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Everything is good but… the author has not made a new chapter so it went from 5 to 4.2 this is my honest review.
why? well enel can destroy large areas with ease mc can fall dead tired if he activate his devill fruit on his hand... i don't even care this rating is about right LoL
Mc beta. Mc pathetic. Mc stupid. Mc with hero complex. Mc submissive. Mc cuck. Mc is typically asian protagonist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The author writes dialogue like this… ,,Hello” If you want to blow your brain out by reading the dialogue then read this story but it happens EVERY SINGLE TIME. 1/5 rating
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The only thing I want to say ... When the next chapter ??? We want more of the army panda **** ... Excellent job clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
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I really like your novel are you going to continue or dropping this novel because it's been more than 8 months since last update please give some notice if you are dropping it
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This story is amazing!! The MC has the perfect personality for his birth, he is OP as ****, and isn’t a little *****. The author did a really good job on the story, and the way he changed it with the added characters was perfect. Keep up the good work.
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i love this book plsss update new chapter..... ...... ..... ......i need more chapter............ ............................................
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Writing quality is good, very few mistakes. World Background is also good, it is clear that the author knows a lot about the One Piece world. The beginning of this story was nice, I liked the way the MC was developing and how he was growing in this world. And then, suddenly, this became a crack fic and lost all seriousness the moment he set sail. *SPOILER ALERT* He just kidnaps most of the beautiful girls in the series then convinces them to join his crew somehow with ridiculous reasons (but it's not a harem??), then he also kidnaps hundreds of strong characters to build his own organization and they magically accept to join. At this point, he's just playing arround with future knowledge about the world and a background that allows him to get whatever he wants without making effort. Although the MC is not extremely OP yet, he has 0 challenges to face and no one is going to harm him. This turned out to be like the hundreds of other bad fanfics on this site, with a MC that doesn't suffer at all and faces no real challenge.
interesting story before he met boa hancock and her sister.. mc become pathetic loser after meet them.. he always trashtalk to his grandfather even after he use his authority to give mc df he desire, but mc become idiot pathetic loser who act like servant and let her abuse him.. for what reason you make him become idiot like that? i don't understand why this stupid story have high rating
Man such a good story no womder people liked it so much man i m a fan of ur story and i m at the pandaman chapter and man is it hilarious hahahhaah plz continue u r an awesome writer i,we support u
No one would be able to read it after MC shows he is a pathetic loser for boa hancock pu*ssy. I read this story some time before, but didn't leave a review then. Doing it now. He saves boa hancock from slavery, and she's absolute bi*tch to him. She hates him because he's celestial, and unconcerned of her fate(which she should for her sisters sake even if she hates him) she keeps on abusing him and being a bi*tch to him. But MC let's it all go over his basic pride and dignity and grovels in front of her to give him a way to let her stay with him. I have never ever seen such a pathetic display. It's like the auhtor wanted the MC to be as pathetic as possible. All for to make her stay with him and then somehow this loser MC will gain her "love" aka pu*ssy. Congrat for getting your waifu!!! 👏 Now i was not expecting her to su*ck MC. Her position is perfectly reasonable. It's the MC pathetic attempts to desperately make boa stay with him. The sheer amount of grovelling, spinelessness, and patheticness was tangible. It looked like he'll die if she didn't stay with him. I don't know what kind of readers can keep on reading the fic after this, but looks like many did and keep on highly rating it. All i can say for them is, good you got your waifu one way or another. The OC fruit, and the "twist" of having the loser celestial family being actually competent and all the time they were just pretending to be retarded is distasteful as well. And MC will go pirate route as well. Nothing original.
I dont really understand, but this started off pretty good regardless of how people were trashing it. But then right around chapter 19 he suddenly starts acting like a fking 7 year old spoiled kid? Not to mention what is with some of his crew choices? Anyway good luck with your story.
Really great work i thought most one piece fan fics are trash but you did a really good job and even though i hate harem and when author focus on s*x you handled it pretty well without the usual harem isekai bull****!!!!!
Weird MC that's all i can say i don't understand any reason to some of the MC decision. couldn't read past chapter 14. It was pretty interesting in the beginning until he met BOA HANCOCK, in from there it start going down hill.. got 2 star because of writing quality and story was quite interesting in the beginning
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I love your novel, but I was wondering why you have stopped focusing on this novel and started a new novel when this novel is amazing? I haven't started to read your other novel yet I'm sure it will be great but I hope you can at least balance the 2 novels out and not focus on 1 instead of the other. Great work though love your novel!
Heftigst der Praktikum aber habe ich die Schlüssel für das gegen ich kann nicht kommen weil lch bin krank heute das gegen ich kann nicht kommen weil lch bin krank heute das kann nicht kommen weil lch bin ich
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Man, congratulations your 2 stories are amazing, they have a lot of potential, if you continue like this I believe you will be among the 5 best. Please don't drop any and keep up the good work you are doing, me and many of my friends support you and look forward to more chapters.
Everything is good but… the author has not made a new chapter so it went from 5 to 4.2 this is my honest review.
why? well enel can destroy large areas with ease mc can fall dead tired if he activate his devill fruit on his hand... i don't even care this rating is about right LoL
Mc beta. Mc pathetic. Mc stupid. Mc with hero complex. Mc submissive. Mc cuck. Mc is typically asian protagonist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The author writes dialogue like this… ,,Hello” If you want to blow your brain out by reading the dialogue then read this story but it happens EVERY SINGLE TIME. 1/5 rating
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The only thing I want to say ... When the next chapter ??? We want more of the army panda **** ... Excellent job clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
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I really like your novel are you going to continue or dropping this novel because it's been more than 8 months since last update please give some notice if you are dropping it
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I really enjoy your novel. I hope to read more soon. Very nice work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
This story is amazing!! The MC has the perfect personality for his birth, he is OP as ****, and isn’t a little *****. The author did a really good job on the story, and the way he changed it with the added characters was perfect. Keep up the good work.
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i love this book plsss update new chapter..... ...... ..... ......i need more chapter............ ............................................
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Spoiler enthüllen Writing quality is good, very few mistakes. World Background is also good, it is clear that the author knows a lot about the One Piece world. The beginning of this story was nice, I liked the way the MC was developing and how he was growing in this world. And then, suddenly, this became a crack fic and lost all seriousness the moment he set sail. *SPOILER ALERT* He just kidnaps most of the beautiful girls in the series then convinces them to join his crew somehow with ridiculous reasons (but it's not a harem??), then he also kidnaps hundreds of strong characters to build his own organization and they magically accept to join. At this point, he's just playing arround with future knowledge about the world and a background that allows him to get whatever he wants without making effort. Although the MC is not extremely OP yet, he has 0 challenges to face and no one is going to harm him. This turned out to be like the hundreds of other bad fanfics on this site, with a MC that doesn't suffer at all and faces no real challenge.
interesting story before he met boa hancock and her sister.. mc become pathetic loser after meet them.. he always trashtalk to his grandfather even after he use his authority to give mc df he desire, but mc become idiot pathetic loser who act like servant and let her abuse him.. for what reason you make him become idiot like that? i don't understand why this stupid story have high rating
Man such a good story no womder people liked it so much man i m a fan of ur story and i m at the pandaman chapter and man is it hilarious hahahhaah plz continue u r an awesome writer i,we support u
No one would be able to read it after MC shows he is a pathetic loser for boa hancock pu*ssy. I read this story some time before, but didn't leave a review then. Doing it now. He saves boa hancock from slavery, and she's absolute bi*tch to him. She hates him because he's celestial, and unconcerned of her fate(which she should for her sisters sake even if she hates him) she keeps on abusing him and being a bi*tch to him. But MC let's it all go over his basic pride and dignity and grovels in front of her to give him a way to let her stay with him. I have never ever seen such a pathetic display. It's like the auhtor wanted the MC to be as pathetic as possible. All for to make her stay with him and then somehow this loser MC will gain her "love" aka pu*ssy. Congrat for getting your waifu!!! 👏 Now i was not expecting her to su*ck MC. Her position is perfectly reasonable. It's the MC pathetic attempts to desperately make boa stay with him. The sheer amount of grovelling, spinelessness, and patheticness was tangible. It looked like he'll die if she didn't stay with him. I don't know what kind of readers can keep on reading the fic after this, but looks like many did and keep on highly rating it. All i can say for them is, good you got your waifu one way or another. The OC fruit, and the "twist" of having the loser celestial family being actually competent and all the time they were just pretending to be retarded is distasteful as well. And MC will go pirate route as well. Nothing original.
I dont really understand, but this started off pretty good regardless of how people were trashing it. But then right around chapter 19 he suddenly starts acting like a fking 7 year old spoiled kid? Not to mention what is with some of his crew choices? Anyway good luck with your story.
Really great work i thought most one piece fan fics are trash but you did a really good job and even though i hate harem and when author focus on s*x you handled it pretty well without the usual harem isekai bull****!!!!!
Weird MC that's all i can say i don't understand any reason to some of the MC decision. couldn't read past chapter 14. It was pretty interesting in the beginning until he met BOA HANCOCK, in from there it start going down hill.. got 2 star because of writing quality and story was quite interesting in the beginning
Spoiler enthüllen I love your novel, but I was wondering why you have stopped focusing on this novel and started a new novel when this novel is amazing? I haven't started to read your other novel yet I'm sure it will be great but I hope you can at least balance the 2 novels out and not focus on 1 instead of the other. Great work though love your novel!
Heftigst der Praktikum aber habe ich die Schlüssel für das gegen ich kann nicht kommen weil lch bin krank heute das gegen ich kann nicht kommen weil lch bin krank heute das kann nicht kommen weil lch bin ich
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Man, congratulations your 2 stories are amazing, they have a lot of potential, if you continue like this I believe you will be among the 5 best. Please don't drop any and keep up the good work you are doing, me and many of my friends support you and look forward to more chapters.
Lemme say that the dynamic between Boa and MC is dogshit