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This novel is actually looking pretty good so far but I think you should change the name of it its kinda weird and will not really be relavent going fowarx
I really really like the whole plot. This fanfiction is awesome at it really highlights how a spy should act in enemy territory and make a villain destroy his heroic reputation without any repercussion. Basically an MC reincarnated as a hyuga outwitting the nara brains. LIT[img=update][img=update][img=update]
hah!This is one of the best fanfics I've read . Mainly the bashing of third Hokage , his mistakes are presented in a way that makes you satisfied reading this .
im in 152 chapter its best novel I ever readed. i hope for fast translation but ypu can try mtl its not so much terrible only mistakes with names and she he .
The story flow of this book is really amazing. Really loved the Mc and the way he deals with the situations. Loved the thrilling aspect and cannot wait the upcoming updates.
In later chapter MC gonna give op gentle fist upgraded jutsu to clan for main branch! I really dont like sharing skills. and his clan dont support him from beginning!
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I'll be back to edit this once I've read more chapters. This one is put here so this story gets 10 reviews. Very interesting concept and I hope it's not dropped anytime soon.
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the fanfic is good but the title makes it seem stupid, from what i could read (upto chapter 20) there were no mistakes in the writing but it only gets a 4 star because most of the story of the character is not there; theres also the fact that if its causing him such big problems why not deal with it already (cloud shinobi thing) this novel can be said to be good for people who like smart or mastermind mcs
bro this book is lit 🔥 the story flow is amazing with an op mc and a good depiction of characters I love it keep doing this bro finish this book pls 🔥🔥🔥🔥it's amazing writing skills u got there and I hope u make it
Thaaanks translator-sama 😊😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keep up the great work..............................................................................................................................
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This novel is actually looking pretty good so far but I think you should change the name of it its kinda weird and will not really be relavent going fowarx
I really really like the whole plot. This fanfiction is awesome at it really highlights how a spy should act in enemy territory and make a villain destroy his heroic reputation without any repercussion. Basically an MC reincarnated as a hyuga outwitting the nara brains. LIT[img=update][img=update][img=update]
hah!This is one of the best fanfics I've read . Mainly the bashing of third Hokage , his mistakes are presented in a way that makes you satisfied reading this .
im in 152 chapter its best novel I ever readed. i hope for fast translation but ypu can try mtl its not so much terrible only mistakes with names and she he .
The story flow of this book is really amazing. Really loved the Mc and the way he deals with the situations. Loved the thrilling aspect and cannot wait the upcoming updates.
In later chapter MC gonna give op gentle fist upgraded jutsu to clan for main branch! I really dont like sharing skills. and his clan dont support him from beginning!
you should give this a try. exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp exp exp
I'll be back to edit this once I've read more chapters. This one is put here so this story gets 10 reviews. Very interesting concept and I hope it's not dropped anytime soon.
Very nice keep work my man - 0 0 0 0- - - ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the fanfic is good but the title makes it seem stupid, from what i could read (upto chapter 20) there were no mistakes in the writing but it only gets a 4 star because most of the story of the character is not there; theres also the fact that if its causing him such big problems why not deal with it already (cloud shinobi thing) this novel can be said to be good for people who like smart or mastermind mcs
bro this book is lit 🔥 the story flow is amazing with an op mc and a good depiction of characters I love it keep doing this bro finish this book pls 🔥🔥🔥🔥it's amazing writing skills u got there and I hope u make it
Thaaanks translator-sama 😊😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keep up the great work..............................................................................................................................
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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