Trapped in Time

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PsyberRose

At the time of writing, only 3 chapters were up. Thus, it was only based on the events prior to the 'trapped in time' aspect as stated in the synopsis. Overall, it has promise. There's not much that can be said about the plot itself due to the more 'exciting parts' have yet to be touched upon. Writing Quality: Great. As English isn't my first language, any grammar mistakes (if any) was not noticed by me. The writing is smooth, the description clear and realistic. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: high potential. The build-up is good, indicating that the future chapters will be good as well. Character Design & World Background: Well written and realistic. Since it is 'modern earth', not much can be said about the 'creativity of world background'. However, it was depicted well and that's good enough for me. Overall, an enjoyable read. For those who would like mystery and intrigue, I believe this is for you.

LV 5

EmpressSK

Firstly the synopsis is very eye catching. Writing quality is is nice. Updates are quite frequent. The story is very interesting and attractive. The world background is well designed. And the characters are also very nicely designed and defined. The Author has done a nice job....👌 Keep up the good work! I will be following the story....

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LV 2

Venus_Sharma

The novel seems to be an amazing story, with a promise of mystery later on. It is educative also and I am sure children will like to read it too.

LV 4

KhanQi

Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.

LV 1

soulla

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LV 4

Ken_Raynous

The author's prose is quite simple but attractive, the sentences flowing smoothly. There are only a couple of minor errors that will not alienate readers from their reading flow. The author also does a good job when mixing paragraphs of the characters with informative segments. As for the rate of updates, it looks pretty constant so far. The story progresses slowly but surely at the moment. Just past half of the chapters published so far (and especially two thirds into it) the main conflict begins to unravel, as the story focused initially on introducing multiple characters throughout each chapter. Perhaps the author could have allowed herself to leave certain segments of his characters for later, or perhaps she could have intermixed them more with the plot itself so that it would have progressed more effectively. As for the characters, I have to give credit to the author. Considering that she had to focus on so many at the same time, they are all quite well-fleshed-out, written and portrayed convincingly so that readers can connect to them properly. The fictional universe, perhaps, is the greatest strength in this story. The plot remains within realistic margins for much of its stretch (I read that the author had to change from "realistic" to "science" fiction, and I certainly understand the reason). A lot of what I've read so far is focused on a group of students camping, and the author certainly knows how to make you feel part of that experience, from minor details to the exploration of nature itself. In general terms, this is a rather compelling slow-paced and character-driven story for nature lovers and readers looking for more grounded, adventure-themed sci-fi stories.

LV 5

RenuKakkar

There was no other way of posting this. I need to inform my readers that I had to change the genre of my novel from Realistic Fiction to Science Fiction. In Realistic Fiction you need to hover around reality like you write about a cancer patient and how he combats his health issues arising due to chemotherapy etc. This is close to reality. You cannot deviate to extremely imaginative situations. Realistic Fiction for did not give me much scope for my novel. Earlier, I could not change the genre but I finally managed to do so from Realistic Fiction to Science Fiction with the help of the mobile app. Now, I can write about many things which may not be possible now but may be possible in the future. If matter is truth, I do mention in the creator's notes.

LV 4

babyljaie46

The story is getting exciting! There are lots of amazing information most people do not come across with. And as a nature lover myself, the plots makes just make me excited for the next!

LV 4

cloudgugu

This is quite an informative novel. I actually learn a lot. I even googled blue pine. Lol.. N they are beautiful.😅 Four chapters, we can see that it still at the introduction stage which is really cool for we get to know the main setting of "Trapped in time"(just an assumption). If author managed to exploit the botany+mystery this novel can be awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Ps:I feel like reading one of my fav manga 'cage of eden'.

LV 15

Rxel

Interesting. The synopsis drew me in since it's quite unique. So far, the story is developing nicely and coming along smoothly even though there are some errors it does not setract from the enjoyment of the reading. Give it a try. Keep up the good work, author!

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ANIL_CHOUDHARY

This is a very nice story. This story motivate me about myself, It is based on reality Overall this is very interesting story I just press my thumb on five stars. I hope renu mam will come soon with a new story.

LV 1

Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going! Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow? XXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP

This work is both relaxing and entertaining to read. With only five chapters out I wasn’t able to get a complete picture, but what I was able to read was promising. If I may give you some pointers? My apologies if you find them uncalled for, my intentions are good. Sometimes the writing needs some slight polishing. One of them: “Yes of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied. “He has been waiting for you,” she added. I believe there is a pass in time before she adds ‘He has been waiting for you’? If not it can be perfectly written as; “Yes, of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied, “he has been waiting for you.” But I assume there is a time pass (she walks trough the room for instance) my advice in these situations is to write - for example - this down; “Yes of course ma’am,” the personal secretary replied. She went back to typing before adding, “He has been waiting for you.” Another tip I hope to give you is to add less ‘she said’ or ‘he added’ in your dialogue. It’s unnecessary and tiring to your reader. Other small things like; retelling something (meaning you describe something happening and then write down it happening are also not always necessary) Example: After voicing all instructions like a bullet train, the principal told her that she‘s dismissed. “You may go now,” said the principal. These of course are all simply some small style changes that don’t deserve to called ‘real errors’. I hope you have a lot of fun continuing your work, keep going!

Very nice story. I have saved it in my library to read. The story is educative and enjoyable. It is a mixture of reality and fiction. Since it is not earmarked for a particular type of audience it can be read by children evwn.

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Bikash2410

Botany is my honours so i like it and the character is well described with actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck

LV 5

RenuKakkar

Hello everyone, I have started writing again. Since I started working it became practically impossible for me to post chapters, as I was getting home around 8 p.m. daily and was not in a position to do anything. Now, I am free again and have picked up the threads of the story and wish to finish the story it within 2-3 months. Chapter 147 posted just now shows the Earthlings meeting the members of the Administrative Council on the Mother Ship as it heads to Titan.

LV 5

Angelyay

Overall the story quite good, however there are quite a few errors and inconsistencies in the story, I like the botany PhD since it isn’t a cliche, the students were introduced all together but I feel like it would’ve been better to individually introduce them as the story goes on so the reader doesn’t have a sudden influx of information

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lycheepearlmilktea

The concept is very interesting and I haven’t seen many botanists before! I think the beginning starts off a little slower, and it could be more engaging with more events and dialogue. But the writing style is clean, and made for a pretty great read!

LV 5

RenuKakkar

The characters of the novel travel to a flat satellite that looked like a flat Earth, created by some scientists as a joke about 7000 years ago. They meet the inhabitants and also see the different world where all things can talk. Before you touch anything you need to seek permission. They also meet the Aliens who come to the Magical World (the flat satellite) to get supplies. They see spaceships being guided to land by the scientists of the Magical World. I want to take the story further to three Romances, in the next volume. But at present, due to some health issues, I am running to hospitals, getting tests done, etc. hence, I am not able to devote much time. I will be posting 2-3 chapters till my condition stabilizes for the operation etc. Once I recover, I will go back to posting 5 chapters a week.