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it's a very good one. but it has been long since there has been any updates. .. .. . .. .. is this book dropped? or can we find more chapters elsewhere?
Very interesting and triggering ,thou it should be rated for adults only but enjoy every bit of it , won't mind of these to read the first part ending was not too good or rathe happy ending
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Perfect erotica despite the redundancy in the beginning, splendid pacing of the plot and character. Could not put it down once I got deeply into it.
It was excellent and all, but you need to be consistent. And I liked what you did for the characters; setting the mood and really explaining everything.
Seems like a great story ?...... 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Well I hope the plot makes some sense Hhsrkophfdsssgjifdsqwtiogdww to tw tofdsasfuiiiiigdshussoyswjjhuaahphrgasufsewupdp
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Woahhhh! I just started this novel but I’m totally hooked! 😍❤️ I like how the story is going. It definitely has so much potential. I’m going to finish it off then give another review 😤👌🏼 Thank you for the story💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Damn !! This is some good ****.. I love how the story starts.. Keep up the good work !! Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!
All 3 stories are really good. I personally really enjoyed the 1st and 3rd one. The 3rd was my favorite, really liked how he wasn't a complete nice guy and actually used the powers on multiple women and wasnt afraid to utilized the powers unlike the 1st story. Really hop the author comes back and continues because the 3rd really is the best one and had alot of potential.
Extremely short chapters that should be combined. The pace is horribly slow with little description. It takes over twenty "chapters" to be told that something was lost and changed hands for a few thousand years.
It was a little slow to start off with and some of the chapters were really short at some stages but other than that it is a really good read. The 3 stories are all similar but very different.
Very interesting plot with well thought out characters. Started off a little slow with the origin story, but really picked up once the main story line kicked in.
Boring... you win the award of the most boring hero character on that site................................................................................
As a warning for new readers, this novel is very slow. The protagonist doesn't even get introduced until around chapter 20 and even then, he doesn't find the trinket housing the genie until around chapter 42. You will need a lot of patience while reading this at the start. I still enjoyed it though, so i recommend giving it a go.
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So it's a little difficult to note since it's 3 different storylines (maybe different author too since it's a circle of author). The first book is for me the best : a lovely love story about a naughty mischievous genie and her master/husband that is a the beginning depressed and without self esteem. We can see both characters matured with the progress of the story. The default that I see in it : too much sexua1l chapter. At least 1/2 or 2/3 are just sex chapters. Could had been better with less sex and more "normal" interaction. The end was to rushed too. I would have liked if it's just not jump in the future to put an happy ending. They defeated the villains order, move in their new flat and hop you get them 50y in the future. The second story now : sincerely not for me. It's about kids and "adults" that use their wishes without stopping to have everyone have sex with everyone. Basically if you want a full story with just sex without any sense then go for it but if you want a story when the H-scenes make sense then pass it. For example: first things the boy did was to have an orgies with his two friend and all the girls of his class. The FL had an orgie for two day with a full soccer team to get ride of her virginity and she was maybe 15 at that time... The first thing the mother of our ML did when she get accidentally her djinn was to go to his son class and make an orgie including making a girl giving a blow... to her son. Sorry but for me it's totally nonsense. Now the third story that is still on going (maybe hiatus or dropped by the way) : more like the first one but with an open couple at least for the ML part. He get laid with others girls than his i suppose future wife (well he and she hinted that, the wife part). So we can expect a romantical relationship between Jack and the genie but with some one stand or harem. I don't know if we will have the end of this part so. If you want to be sure to have a story that will be finished when you start to read a book then don't start this one at least for now. So to make it short : I recommend the first story a romantic one with a bit to much sex. After that the third one if it can be completed. As for the second one, sorry but I don't recommend it at all. Read a **** comic their have a much more sensical storyline...
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It's good It's good It's good It's good, I like how it starts, so far 10/10 10/10 everything. The details are very good. (Y) super recomendable.
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Am I reading this right?? A 5 start eating for 500+ chapters even after 1 month with 1.1 mil views?? If it's true then this is the first I have seen
Love this novel, the way of writing.... Suspense and the each and every event is just mind blowing..... Even after reading 1000+ chapters.... I never felt bored and it is talent and skills of the writer only which pressurized me everyday to read the chapters..... Ultimately this novel succeed to keep me tuned..... 😍
God is good many blessings to you oh great one 🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️ This lowly disciple shall feast on this novel
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Lots of kinky stuff, lots of love, great happy endings, great plots, great characters, only wish there was more of it. First story is my personal favorite.
I have yet to read this story but wanted to review anyway................................................................................................
This is my second review deleted the first to update on my progress. I LOVED THE FIRST VOLUME. Stephen and Grace's story was an amazing adventure. It stayed steamy all through volume 1 but never lost its fun to read way to go author. You have some of the best grammar on this site and I truly appreciate all of the effort you put into the story to keep me captivated at EVERY second of the journey. Gonna start volume 2 now and witness another great journey of romance. Anyone reading this review should seriously consider reading this gem you WON'T be disappointed.
VERY UNIQUE AND AWESOME........................................................................,.........................................................................................
This story has a slow pace to it. It develops the characters so you feel a connection with them. I love how the author chooses to tell the story how he wants. There are to many authors that try to conform to the comments and change for them. This author wants his story to be told how he feels it should.
Having this novel awkardly enough recommended by Facebook, I sure do not regret clicking on it. An incredibly addictive story, with great depth put into all the details and the characters, surely kept me entertained on those long commutes to and back from work.
I think everything from the character design to the story is all very planned and smooth. Like any of the various transitions from the developments in the story are all smooth. And there's a lot if information about the world and characters.
Don't know about the others, but the last story is Genie Chronicles by Joe Brolly. The story is still incomplete, but there are a lot more chapters released, so I suggest looking it up for anyone interested. Please don't give this plagiarist any more attention.
it's a very good one. but it has been long since there has been any updates. .. .. . .. .. is this book dropped? or can we find more chapters elsewhere?
Very interesting and triggering ,thou it should be rated for adults only but enjoy every bit of it , won't mind of these to read the first part ending was not too good or rathe happy ending
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Perfect erotica despite the redundancy in the beginning, splendid pacing of the plot and character. Could not put it down once I got deeply into it.
It was excellent and all, but you need to be consistent. And I liked what you did for the characters; setting the mood and really explaining everything.
Seems like a great story ?...... 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Well I hope the plot makes some sense Hhsrkophfdsssgjifdsqwtiogdww to tw tofdsasfuiiiiigdshussoyswjjhuaahphrgasufsewupdp
Spoiler enthüllen Woahhhh! I just started this novel but I’m totally hooked! 😍❤️ I like how the story is going. It definitely has so much potential. I’m going to finish it off then give another review 😤👌🏼 Thank you for the story💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Damn !! This is some good ****.. I love how the story starts.. Keep up the good work !! Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!
All 3 stories are really good. I personally really enjoyed the 1st and 3rd one. The 3rd was my favorite, really liked how he wasn't a complete nice guy and actually used the powers on multiple women and wasnt afraid to utilized the powers unlike the 1st story. Really hop the author comes back and continues because the 3rd really is the best one and had alot of potential.
Extremely short chapters that should be combined. The pace is horribly slow with little description. It takes over twenty "chapters" to be told that something was lost and changed hands for a few thousand years.
It was a little slow to start off with and some of the chapters were really short at some stages but other than that it is a really good read. The 3 stories are all similar but very different.
Very interesting plot with well thought out characters. Started off a little slow with the origin story, but really picked up once the main story line kicked in.
Boring... you win the award of the most boring hero character on that site................................................................................
As a warning for new readers, this novel is very slow. The protagonist doesn't even get introduced until around chapter 20 and even then, he doesn't find the trinket housing the genie until around chapter 42. You will need a lot of patience while reading this at the start. I still enjoyed it though, so i recommend giving it a go.
Spoiler enthüllen So it's a little difficult to note since it's 3 different storylines (maybe different author too since it's a circle of author). The first book is for me the best : a lovely love story about a naughty mischievous genie and her master/husband that is a the beginning depressed and without self esteem. We can see both characters matured with the progress of the story. The default that I see in it : too much sexua1l chapter. At least 1/2 or 2/3 are just sex chapters. Could had been better with less sex and more "normal" interaction. The end was to rushed too. I would have liked if it's just not jump in the future to put an happy ending. They defeated the villains order, move in their new flat and hop you get them 50y in the future. The second story now : sincerely not for me. It's about kids and "adults" that use their wishes without stopping to have everyone have sex with everyone. Basically if you want a full story with just sex without any sense then go for it but if you want a story when the H-scenes make sense then pass it. For example: first things the boy did was to have an orgies with his two friend and all the girls of his class. The FL had an orgie for two day with a full soccer team to get ride of her virginity and she was maybe 15 at that time... The first thing the mother of our ML did when she get accidentally her djinn was to go to his son class and make an orgie including making a girl giving a blow... to her son. Sorry but for me it's totally nonsense. Now the third story that is still on going (maybe hiatus or dropped by the way) : more like the first one but with an open couple at least for the ML part. He get laid with others girls than his i suppose future wife (well he and she hinted that, the wife part). So we can expect a romantical relationship between Jack and the genie but with some one stand or harem. I don't know if we will have the end of this part so. If you want to be sure to have a story that will be finished when you start to read a book then don't start this one at least for now. So to make it short : I recommend the first story a romantic one with a bit to much sex. After that the third one if it can be completed. As for the second one, sorry but I don't recommend it at all. Read a **** comic their have a much more sensical storyline...
Spoiler enthüllen It's good It's good It's good It's good, I like how it starts, so far 10/10 10/10 everything. The details are very good. (Y) super recomendable.
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Am I reading this right?? A 5 start eating for 500+ chapters even after 1 month with 1.1 mil views?? If it's true then this is the first I have seen
Love this novel, the way of writing.... Suspense and the each and every event is just mind blowing..... Even after reading 1000+ chapters.... I never felt bored and it is talent and skills of the writer only which pressurized me everyday to read the chapters..... Ultimately this novel succeed to keep me tuned..... 😍
God is good many blessings to you oh great one 🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️ This lowly disciple shall feast on this novel
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I must appreciate the way of writing ☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁ ☁🎈🎈☁🎈🎈☁ 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈 ☁🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈☁ ☁☁🎈🎈🎈☁☁ ☁☁☁🎈☁☁☁
Lots of kinky stuff, lots of love, great happy endings, great plots, great characters, only wish there was more of it. First story is my personal favorite.
I have yet to read this story but wanted to review anyway................................................................................................
This is my second review deleted the first to update on my progress. I LOVED THE FIRST VOLUME. Stephen and Grace's story was an amazing adventure. It stayed steamy all through volume 1 but never lost its fun to read way to go author. You have some of the best grammar on this site and I truly appreciate all of the effort you put into the story to keep me captivated at EVERY second of the journey. Gonna start volume 2 now and witness another great journey of romance. Anyone reading this review should seriously consider reading this gem you WON'T be disappointed.
VERY UNIQUE AND AWESOME........................................................................,.........................................................................................
This story has a slow pace to it. It develops the characters so you feel a connection with them. I love how the author chooses to tell the story how he wants. There are to many authors that try to conform to the comments and change for them. This author wants his story to be told how he feels it should.
Having this novel awkardly enough recommended by Facebook, I sure do not regret clicking on it. An incredibly addictive story, with great depth put into all the details and the characters, surely kept me entertained on those long commutes to and back from work.
I think everything from the character design to the story is all very planned and smooth. Like any of the various transitions from the developments in the story are all smooth. And there's a lot if information about the world and characters.
Don't know about the others, but the last story is Genie Chronicles by Joe Brolly. The story is still incomplete, but there are a lot more chapters released, so I suggest looking it up for anyone interested. Please don't give this plagiarist any more attention.