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BTS In 5000 Years
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We crouch into a fighting stance. Jimin's gaze is steady and staring into mine, and I try my best not to avert my eyes.
"START!"
Jimin lunges towards me with incredible speed, and I barely side step him. I throw my legs into the air, kicking the backs his knees with both of my pointed feet, and touch the ground with my fingertips to regain balance. He barely stumbles before dropping to the ground and spinning his legs at me. He catches my ankle and I fall hard on my back. He rolls on top of me and gives me a devilish grin inches away from me. Everything else is dark, but with him so close I can clearly see his face, his full lips, straight nose, dark marble eyes and straight dark eyebrows. His warm refreshing scent wafts up my nostrils, like calming scented candles that makes me want to breathe it forever. My eyes widen as he leans even closer to me, his hair falling slightly over his face.
"Too easy, huh?" His eyes dance with amusement.
I scowl, even though every inch of my skin is prickling with fire and excitement. I hook my leg on his torso and force him to fall back, and I take this small opportunity to flip him onto his back over my shoulder. But I barely manage to do it, even with momentum because dang he's heavy.
I stand over him and he lies on the ground, still smirking up at me. What the heck!? I jump onto him and swing him over so he lies on his stomach, and I pin him on the ground with his arms behind his back and my knees pinning his legs down. But something's off-- he doesn't seem to be trying as hard.
"C'mon," I growl into his ear, "don't hold back."
"Oh really?" He grins at me, laughter in his eyes, and I realize what he's thinking in his perverted mind. I flush deeply and he takes in my flustered state, and uses this to easily push me back, and he swings me up over his shoulder.
I gasp, and kick his chest and pound on his back. "Let me go!!"
Upside down, I see Vicky jogging towards us. "Alright, alright," she chides lightly, "that's enough. Let the poor girl down." He drops me onto the mats and I roll over into a crouch, glowering at Jimin. Vicky laughs. "Emma's a great fighter, but she seems to be distracted by you a bit."
A weird sound escapes my throat. My eyes widen and I see Jimin laughing. I inhale sharply and my breath hitches. Blood roars in my ears and I brush past Vicky, stomping towards the locker rooms.
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It's really good ,And pls update the story I really wanna know what happens next and also it looks like there is gonna be another couple 😀😁
Hi... i really hope u can finish this story soon.. I'm dying to know what happens next. It's pretty cool story.. even we both didn't make it to the main board BTS writing competition.. but there's people want to read our story.. right.. I'm waiting for the next chapter dear
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This is a great sci-fi story. It’s very interesting and funny!!!! I don’t really know BTS but this story is so explainable the characters are really great and I’m so exited for it to continue!
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Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Woahhhhh!!! 5000 years! I haven't read the whole thing but up to now, I like it. I will follow it. I will recommend it to everyone. It was fun reading it. Imagining Jungkook as 15 years, it's really awesome.
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I like it so far;) Its well written and an improvement to your other stories. Now that I'm starting to like BTS after you forced me to countlessly watch MV's and listen to their songs, this is interesting...
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Hehe this is my own story... I began story because I love writing fan fictions, I’m ARMY, and I love writing in general. And this is for the BTS contest too It’s also my first story on Webnovel! So excited~
Volumen 1
- 1 Prologue 5 years ago
- 2 VISITORS OR ALIENS? 5 years ago
- 3 ANDROMEDA 83 5 years ago
- 4 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-0 5 years ago
- 5 TOO EASY, HUH? 5 years ago
- 6 JUST ADMIT IT 5 years ago
- 7 DON'T PLAY WITH ME 5 years ago
- 8 THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE 5 years ago
- 9 WELL, HE'S ALIVE... 5 years ago
- 10 HE'S JUST SHY... 5 years ago
- 11 JACKPOT 5 years ago
- 12 MIRRORS 5 years ago
- 13 IS IT OUR FAULT? 5 years ago
- 14 such a waste... 5 years ago
- 15 ...HATE AT FIRST SIGHT? 5 years ago
Ah lol another 'review' This is to inform all the readers that have not seen the rest of Chapter 15;) *UPDATE**** Trust me, it's been super frustrating for me too. Webnovel won't let me publish more chapters. It's just a weird bug just for this story. I have two little stories I barely started, with like two chapters that are published each, and I am able to publish on those stories. But with 'BTS in 5000 Years', it for some reason won't let me pick the 'genre'. I went to inkstone.webnovel.com and filled everything else out, except the genre category only lets me choose 'select'. It works for my other stories but not this one. It's super weird and irritating. So what I've been thinking is I'll post all the ending chapters for this story onto this chapter and 'update' it. I can update but not publish. I know this sucks but this bug doesn't look like it's going away any soon. Or should I just create another story and name it "BTS in 5000 Years Part Two" or something like that and put the rest of the chapters there? I dunno. I'll just put all the chapters onto this one for now and guys let me know what you think about that. I'm so sorry about this inconvenience!! :(((((((