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I only read 1 character and I feel mc is so a stupid that it kill all interesting II hame for novel . l .
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only real constant personality trait of the mc is he is a hard working hypocritical fool who does not know how to think or plan for himself since he just throws himself into doing anything but whines about not being the top or caring about consequences of his actions as seen when he went to save some girl just because she was in danger but so what if my family says the people harming the girl is part of a group even they have no power to do anything with and he is far too weak to fight their strongest he just does not care since he want to save 1 girl even while knowing hundreds are in the same situation or worst situation but they mean nothing .even as he grows faster then anyone and is doing many different things that really do not link well all with his goal (manga drawing, manga story writing, book writing, movie writing, music videos) all the while he is working in the supernatural word saying he only wants to be an the best athlete . story power scale jumps a lot many things change in ways that make you question how it happen but will never know such as his yokai powers being a fatal poison to him but he somehow learns to use those powers for no other reason then author wants him to be able to use them instead of his Juraian 'light' powers to be the opposite of his 'dark' brother as was the reason he was sent to his Juraian grandpa was due to how strong his light powers are or he learns many different fighting methods (even his old A.T methods that are quickly forgotten despite that he was call a master class fighter with them while only having a disciple class body ) but we never really learn anything he just learns them somehow and at some time between timeskips and jumps all around the country getting involved in events and collecting girls like candies
I Love it!!! The Character Building is Good! World Building is Fantatstic, You mashup many Anime/Manga World into One & there's no Inconsistency in it (though sometimes I got bewildered with the Power System). Just need more & faster realese, but sometimes I don't understand some Chapter because of the Sudden Flashback of Past Lives & other 😅😅😅😅😅
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Holy ****! A Tenchi novel! Tenchi is one of the Harem kings. whats nura? prince of darkness. I haven't read it but only stick with Tenchi alright I hate it when authors do more than one series
5 star review ................................................................................. cause why not?...........................................
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Shameless author review! Dream big or you shall never achieve anything. The MC dreams of being the greatest Athlete! An athlete is defined as someone who competes in an event between two or more people. Meaning the MC wants to be better than everyone.
everything in this novel sucks world building? confusing. story development? not much. character design also sucks with constant changing of emotion fast-paced that no development of the mc mc just being an useless mc, and the grammar, spacing of words and phrasing it sucks. overall it's disappointing
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I only read 1 character and I feel mc is so a stupid that it kill all interesting II hame for novel . l .
mc with a dick for brains. All what i need...................................... ........ . . .... ..... ..... ... .... ...... .... ... . . .. . . . . . . . . . ..... .... ....
Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... Boring... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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only real constant personality trait of the mc is he is a hard working hypocritical fool who does not know how to think or plan for himself since he just throws himself into doing anything but whines about not being the top or caring about consequences of his actions as seen when he went to save some girl just because she was in danger but so what if my family says the people harming the girl is part of a group even they have no power to do anything with and he is far too weak to fight their strongest he just does not care since he want to save 1 girl even while knowing hundreds are in the same situation or worst situation but they mean nothing .even as he grows faster then anyone and is doing many different things that really do not link well all with his goal (manga drawing, manga story writing, book writing, movie writing, music videos) all the while he is working in the supernatural word saying he only wants to be an the best athlete . story power scale jumps a lot many things change in ways that make you question how it happen but will never know such as his yokai powers being a fatal poison to him but he somehow learns to use those powers for no other reason then author wants him to be able to use them instead of his Juraian 'light' powers to be the opposite of his 'dark' brother as was the reason he was sent to his Juraian grandpa was due to how strong his light powers are or he learns many different fighting methods (even his old A.T methods that are quickly forgotten despite that he was call a master class fighter with them while only having a disciple class body ) but we never really learn anything he just learns them somehow and at some time between timeskips and jumps all around the country getting involved in events and collecting girls like candies
I Love it!!! The Character Building is Good! World Building is Fantatstic, You mashup many Anime/Manga World into One & there's no Inconsistency in it (though sometimes I got bewildered with the Power System). Just need more & faster realese, but sometimes I don't understand some Chapter because of the Sudden Flashback of Past Lives & other 😅😅😅😅😅
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Holy ****! A Tenchi novel! Tenchi is one of the Harem kings. whats nura? prince of darkness. I haven't read it but only stick with Tenchi alright I hate it when authors do more than one series
5 star review ................................................................................. cause why not?...........................................
i like this history, dont drop plz........................................................................................................................................................................................................
............m.... M. M. Mmmmmmm.. Mm. Mm. M. M.. M. Mmmm. Mmmmmmm. Mmmmmm. Mmmm. Mmmmmmmmmmm. Mm.. M.. M. M. Mm ..m. m. M. Mmm. M. M. M. Mm. M. M.
Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros. Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.Thank you for this! I like it better than Eros.
Take me the millennium to find the novel again Take me the millennium to find the novel again Take me the millennium to find the novel again Take me the millennium to find the novel again Take me the millennium to find the novel again Thanks for the novel
5 star for rewrite ................... ....................................................................................................................................................
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Shameless author review! Dream big or you shall never achieve anything. The MC dreams of being the greatest Athlete! An athlete is defined as someone who competes in an event between two or more people. Meaning the MC wants to be better than everyone.
everything in this novel sucks world building? confusing. story development? not much. character design also sucks with constant changing of emotion fast-paced that no development of the mc mc just being an useless mc, and the grammar, spacing of words and phrasing it sucks. overall it's disappointing