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Easily one of the best dragonball fanfic well it would be perfect if the mc wasn't so op and the updates being so unstable.......................
*signs* just like that another good dropped. it fun reading it while it lasted though short I enjoyed even if it wasn't perfect it's also not bad
Wroting Quality is good, unnoticable plot holes here and there. But overall good. Story Development also good, just as my rating says. Character design... I like this better than the other one. Updating stability... Well not so good and I hope there will be a chapter sooner (the sooner the better). World Background, well it is what it is. Good book looking forward for more chapters.
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the novel has good grammar and there is a big improvement than the other novel the author first dragon ball x that was all over the place, it follows the information about dragon balls with the author's own mix they may be some mishaps here and there but all in all it's a good novel, give it a read it has 88 chapters so far. I forgot to review this novel sorry author-sama.
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It had a good start, but then MC started using future knowledge too much and everyone just went along also MC has a tendency to not plan things out so things go way wrong...
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Why did you drop it ? Please don't do it again, you have lost so many readers already, you would be a fool to drop this now. But for those who didn't read the story, it is very good if having a system doesn't bother you much.
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it a very good story and I want more chapters so please update soon I don't want you to drop it or go on a long hiatus, so please update soon I'm sure other people want more chapters
One of the best fic I have read in a while. It's refreshing to see a story where the MC's parents are strong and not just some dead or useless side characters.
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I love your story. What you did with the Saiyan's was genius. The only thing you should look at, is overall story balance. Sometimes, it felt like you didn't really know where you wanted to take it.
good job writing this it was very entertaining and I hope you continue to write it thank. it was so good I can't even begin to imagine more of your work
I like this great MC a little OP but overall great fan-fic i hope to continue reading till the end if there ever is an ending to this fan-fic.
This story deserves more attention. I know writing this review doesn’t help much but anything to get this story the recognition it deserves. I hope this story can pull more ratings and views. The author is a good writer and makes things interesting, keep it up! Thank you
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Author question are you going to put Android 21 because she can be a sparing partner just want to read about her in a Dragonball novel that would make my day for me
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need more update..... .......... ....... .......... ........ ......... .... ......... ........... .......... ........... .......... ........
Easily one of the best dragonball fanfic well it would be perfect if the mc wasn't so op and the updates being so unstable.......................
*signs* just like that another good dropped. it fun reading it while it lasted though short I enjoyed even if it wasn't perfect it's also not bad
Wroting Quality is good, unnoticable plot holes here and there. But overall good. Story Development also good, just as my rating says. Character design... I like this better than the other one. Updating stability... Well not so good and I hope there will be a chapter sooner (the sooner the better). World Background, well it is what it is. Good book looking forward for more chapters.
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the novel has good grammar and there is a big improvement than the other novel the author first dragon ball x that was all over the place, it follows the information about dragon balls with the author's own mix they may be some mishaps here and there but all in all it's a good novel, give it a read it has 88 chapters so far. I forgot to review this novel sorry author-sama.
it's really good no denying hsjdndnsksksbdbdjsksjdbdjwkskdbejdidjdbdjekdifhdndkdldifjdnkeidhdbdnddkiddhndndkdidhfbdndkdidjdndjdkdi
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as partes # IMPIEDOSOPROTAGONISTA # ANTI-HERÓIPROTAGONIS são mentira, o mc e um lixo,
It had a good start, but then MC started using future knowledge too much and everyone just went along also MC has a tendency to not plan things out so things go way wrong...
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Why did you drop it ? Please don't do it again, you have lost so many readers already, you would be a fool to drop this now. But for those who didn't read the story, it is very good if having a system doesn't bother you much.
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it a very good story and I want more chapters so please update soon I don't want you to drop it or go on a long hiatus, so please update soon I'm sure other people want more chapters
One of the best fic I have read in a while. It's refreshing to see a story where the MC's parents are strong and not just some dead or useless side characters.
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I love your story. What you did with the Saiyan's was genius. The only thing you should look at, is overall story balance. Sometimes, it felt like you didn't really know where you wanted to take it.
good job writing this it was very entertaining and I hope you continue to write it thank. it was so good I can't even begin to imagine more of your work
I like this great MC a little OP but overall great fan-fic i hope to continue reading till the end if there ever is an ending to this fan-fic.
This story deserves more attention. I know writing this review doesn’t help much but anything to get this story the recognition it deserves. I hope this story can pull more ratings and views. The author is a good writer and makes things interesting, keep it up! Thank you
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Author question are you going to put Android 21 because she can be a sparing partner just want to read about her in a Dragonball novel that would make my day for me
What do I have to get more ch. Of this and the re-mastered version they both are dope [img=recommend] I’ not understanding.