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Amazing should read story. I was addicted to reading this until I finished ✅. I might just be biased tho cause I am a weeb and like naruto.eedeeyvhghghghhjhuhijojlkpkpkok0lpllkoklkkpkpk0klkpkom’j9kl’9’l’9kojlkokokokokokoioioioiBh7hkjkhijm(8hjhjh)(7(and hh*hhb(yhuhhuhuhihihuuihihiihuhgghhyuuhhhg(high
well writin quality is cuz of some words are wrongly written and lot of other things u know its never perfect and thats super annoyin.story devolpment was well quite good id say i mean at first i really hated the family in first 2 chapters cuz they were like fuk naruto and all and i understood the unsuppervised part though i must say hittin him was too much and not lettin his sister helpin him too was too much and i pretty much hated them more except the girl who tried to help him.for character development id say i like how naruto didnt go batshit insane and try to raze konoha to the ground and just went fuk konoha its not like i need them to live and took hinata with him(though i hate what hiashi became and did to hinata) while also makin the parents go in depression and constantly lick the mcs boots to get him to acnoledge them as this will teach them some lessons about lovin ur family instead of chosin to one way or another abondon them(which they did as they could had just let kyubi go and like live with their son as they had power to live happily).well indont need to explain for updatin stability as u know, u said one month and its one year so yea only one star on that one for u.lastly for world background well i love how u made naruto solve problems which gave them some popularity and also lastly made him fight a kage level opponent with a bijuu.anyway overall except update which i think might never happen as u never know not to sound rude or anythin but with covid and all and u author not updatin might as well consider u dead(as we consider most authors not updatin their stories rihht now) i think that everythin is great or perfect and u can keep story like that if u keep updatin and dont need to change anythin(at least if ur still in the same body and did not somehow die and reincarnate(though if u did reincarnate with memories u should try to update the story)i know its a lot of bs here).anyway keep it on the same track and dont change we all waitin for u to arrive and update so dont let us down.
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I am not much of a naruto fan but this gave me a different perspective on how the people in the naruto universe act to each other if there are less fighting😅
Interesting. Really good so far. Hope you update soon. ┌(・。・)┘♪( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Overall a good fanfiction both the characters world and all about the fanfiction can't wait to read more keep up the good work hope to see more from you
Cant say i didn't enjoy the novel its a novel take on the naruto story. I particularly enjoyed the romace element with Hinata but there were several things that could have been improved, such as the way the relationship between the family re-develops. Or their reactions after naruto left, although i did enjoy their regret it didn't seem to fit with there previous actions. However, although a reason was given in the later chapters for their neglect although it was acceptable i wasn't a huge fan as it gave the family justification for their actions which tbh i didn't want to see. I understand that he is naruto and he will always give his family a second chance, however, i wasn't best pleased with how the family got justified in that manner and i think the author should of handled it in a much better way. With more focus on the emotional development between the family and naruto as opposed to the missions and such. I feel as if the missions could have been used in such a way that they orchastrated some devlopment in the relationship between his family as tbh. That was the main point of interest of the stort his relationship with his family and how he was severely neglected and betrayed. And although i can justify a lot of ehat you did such as, naruto grew up, he matured or the little girls were too young. I still cant find it in my heart to forgive his parents as what they did scars a child for life. And i feel that the way kushina and minato are trying to worm their way back in would instead antagonize naruto. And yet he didn't even have an emotional outburst once, which didn't bother me is something he would of 100% done as i could imagine he has years of built up resentment. And i think its all fine and good naruto can forgive his parent but i feel that although you should have made it the main focus of the story you pushed it aside. And instead of this halfheated forgivness and attempt of redeption from his parents their should be alot more emotions involved and events to prove that his parents truly do regret what they did. As so far aside for being incessently annoying and demanding towarda naruto they have not demonstrated that in their actions. If i was the one who wrote it i would have the same naruto and although he wants to forgive his family he has too much resentment and can't bring himself to do it. And through a series of emotional rollercoasters he does eventually forgive them right the end and maybe one of his parent sacrifises themselves to save naruto form being killed by kaguya or something causing naruto to finally lose his resentment towards his parents. And although it might be slightly bittersweet it would still keep people engaged as its never as simple as okay i forgive you, once that trust is gone there always a doubt and a certain distance between them. And i feel that although the parents are unworthy of forgivness i feel that by making the ultimate sacrifise they can truly convey their real feelings to him. But anyway the main point is that the emotional rollercoaster of the past neglect and the reasons for his past neglect should have been the main focus point with any battles or events being their to help opportunities to improve their relationship or perhaps worsen their relationship depending on how the author wanted it to go. And not the rinnegan power trip that i read, because at the end of the day power ups can only keep my intrest for so long what i wanted to see was how their relationship dynamica changed.
It is a very good story but I do not like harems, naruto and anyone other than hinata can go to hell I do not appreciate that kind of romance. All in all a good book I recommend reading.
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Good story but can you stop naruto from having so many people want to date or marry him it’s should just be naruto and Hinata NO ONE ELSE. Over all good story
Good job trying to add spice to the story can't wait to see how Hinata and Naroto would react to the new alliance formed by their parent. Also I like the fact that Naroto is making his parent yearn for his affection so they know just how he felt too.
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Just posting this for my daily, haven't read it but the concept of this sounds interesting............................................................
Keep writing. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is an amazing story u made,i loved the part whn u made naruto strong in an instant,and naruto's chemestry with hinata was too well shown.
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Shit only word to describe it gave up after one chapter shdhdjdjdhshsbsbsbdbdbdbbdbxbxbxbxbxbxbbxbxnxjdiekdnsosmbsjsosbshsidjsidhdhzusjsndjd
I finished this in one day, where's the rest? I demand more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It really good like wow I haven't read a good fan fic in a while but this one takes my second place and extra letters for the 140 thing dababkrjrjdjdnjdbdbd
WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE
Honestly it started off really well before the 5 year time Skip where he became a beta b¡tch and starts forgiving people for all the crap they did not to mention going soft
Overall the story is very good in my opinion cuz there is many twist and turn that the story to get to MORE UPDATE PLZ, I like where this story going
There it is again a really good fanfic wich got dropped HOW GOD DAMN ANNOYING please continue it author.................................. ..
I really like this so far ive only read about half pf the chapters but so far i like it (filler--------------------------------------------)
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I like the imagination of another possibility if naruto has his parents live and has sibilings and how he was isolated from his sibilings and decided to get stronger on his etc totally the author has good writing skills and imagination even though its a fan fic
PLEASE CONTINUE THE FAN FIC! This is a really interesting one, so it is very much worth your time. Too bad it is almost half a year since the author last updated this.
This is the most amazing fan fic of naruto I've read it really seems well planned I really live this I think everyone who comes across this should read it it really is a really good book
Welp here we are. I'm gonna answer a few questions first. Yes, I'm back writing No, this isn't a regular thing I'm gonna update when I can and when I want to No, I'm not going to continue my other novel since it was a collaboration work with my ex. Yes, I'm single Now to the novel It's a Naruto Fanfiction that's it.
good ........................................................................................................................................................................................
Amazing should read story. I was addicted to reading this until I finished ✅. I might just be biased tho cause I am a weeb and like naruto.eedeeyvhghghghhjhuhijojlkpkpkok0lpllkoklkkpkpk0klkpkom’j9kl’9’l’9kojlkokokokokokoioioioiBh7hkjkhijm(8hjhjh)(7(and hh*hhb(yhuhhuhuhihihuuihihiihuhgghhyuuhhhg(high
well writin quality is cuz of some words are wrongly written and lot of other things u know its never perfect and thats super annoyin.story devolpment was well quite good id say i mean at first i really hated the family in first 2 chapters cuz they were like fuk naruto and all and i understood the unsuppervised part though i must say hittin him was too much and not lettin his sister helpin him too was too much and i pretty much hated them more except the girl who tried to help him.for character development id say i like how naruto didnt go batshit insane and try to raze konoha to the ground and just went fuk konoha its not like i need them to live and took hinata with him(though i hate what hiashi became and did to hinata) while also makin the parents go in depression and constantly lick the mcs boots to get him to acnoledge them as this will teach them some lessons about lovin ur family instead of chosin to one way or another abondon them(which they did as they could had just let kyubi go and like live with their son as they had power to live happily).well indont need to explain for updatin stability as u know, u said one month and its one year so yea only one star on that one for u.lastly for world background well i love how u made naruto solve problems which gave them some popularity and also lastly made him fight a kage level opponent with a bijuu.anyway overall except update which i think might never happen as u never know not to sound rude or anythin but with covid and all and u author not updatin might as well consider u dead(as we consider most authors not updatin their stories rihht now) i think that everythin is great or perfect and u can keep story like that if u keep updatin and dont need to change anythin(at least if ur still in the same body and did not somehow die and reincarnate(though if u did reincarnate with memories u should try to update the story)i know its a lot of bs here).anyway keep it on the same track and dont change we all waitin for u to arrive and update so dont let us down.
drop pls Don drop..........vyvycvugubibknknknibuvctrfrctbuninuvtrctvhinnugtctvunkvtctbunjvtbuinuvyygvyfcygcugvygvugvugvugvugvugvuvuhbbugugvygvugv
I am not much of a naruto fan but this gave me a different perspective on how the people in the naruto universe act to each other if there are less fighting😅
Interesting. Really good so far. Hope you update soon. ┌(・。・)┘♪( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )( ╹▽╹ )ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Overall a good fanfiction both the characters world and all about the fanfiction can't wait to read more keep up the good work hope to see more from you
Cant say i didn't enjoy the novel its a novel take on the naruto story. I particularly enjoyed the romace element with Hinata but there were several things that could have been improved, such as the way the relationship between the family re-develops. Or their reactions after naruto left, although i did enjoy their regret it didn't seem to fit with there previous actions. However, although a reason was given in the later chapters for their neglect although it was acceptable i wasn't a huge fan as it gave the family justification for their actions which tbh i didn't want to see. I understand that he is naruto and he will always give his family a second chance, however, i wasn't best pleased with how the family got justified in that manner and i think the author should of handled it in a much better way. With more focus on the emotional development between the family and naruto as opposed to the missions and such. I feel as if the missions could have been used in such a way that they orchastrated some devlopment in the relationship between his family as tbh. That was the main point of interest of the stort his relationship with his family and how he was severely neglected and betrayed. And although i can justify a lot of ehat you did such as, naruto grew up, he matured or the little girls were too young. I still cant find it in my heart to forgive his parents as what they did scars a child for life. And i feel that the way kushina and minato are trying to worm their way back in would instead antagonize naruto. And yet he didn't even have an emotional outburst once, which didn't bother me is something he would of 100% done as i could imagine he has years of built up resentment. And i think its all fine and good naruto can forgive his parent but i feel that although you should have made it the main focus of the story you pushed it aside. And instead of this halfheated forgivness and attempt of redeption from his parents their should be alot more emotions involved and events to prove that his parents truly do regret what they did. As so far aside for being incessently annoying and demanding towarda naruto they have not demonstrated that in their actions. If i was the one who wrote it i would have the same naruto and although he wants to forgive his family he has too much resentment and can't bring himself to do it. And through a series of emotional rollercoasters he does eventually forgive them right the end and maybe one of his parent sacrifises themselves to save naruto form being killed by kaguya or something causing naruto to finally lose his resentment towards his parents. And although it might be slightly bittersweet it would still keep people engaged as its never as simple as okay i forgive you, once that trust is gone there always a doubt and a certain distance between them. And i feel that although the parents are unworthy of forgivness i feel that by making the ultimate sacrifise they can truly convey their real feelings to him. But anyway the main point is that the emotional rollercoaster of the past neglect and the reasons for his past neglect should have been the main focus point with any battles or events being their to help opportunities to improve their relationship or perhaps worsen their relationship depending on how the author wanted it to go. And not the rinnegan power trip that i read, because at the end of the day power ups can only keep my intrest for so long what i wanted to see was how their relationship dynamica changed.
It is a very good story but I do not like harems, naruto and anyone other than hinata can go to hell I do not appreciate that kind of romance. All in all a good book I recommend reading.
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Good story but can you stop naruto from having so many people want to date or marry him it’s should just be naruto and Hinata NO ONE ELSE. Over all good story
Good job trying to add spice to the story can't wait to see how Hinata and Naroto would react to the new alliance formed by their parent. Also I like the fact that Naroto is making his parent yearn for his affection so they know just how he felt too.
I’m in need of exp hajdbakdbridbeidbrudhrbdjrvdjd risbe did f did r river rieheiwidhriehehrifhrbfodievroshr r five co d fic dbfkdvr did r jc r fiber
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Just posting this for my daily, haven't read it but the concept of this sounds interesting............................................................
Keep writing. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is an amazing story u made,i loved the part whn u made naruto strong in an instant,and naruto's chemestry with hinata was too well shown.
Spoiler enthüllen Shit only word to describe it gave up after one chapter shdhdjdjdhshsbsbsbdbdbdbbdbxbxbxbxbxbxbbxbxnxjdiekdnsosmbsjsosbshsidjsidhdhzusjsndjd
I finished this in one day, where's the rest? I demand more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It really good like wow I haven't read a good fan fic in a while but this one takes my second place and extra letters for the 140 thing dababkrjrjdjdnjdbdbd
WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE WHERE IS THE UPDATE
Honestly it started off really well before the 5 year time Skip where he became a beta b¡tch and starts forgiving people for all the crap they did not to mention going soft
Overall the story is very good in my opinion cuz there is many twist and turn that the story to get to MORE UPDATE PLZ, I like where this story going
There it is again a really good fanfic wich got dropped HOW GOD DAMN ANNOYING please continue it author.................................. ..
I really like this so far ive only read about half pf the chapters but so far i like it (filler--------------------------------------------)
good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough good but not enough
I like the imagination of another possibility if naruto has his parents live and has sibilings and how he was isolated from his sibilings and decided to get stronger on his etc totally the author has good writing skills and imagination even though its a fan fic
PLEASE CONTINUE THE FAN FIC! This is a really interesting one, so it is very much worth your time. Too bad it is almost half a year since the author last updated this.
This is the most amazing fan fic of naruto I've read it really seems well planned I really live this I think everyone who comes across this should read it it really is a really good book
Welp here we are. I'm gonna answer a few questions first. Yes, I'm back writing No, this isn't a regular thing I'm gonna update when I can and when I want to No, I'm not going to continue my other novel since it was a collaboration work with my ex. Yes, I'm single Now to the novel It's a Naruto Fanfiction that's it.