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Mc's too weak, a ssj1 who is weak asf, and the whole summon girls thing is making it worse especially when he seems to be taking more girls from the world itself and also the character as a whole gets on my nerves and its frustrating, my advice is a complete overhaul of the story
Nice shot at Isekai/alternative world. Weird harem. A must-read for fans of the Goku universe... Maybe some rewriting needed for earlier chapters / all these notes about "a story for later time"...?
You should write a list of the harem so people know what to expect also you need to change the powers of the mc because he is supposed to be the (LEGACY OF GOKU) GOKU doesn't use cultivation to get stronger I suggest doing a lot of watching the anime and reading the manga series all of them
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It was really great I loved it and I'm hoping to see more chapters soon the last chapter is really full of suspense can't wait to see what's next
Xp have not read yet so....... imma give it a 4,,,,,,,,,,, , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,..............................
Mc is a loser pathetic to be exact scared of everything even cannot use his full power story development is bad .Seriously you have one strongest power first thing u should do is unlock it instead of wasting time silly nick names and all disappointing really
Sorry about this poor rating. It's just I can't handle any more cliches. Furthermore you just dump things without even explaining it. SO yeah, I'm gonna drop this. Just good luck though. PSST. Improve your work without using cliches. You would have been a great author if you were serious in the character development and not just make the girls the typical -fall in love- with Mc. The Mc also has an attitude that would cause so annoyance even with development. But anyway this is just a rant.
This novel already become one of my favorite fanfic. Yes, in the beginning the story seem awfull. Even the power scale is ridiculous. I cant imagine a super saiyan become weak in that world. But yeah, its become better as the story goes.
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the reason my review is a 1 star is because there is no way to edit reviews so i will giving out reviews from time to time. how I will do so is my reviews will range from 1 star to 4 star. the first chapter was just horrible, hopefully the author's future chapters will give me a chance to give a better rating.
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I love this Novel. We are supporting you so please don't think of dropping it and continue to write it and update the chapters. Thanks for the novel .. ..
Well what do you mean by legacy of goku when there is no sayian like powers. There is no zenkai boost(wait wtf!!), why you put a wimp mc. I mean man he just does how others order him to do. He is spending all his momey on an unknown hirl and she still acts bossy. Well the part i dont like the most is that he is just another beta male character. Whats the use of harem that you wamt to catch like pokemons. Gohan was able to kill t-rex before vegeta attacked eathr and he is struggling against bears wtf?!..
Overall a great book here's to hoping it comes with a big harem but that's just my personal preference especially with elves and Beast women. This book has a great plot with lots of suspense so much that it's killing me!
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Fun story, great release rate and summons! awesome novel :) 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
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Typical japan light novel type, beta mc, cliche everywhere with lots of weaboo romanji words, grammar , stability of update and writing quality is 5 star
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En ves del Legando de Goku esto debería llamar un sistem de Plantillas porque prácticamente solo debe entrenar todas la transformaciones ya las tiene solo debe desbloquearlas prácticamente un videojuego sin interfaz
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Mc's too weak, a ssj1 who is weak asf, and the whole summon girls thing is making it worse especially when he seems to be taking more girls from the world itself and also the character as a whole gets on my nerves and its frustrating, my advice is a complete overhaul of the story
Nice shot at Isekai/alternative world. Weird harem. A must-read for fans of the Goku universe... Maybe some rewriting needed for earlier chapters / all these notes about "a story for later time"...?
You should write a list of the harem so people know what to expect also you need to change the powers of the mc because he is supposed to be the (LEGACY OF GOKU) GOKU doesn't use cultivation to get stronger I suggest doing a lot of watching the anime and reading the manga series all of them
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It was really great I loved it and I'm hoping to see more chapters soon the last chapter is really full of suspense can't wait to see what's next
Xp have not read yet so....... imma give it a 4,,,,,,,,,,, , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,..............................
Mc is a loser pathetic to be exact scared of everything even cannot use his full power story development is bad .Seriously you have one strongest power first thing u should do is unlock it instead of wasting time silly nick names and all disappointing really
Sorry about this poor rating. It's just I can't handle any more cliches. Furthermore you just dump things without even explaining it. SO yeah, I'm gonna drop this. Just good luck though. PSST. Improve your work without using cliches. You would have been a great author if you were serious in the character development and not just make the girls the typical -fall in love- with Mc. The Mc also has an attitude that would cause so annoyance even with development. But anyway this is just a rant.
This novel already become one of my favorite fanfic. Yes, in the beginning the story seem awfull. Even the power scale is ridiculous. I cant imagine a super saiyan become weak in that world. But yeah, its become better as the story goes.
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the reason my review is a 1 star is because there is no way to edit reviews so i will giving out reviews from time to time. how I will do so is my reviews will range from 1 star to 4 star. the first chapter was just horrible, hopefully the author's future chapters will give me a chance to give a better rating.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................[ lazy to write a long review but good one]
I love this Novel. We are supporting you so please don't think of dropping it and continue to write it and update the chapters. Thanks for the novel .. ..
Well what do you mean by legacy of goku when there is no sayian like powers. There is no zenkai boost(wait wtf!!), why you put a wimp mc. I mean man he just does how others order him to do. He is spending all his momey on an unknown hirl and she still acts bossy. Well the part i dont like the most is that he is just another beta male character. Whats the use of harem that you wamt to catch like pokemons. Gohan was able to kill t-rex before vegeta attacked eathr and he is struggling against bears wtf?!..
Overall a great book here's to hoping it comes with a big harem but that's just my personal preference especially with elves and Beast women. This book has a great plot with lots of suspense so much that it's killing me!
Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter
Fun story, great release rate and summons! awesome novel :) 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Spoiler enthüllen Typical japan light novel type, beta mc, cliche everywhere with lots of weaboo romanji words, grammar , stability of update and writing quality is 5 star
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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En ves del Legando de Goku esto debería llamar un sistem de Plantillas porque prácticamente solo debe entrenar todas la transformaciones ya las tiene solo debe desbloquearlas prácticamente un videojuego sin interfaz
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