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Story is good till so far.................................................................................continue with more chapters.............................
I really hope you continue your other novel, it's better then this novel.......................................................................... ............................
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5 stars because, one of my favorite novel is included in the fan fic //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Keep up the good work.................................................................................................................................................................... ....
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Beta mc, ****... Why this writer still make story maiden 101 ???? It is not anime dxd like early chapter :(.. Too bad... Not everybody read a maiden novel.... Why not u change a novel name and re write ????
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Boring😅😅 average Mc, virgin Mc, PUSSY Mc. righteous Mc, friendly Mc, honest Mc, hero complex Mc. Mc wants to save beauties,weak Mc,OP side characters he can even become a saint right now 😂😂😂😂... So those people like this kind of mc then go read it HAHAHAHAHAHAH. 😅 I'm getting cringe everytime I read😆
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The english quality has a huge margin to get better. But still in the middlebrsnge from what u can see in most original works. Cant tell too much about the story development yet but the mc seems kind of dumb and pus.sylike but welp we will see how it develops if we keep reading. Might see how it develops. Have a hard time reading cause the wrong and jumbled time conjugation added with the few vocabulary mistakes kinda ruins a reading experience u might get otherwise
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Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading!
Is too much Sauce .....................………................……………………................nani⁉️‼️❓❓...............................................................................................………………
Story is good till so far.................................................................................continue with more chapters.............................
I really hope you continue your other novel, it's better then this novel.......................................................................... ............................
Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes
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5 stars because, one of my favorite novel is included in the fan fic //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Keep up the good work.................................................................................................................................................................... ....
Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇Please🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇more🙇🙇athor chama🙇🙇🙇
😭😭😭😭😭whay not up,authoy😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😭😭😭😭😭whay not up,authoy😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😭😭😭😭😭whay not up,authoy😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😭😭😭😭😭whay not up,authoy😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😭😭😭😭😭whay not up,authoy😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪
Beta mc, ****... Why this writer still make story maiden 101 ???? It is not anime dxd like early chapter :(.. Too bad... Not everybody read a maiden novel.... Why not u change a novel name and re write ????
On😝😝😝😝😝my🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌way🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😪On😝😝😝😝😝my🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌way🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😪On😝😝😝😝😝my🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌way🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😪On😝😝😝😝😝my🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌way🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆😪
Boring😅😅 average Mc, virgin Mc, PUSSY Mc. righteous Mc, friendly Mc, honest Mc, hero complex Mc. Mc wants to save beauties,weak Mc,OP side characters he can even become a saint right now 😂😂😂😂... So those people like this kind of mc then go read it HAHAHAHAHAHAH. 😅 I'm getting cringe everytime I read😆
Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜Nice😍😍😍😍😍😍😍more😜😜😜😜gods😜😜😜😜
The english quality has a huge margin to get better. But still in the middlebrsnge from what u can see in most original works. Cant tell too much about the story development yet but the mc seems kind of dumb and pus.sylike but welp we will see how it develops if we keep reading. Might see how it develops. Have a hard time reading cause the wrong and jumbled time conjugation added with the few vocabulary mistakes kinda ruins a reading experience u might get otherwise
Spoiler enthüllen Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading! Looks interesting, keep writing, i’ll keep reading!
Is too much Sauce .....................………................……………………................nani⁉️‼️❓❓...............................................................................................………………