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It was good and I really enjoyed it and I hope for more chapters and it was interesting to me Please update soon or when you can because it was good
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Shameless 5* review, I take suggestions this is also my first real novel I intend to stray away from canon and come up with a decent story. Again I’ll talk all the feed back I can get any criticism is welcomed.
I like the story so far although it could use a couple of grammar correction, and spell checks. But it's great I like how you don't overpower the character but, you also give him some abilities that would help him through this tough time. So I think this is perfect as long as you keep Carol and Rick alive if you continue then by all means I'll continue reading.
It was good and I really enjoyed it and I hope for more chapters and it was interesting to me Please update soon or when you can because it was good
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Shameless 5* review, I take suggestions this is also my first real novel I intend to stray away from canon and come up with a decent story. Again I’ll talk all the feed back I can get any criticism is welcomed.
I like the story so far although it could use a couple of grammar correction, and spell checks. But it's great I like how you don't overpower the character but, you also give him some abilities that would help him through this tough time. So I think this is perfect as long as you keep Carol and Rick alive if you continue then by all means I'll continue reading.