! It even made me take precious time out of my day to inform others to read it!
Really like what your doing, I would like more but I'm happy with whats available. Like alot of other writers, I know its hard to progress the story and release them faster then the reader.
Exp 😉😎😉😋🤔😗😋😘😗🤣😘😗😋😘😉🤣😘😗😋😘😉😎🤔😉😎🤔😉😀😑😏😣😯😛😲 😧🤐😨🙄😴🤐😏🤐😄😙😎🤔😙😋🤔😆🤔😗😃😅😀☺️😅🤣😘😆😄😙😃😅😚😃☺️😀😆🤣😄😚🤣😄😙🤣😉😅😂😙😃😘😆😄🤣😄😙😃😂😚😍🙃😝😴😮🙄😛😜😚😪😓😄😚😍🙃😊🤗☺️😀😎😉😋🤔😙🤔😙🤔😋🤔😙🤔😋🤔😙😴
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Best novel, I like the story, although there are some mistakes at first, the rest of the story is good. It is also very funny at the same time.
The writing quality of this story is a bit less than average, with a one or two mistakes per chapter. The story development, character design, and world background aren't anything special either. In other words, if you just want to read a story about an overpowered protagonist who crushes everything in his way this story is for you.
Very entertaining read, with a great backstory and fun development. Glad the character isn't just weak willed like so many in the genre are. Only real problem I have with it is that the story would be nice if he got a native English speaking editor to make some of the sentences more coherent.
i really enjoy this novel its very interesting to me. u should hurry back from where ever u are to finish bc i am ready to see which part of his other souls will prime meet first asuna's brother or gosu jin. sorry if i spelled the name wrong
I hope it continues I hope that it continues and advances in the construction of new characters and to send in situations of peoples and races and thanks for all that work
I liked it hahaha yeah soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeah its nice yes yes nice
This is one of my favorite books does anyone know if he dropped it cause I really want more.
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Ppl hate early for eng grammar..etc maybe im not good at eng too,found it no pb to read.. Only disappointing two thing 1.i though it gonna revenge story with do **** whatever he want,he said to be toxic..etc but turn out goodie with sometime nonsense view point..ex destroying clan ld and let other shutup when he know other can read mind in early elf he seem forgetten but again later chapter slime reveal map system to prince he mentioned mind read..so author fault or just trying to write dumb mc?and do you expect clan survive after killing all important members and assist that has alot enemy-_- 2.you see slime emp kill alot ppl like playing..but when travel vampire country saving girl and her father slime king said he upset bandit for kill and rape not only mc ?I guess ppl change fast or slime influence by mc pet contact..it doest make sense at all other good for now imo
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.