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ok so I just want to start off by saying that I stopped at chapter 58. Now I really love the premise of this story and the female lead, her attitude, her personality and just her in general is highly entertaining. now that said I have to complain about how just way too much is going on in the story all at once, I would say about half of the chapters I read should be happening in the background to be found out later, not explored all at once as they are happening plus the enemies and negative effects are happening too cluttered together. please take this criticism as it was meant in a constructive manner because I love the world and characters you are building, I just think you are trying to build it too fast. like I said I stopped at chapter 58 and I feel that with as many incidents that happened in those 58 chapters that I should have been on chapter 150 and also the time felt stagnant because even with 150 chapters worth of content we were only like a week into the story. so please work on the pacing of your story and I'll probably check in after a few months to see about any improvements so thanks for your hard work Author-Kami
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Although this is about a lesbian protagonist, I was quite disappointed that the protagonist hasn't made and moves towards her husband after so many chapters.
Mierda!!! Me encanta!!! En lo que se está transformando la historia es increíble!!! De verdad...es otro nivel... jajaja ... Felicidades autor, es la primera vez que leo algo así!!!
The writing has improved immensely! I cant tell if this was her plan all along but that epic fourth wall break just WOW! This I feel like sheds some light on the characters and the story! How the characters are basically under the author’s thumb! But how one fights back when realizing the author is basically a tyrant! This is amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter! And for those reading this give it a chance okay?
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I’m hoping some more chapters are released soon. I get so caught up in the story and then I suddenly have to wait for the next bit. I’m loving Zoey so far.
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Just when it’s getting good you had to give a cliffhanger! I’m looking forward for the next chapters to see where your gonna take us. I’m rooting for Zoey and the doc.
In all honesty, I admire you girl. You have such a creative and delicate breath and your story had me hooked with the first chapter. I quite honestly can't thank you enough for uploading your work. I really can't wait for the next chapter comes out and then some... Without further ado, you are awesome, love the story, keep up the great work. And I am glad to be reading your work. Also, I'm not being a kiss-as* 😗, I'm just stating my opinion in review. I don't know the update schedule, but I hope the book doesn't end soon. Hmm. Cheers!!
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Mani love her so much I hope she fine her luv very so and save her I hope she can get to her because it would be bad if she did not get to her and
This by far is one of the best books that I have read on this app. I love that the female lead in this book actually uses her brain, unlike other female leads that immediately forgive the people that have wronged them.
I really like this story and I’m glad the author is editing it and fixing their mistakes. But it's really good, there's an unexpected twist ever turn and the protagonist and her friends are the most savage people ever! The characters also seem to deepen and the imagery and grammar has improved immensely! So I would say give it a chance maybe after the editing if you have a problem with errors but still, it's still pretty awesome.
Can't even make it past chapter 4. Horribly written and in need of editing. Plot holes and lack of explanation as well as details. Wouldn't recommend reading.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
I love the story so far. It is interesting, and the story line is very progressive along side the character development. So far I am loving Zoey and I wish she will find all the happiness she deserves to fill up the vaccum in her heart. Noah is a bestie I could use, and I won him the best also. I am following keenly because I don't want to miss any update. I want to walk through the story and have a peep into these beautiful lives so I can't wait to get to the very end.
Rant: I started reading this expecting to love it. What's better than a badass lesbian? However, I found that the writing was sorely lacking. For instance, in chapter 4, you see a doctor checking in on his patient. You are then immediately told that this doctor is a disgusting rapist and that the nurse is a crazy killer. And the MC knew this by his voice???? Everything was so abrupt and random. It was like the author thought "Hmmm what are some of the most disgusting and vile things a human can do, and then tell the reader that they did them without any warning, so the reader will HATE these characters and cheer for the heroin." I couldn't be invested in this story at all because there was so little imagination and build to the plot. And I found myself barely able to understand the story do to poor writing skills. I know what it's like to be a young author and to not have much experience and that it's very hard to write. Personally, it was hard to comprehend what was happening. (On that note, the pacing was non-existent). There was so little that made me want to feel anything for these characters because they didn't seem to hold any depth to them what so ever. I think it's a nice idea but the execution was not it. -I know this rant might be all over the place, I am just really disappointed. I REALLY wanted to like this, but I could barely read it :(
By far the best book on this whole app. I honestly can't wait for more. It reads exactly like a manga, except it's a novel. I really hope the author publishes this and I can get it in hardback.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
This story is well told... Plz do keep it up.. Annie is a character that proved that beauty is in the eyes of the beholder... Jade Bell is a character tailing words known to be: your past can not determine your present.. Working together they made an awesome or should spent some quality time together never knowing it their last... The ending of an old life ... The beginning of their love life...
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This story is amazing, the character and how she responds to different people and situations. It's a good book I recommend reading this book.
Spoiler enthüllen Ok so this book is one of the few I read. It’s funny it's got nice characters and even though I prefer it not to be in an anime setting I still love it. The grammar needs to be fixed and so do the spelling in some chapters. But I have seen worse. I also love where the story is going and how it gets better and better as it goes on.
It's absolutely great. This makes my day whenever I see it update. If you're looking for a great story to sunk your teeth into then this is for you.
I must that I’m enjoying this so far! However, the beginning (Volume 0) was quite the emotionally ride I must say. I am currently on chapter 11 so far, and that I’m wondering when we will meet Annie again? I want some Annie and Zoey (Jade) time?? ):
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
Okay, I don't know how to start with this... First of all the concept is unique, definitely not new, but it is a very unique concept. Unfortunately, from what I read and observed from the story is, that the realism is definitely not an aspect that's very prominent, everything happens too fast, and it's very straight forward but for me the pacing is too fast, the details on the characters aren't very fleshed out, from what I read. The side characters seemed too unrealistic and very unlikeable, the MC and FL as far, as I can describe we're decent? For me I feel like the FL just popped out of nowhere, there was no hints, no past relation and felt fake. I mean who just pop out of no where just cause a woman you don't even know want to commit suicide, I get that it's fiction but the way the FL was introduced, was sudden and it really felt unnatural. Also the word "feminist" always rubbed me the wrong way, Im NOT a hater for feminist, but they have a reputation for hating on the opposite gender :/ The way men were described here were just horrible, not every man has a cheating, cheap, sex driven, money and fame hungry personality. If the FL really advocate for equality, then please do not describe men as a typical hentai character. I have not read that far yet, but the feel of the story feels unrealistic and cliche, but the story has a very unique concept. Again I don't hate you Author, in fact I still like the story but the way it was presented could have been better. Also the typos and punctuation, comma, spelling sometimes we're a bit off, I'm not a grammar person but I did notice it. I will still support the story. Please continue the story. thank you. Also every story, for me is always unique in its own way :)
I really enjoy reading this story. I love that there's a mystical feel with the characters descriptions, yet it's still close to reality. I can't wait for the next update.
I enjoyed this very much. Only true issues I noticed were grammatical errors. Proof reading, spell check and even having someone else proof read before publishing is always a good idea. I look forward seeing what happens next with Zoey and I cant wait until she finds annie again.
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler enthüllen ok so I just want to start off by saying that I stopped at chapter 58. Now I really love the premise of this story and the female lead, her attitude, her personality and just her in general is highly entertaining. now that said I have to complain about how just way too much is going on in the story all at once, I would say about half of the chapters I read should be happening in the background to be found out later, not explored all at once as they are happening plus the enemies and negative effects are happening too cluttered together. please take this criticism as it was meant in a constructive manner because I love the world and characters you are building, I just think you are trying to build it too fast. like I said I stopped at chapter 58 and I feel that with as many incidents that happened in those 58 chapters that I should have been on chapter 150 and also the time felt stagnant because even with 150 chapters worth of content we were only like a week into the story. so please work on the pacing of your story and I'll probably check in after a few months to see about any improvements so thanks for your hard work Author-Kami
Spoiler enthüllen Although this is about a lesbian protagonist, I was quite disappointed that the protagonist hasn't made and moves towards her husband after so many chapters.
Mierda!!! Me encanta!!! En lo que se está transformando la historia es increíble!!! De verdad...es otro nivel... jajaja ... Felicidades autor, es la primera vez que leo algo así!!!
The writing has improved immensely! I cant tell if this was her plan all along but that epic fourth wall break just WOW! This I feel like sheds some light on the characters and the story! How the characters are basically under the author’s thumb! But how one fights back when realizing the author is basically a tyrant! This is amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter! And for those reading this give it a chance okay?
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I’m hoping some more chapters are released soon. I get so caught up in the story and then I suddenly have to wait for the next bit. I’m loving Zoey so far.
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Just when it’s getting good you had to give a cliffhanger! I’m looking forward for the next chapters to see where your gonna take us. I’m rooting for Zoey and the doc.
In all honesty, I admire you girl. You have such a creative and delicate breath and your story had me hooked with the first chapter. I quite honestly can't thank you enough for uploading your work. I really can't wait for the next chapter comes out and then some... Without further ado, you are awesome, love the story, keep up the great work. And I am glad to be reading your work. Also, I'm not being a kiss-as* 😗, I'm just stating my opinion in review. I don't know the update schedule, but I hope the book doesn't end soon. Hmm. Cheers!!
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Mani love her so much I hope she fine her luv very so and save her I hope she can get to her because it would be bad if she did not get to her and
This by far is one of the best books that I have read on this app. I love that the female lead in this book actually uses her brain, unlike other female leads that immediately forgive the people that have wronged them.
I really like this story and I’m glad the author is editing it and fixing their mistakes. But it's really good, there's an unexpected twist ever turn and the protagonist and her friends are the most savage people ever! The characters also seem to deepen and the imagery and grammar has improved immensely! So I would say give it a chance maybe after the editing if you have a problem with errors but still, it's still pretty awesome.
Can't even make it past chapter 4. Horribly written and in need of editing. Plot holes and lack of explanation as well as details. Wouldn't recommend reading.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
I love the story so far. It is interesting, and the story line is very progressive along side the character development. So far I am loving Zoey and I wish she will find all the happiness she deserves to fill up the vaccum in her heart. Noah is a bestie I could use, and I won him the best also. I am following keenly because I don't want to miss any update. I want to walk through the story and have a peep into these beautiful lives so I can't wait to get to the very end.
Rant: I started reading this expecting to love it. What's better than a badass lesbian? However, I found that the writing was sorely lacking. For instance, in chapter 4, you see a doctor checking in on his patient. You are then immediately told that this doctor is a disgusting rapist and that the nurse is a crazy killer. And the MC knew this by his voice???? Everything was so abrupt and random. It was like the author thought "Hmmm what are some of the most disgusting and vile things a human can do, and then tell the reader that they did them without any warning, so the reader will HATE these characters and cheer for the heroin." I couldn't be invested in this story at all because there was so little imagination and build to the plot. And I found myself barely able to understand the story do to poor writing skills. I know what it's like to be a young author and to not have much experience and that it's very hard to write. Personally, it was hard to comprehend what was happening. (On that note, the pacing was non-existent). There was so little that made me want to feel anything for these characters because they didn't seem to hold any depth to them what so ever. I think it's a nice idea but the execution was not it. -I know this rant might be all over the place, I am just really disappointed. I REALLY wanted to like this, but I could barely read it :(
By far the best book on this whole app. I honestly can't wait for more. It reads exactly like a manga, except it's a novel. I really hope the author publishes this and I can get it in hardback.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
This story is well told... Plz do keep it up.. Annie is a character that proved that beauty is in the eyes of the beholder... Jade Bell is a character tailing words known to be: your past can not determine your present.. Working together they made an awesome or should spent some quality time together never knowing it their last... The ending of an old life ... The beginning of their love life...
Spoiler enthüllen This story is amazing, the character and how she responds to different people and situations. It's a good book I recommend reading this book.
Spoiler enthüllen Ok so this book is one of the few I read. It’s funny it's got nice characters and even though I prefer it not to be in an anime setting I still love it. The grammar needs to be fixed and so do the spelling in some chapters. But I have seen worse. I also love where the story is going and how it gets better and better as it goes on.
It's absolutely great. This makes my day whenever I see it update. If you're looking for a great story to sunk your teeth into then this is for you.
I must that I’m enjoying this so far! However, the beginning (Volume 0) was quite the emotionally ride I must say. I am currently on chapter 11 so far, and that I’m wondering when we will meet Annie again? I want some Annie and Zoey (Jade) time?? ):
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
Okay, I don't know how to start with this... First of all the concept is unique, definitely not new, but it is a very unique concept. Unfortunately, from what I read and observed from the story is, that the realism is definitely not an aspect that's very prominent, everything happens too fast, and it's very straight forward but for me the pacing is too fast, the details on the characters aren't very fleshed out, from what I read. The side characters seemed too unrealistic and very unlikeable, the MC and FL as far, as I can describe we're decent? For me I feel like the FL just popped out of nowhere, there was no hints, no past relation and felt fake. I mean who just pop out of no where just cause a woman you don't even know want to commit suicide, I get that it's fiction but the way the FL was introduced, was sudden and it really felt unnatural. Also the word "feminist" always rubbed me the wrong way, Im NOT a hater for feminist, but they have a reputation for hating on the opposite gender :/ The way men were described here were just horrible, not every man has a cheating, cheap, sex driven, money and fame hungry personality. If the FL really advocate for equality, then please do not describe men as a typical hentai character. I have not read that far yet, but the feel of the story feels unrealistic and cliche, but the story has a very unique concept. Again I don't hate you Author, in fact I still like the story but the way it was presented could have been better. Also the typos and punctuation, comma, spelling sometimes we're a bit off, I'm not a grammar person but I did notice it. I will still support the story. Please continue the story. thank you. Also every story, for me is always unique in its own way :)
I really enjoy reading this story. I love that there's a mystical feel with the characters descriptions, yet it's still close to reality. I can't wait for the next update.
I enjoyed this very much. Only true issues I noticed were grammatical errors. Proof reading, spell check and even having someone else proof read before publishing is always a good idea. I look forward seeing what happens next with Zoey and I cant wait until she finds annie again.
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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