Reviews of Tanuki Rise of the Yokai Clan by akikan40 - Webnovel

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4.65

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Caos_Caos_

a very good novel i like it not a master piece but i like the very smooth story and how the ch design is very good the story is a little short because of that the ending is a rushed but for the rest it is ok!

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Darkph30nix

I wasn’t paying much attention to the chapter numbers and titles, turns out chapter 313 is the end! Wah? Wah do dis 2 me? Btw mr Author san, fancy trying your hand at a reality creation type novel? I’m pretty sure your Percy mind can come up with something unique right?

2mth
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slave_trader

It wasn’t good but it wasn’t bad. I mean it’s the same as most of aikans story’s, travelling to different worlds and only doing a small part of the plot then moving on and never going back to complete it. It’s rlly annoying tbh but it’s not even the worst part abt this book, what’s rlly annoying is the fact that the mc keeps going on and on abt how he can’t go back to his starting world because the protagonist there has a god as a backer so he doesn’t want to get rid of him until he’s strong enough beat the god that’s backing the protagonist. yet at the end of the book instead of a hard fight w the god we get the mc easily taking down the protagonist along with all of the end of series villains and getting all of the girls that were with the protagonist easily without the god even showing up. Like it was honestly such a let down, he legit only spent the last couple chapters in his original world then it ended. Author started so many new plots in other worlds but didn’t even finish them. Tbh I’m not rlly surprised cause a lot of aikans works are let downs. I just finished reading ultimate being and it was just as anticlimactic as this one along with all the unfinished plots and bad ending. It’s understandable that the mc didn’t finish a lot of the plots because he wanted to get stronger so he could finish the plot in his starting world but all of that talk about having to get stronger was invalidated when he didn’t even meet the god at all and took over everything easily. He also got half of a learning talent that let him copy nearly everything except racial skills as his first ability because the herioine was still to young and he had to wait till she was of age yet when he finally gets the full thing he does nothing with it and it was just wasted. Like I honestly don’t get why aikan always ends his books when it’s not even finished. It’s always rushed endings that are so bad for books that had the potential to be rlly good.

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2mth
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Otakubaku

Shit was an enjoyable ride. Read it in a week but it was good time hope to see some more work like this from others

6mth
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Sahil_SA

Five 🌟 and do nothing..... .............. ......................................................................... .......................

6mth
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Yojen_Olape

Amazing , make a season 2 because it's wonderful story and fun to read, I enjoy reading this one, and I hope you can update season 2 or create one

9mth
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11mth
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anonimo_af

It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey

1yr
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AP_tama
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bro I would be happy if you would write fanfiction about Bleach or overlord

1yr
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CrazeR
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I have no complaints about this fanfic , since the mc is quite the 'chad' here different from your usual beta Japanese protagonist

1yr
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Pix3L
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Another doormat mc from akikan with no character development keep it up!

1yr
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AncestorDuck

Just noticed that this novel is finished, which makes me feel obliged to leave a review here. Writing Quality: 3/5 The author has been active for several years now, and has written several thousand chapters, which makes you think that writing should be clean and without many mistakes, right? Unfortunately not here. Despite all the experience, there are still some mistakes in most of the chapters. Not only that, but the character interactions often don't feel smooth. Still, the novel is quite readable. Stability of Updates: 5/5 What else can I say about this? Daily uploads, which is definitely one of the strengths of this novel. Story Development: 4/5 As a fanfic, the author has the advantage that a rough storyline is already given. The author often uses his OC well. Unfortunately, the plot sometimes feels forced by the system. Character Design 3/5 Again, as above, the author has the advantage of using existing characters. The OCs are okay, but not completely fleshed out. The fact that characters are already predefined cannot only have advantages, as the author should/must keep their personalities as in the original. Unfortunately, he often fails to do so. World Background 4/5 Here too, the author has a certain basic framework because of the world jumps. What bothers me here, are the many power systems that collide. I would like to see a work from the author, in which he focuses on one world / power system. Your lovely SupremeLokiLN

1yr
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Eneous

Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!

1yr
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Qwerty_Star

Saya tidak tahu arc dunia mana di setiap bab nya. Tolong kasih tanda kalau bisa. Saya tidak mood untuk membaca arc dunia yang tidak saya suka seperti OPM. Saya melihat arc tensura lalu saya cari tapi tidak menemukan kelanjutan nya dalam bab, apa itu hilang, atau tidak dilanjutkan ke dunia itu? -_-

1yr
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Ruless_1

hmm, next sport fanfic? ...................................................................................................................

1yr
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DaoistMrogFL

Me encantaban los primeros fic de akikan donde por lo menos hablaba con las mujeres antes de llevarlas a la cama... ahora parece que cuando le ven la cara al prota ya se van a acostar con el en el proximo capitulo... pero bueno esperare por los nuevos trabajos

1yr
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Asta_4626

@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.

1yr
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Quinton1200

the Story ended alittle fast but overall it was amazing

1yr
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Venerable_love

Honestly, the book is 5 star and best of akikan40 (according to me ). as there is no whimpy mc who takes too long for character development plus he is not goody two shoes and is active unlike the rest of mc who are just too passive,also it got a proper ending, Although I am Little reluctant that it ended as I was hoping for it to go longer but still an excellent novel.I hope for a novel with mc having similar personality with this one .Truly a great read.Adiossss....

1yr
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1yr
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DaoistYuMsoa

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1yr
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Caitiff
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a fun and endearing story about a tanuki who changes his fate.

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Rikijo

Thank you for bringing such art to this world, thank you for finishing it, and thank you for all of your works!

1yr
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Syed_8196

I really like the story development along with the character design. A very good FanFiction highly recommend.

1yr
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MR_HOOD

Sangat bagus..tolong buat lagi novel seperti siscon,mangaka...🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

1yr
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K_M24
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than you for making such a great fan pic

1yr
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Daoist3PgKGI

Coba buat novel sama dengan anime isekai nonbiri nouka tapi di dunia DXD. Soal kekuatan MC, MC meminta kepada ROB untuk menjadi chaos king (ame no mikoboshi dari Marvel). Tambah unsur group chat anime. Anggota group anime 1. MC ( Takamiya Shin ) 2. Mio ( DATE A LIVE ) 3. Maya Yotsuba ( mahouka ) 4. Natasha R ( Marvel ) 5. Ryougi Shiki ( kata kyouka ) Itu saja ide dari ku min[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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KIdN
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1yr
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Hassan_Tehfe

Good book Amazing experiance With overall development [img=strong]

1yr
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Melitia_Snek

Just read the last chapter as it came out and realized I haven't posted a review, so here it is;Great writing quality, even though it is similar to more chineses writing styles, I think it gives the Author's books a more unique taste. 5/5 stars.Story development is also very good, with only some small hiccups and a few forced narratives. Also, the rushed ending makes me give it 4/5 stars.Character design is also very good for the main characters, but the one that don't have much focus on them feel like NPCs at times, so 4/5 stars.Great update stability. 2 chapters a day, but since they have fewer words than a normal FF, it's like one chapter a day, which is also very good, considering the Author has other books. 5/5 stars.Great world building, as he integrates the MC's character into each world seemlessly, but since they are all worlds created by other Author's, 4/5 stars.

1yr
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Caos_Caos_

a very good novel i like it not a master piece but i like the very smooth story and how the ch design is very good the story is a little short because of that the ending is a rushed but for the rest it is ok!

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Darkph30nix

I wasn’t paying much attention to the chapter numbers and titles, turns out chapter 313 is the end! Wah? Wah do dis 2 me? Btw mr Author san, fancy trying your hand at a reality creation type novel? I’m pretty sure your Percy mind can come up with something unique right?

2mth
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slave_trader

It wasn’t good but it wasn’t bad. I mean it’s the same as most of aikans story’s, travelling to different worlds and only doing a small part of the plot then moving on and never going back to complete it. It’s rlly annoying tbh but it’s not even the worst part abt this book, what’s rlly annoying is the fact that the mc keeps going on and on abt how he can’t go back to his starting world because the protagonist there has a god as a backer so he doesn’t want to get rid of him until he’s strong enough beat the god that’s backing the protagonist. yet at the end of the book instead of a hard fight w the god we get the mc easily taking down the protagonist along with all of the end of series villains and getting all of the girls that were with the protagonist easily without the god even showing up. Like it was honestly such a let down, he legit only spent the last couple chapters in his original world then it ended. Author started so many new plots in other worlds but didn’t even finish them. Tbh I’m not rlly surprised cause a lot of aikans works are let downs. I just finished reading ultimate being and it was just as anticlimactic as this one along with all the unfinished plots and bad ending. It’s understandable that the mc didn’t finish a lot of the plots because he wanted to get stronger so he could finish the plot in his starting world but all of that talk about having to get stronger was invalidated when he didn’t even meet the god at all and took over everything easily. He also got half of a learning talent that let him copy nearly everything except racial skills as his first ability because the herioine was still to young and he had to wait till she was of age yet when he finally gets the full thing he does nothing with it and it was just wasted. Like I honestly don’t get why aikan always ends his books when it’s not even finished. It’s always rushed endings that are so bad for books that had the potential to be rlly good.

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2mth
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Otakubaku

Shit was an enjoyable ride. Read it in a week but it was good time hope to see some more work like this from others

6mth
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Sahil_SA

Five 🌟 and do nothing..... .............. ......................................................................... .......................

6mth
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Yojen_Olape

Amazing , make a season 2 because it's wonderful story and fun to read, I enjoy reading this one, and I hope you can update season 2 or create one

9mth
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11mth
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anonimo_af

It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey It was a good journey

1yr
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AP_tama
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bro I would be happy if you would write fanfiction about Bleach or overlord

1yr
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CrazeR
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I have no complaints about this fanfic , since the mc is quite the 'chad' here different from your usual beta Japanese protagonist

1yr
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Pix3L
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Another doormat mc from akikan with no character development keep it up!

1yr
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AncestorDuck

Just noticed that this novel is finished, which makes me feel obliged to leave a review here. Writing Quality: 3/5 The author has been active for several years now, and has written several thousand chapters, which makes you think that writing should be clean and without many mistakes, right? Unfortunately not here. Despite all the experience, there are still some mistakes in most of the chapters. Not only that, but the character interactions often don't feel smooth. Still, the novel is quite readable. Stability of Updates: 5/5 What else can I say about this? Daily uploads, which is definitely one of the strengths of this novel. Story Development: 4/5 As a fanfic, the author has the advantage that a rough storyline is already given. The author often uses his OC well. Unfortunately, the plot sometimes feels forced by the system. Character Design 3/5 Again, as above, the author has the advantage of using existing characters. The OCs are okay, but not completely fleshed out. The fact that characters are already predefined cannot only have advantages, as the author should/must keep their personalities as in the original. Unfortunately, he often fails to do so. World Background 4/5 Here too, the author has a certain basic framework because of the world jumps. What bothers me here, are the many power systems that collide. I would like to see a work from the author, in which he focuses on one world / power system. Your lovely SupremeLokiLN

1yr
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Eneous

Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!

1yr
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Qwerty_Star

Saya tidak tahu arc dunia mana di setiap bab nya. Tolong kasih tanda kalau bisa. Saya tidak mood untuk membaca arc dunia yang tidak saya suka seperti OPM. Saya melihat arc tensura lalu saya cari tapi tidak menemukan kelanjutan nya dalam bab, apa itu hilang, atau tidak dilanjutkan ke dunia itu? -_-

1yr
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Ruless_1

hmm, next sport fanfic? ...................................................................................................................

1yr
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DaoistMrogFL

Me encantaban los primeros fic de akikan donde por lo menos hablaba con las mujeres antes de llevarlas a la cama... ahora parece que cuando le ven la cara al prota ya se van a acostar con el en el proximo capitulo... pero bueno esperare por los nuevos trabajos

1yr
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Asta_4626

@akikan40, please refrain from creating stories that consist solely of copied main characters. All your novels seem to feature protagonists with identical personalities, revolving around a God complex and infidelity towards female characters. I can appreciate your desire to craft a harem narrative, but consider making the protagonist more relatable and ensuring the storyline possesses a sense of common sense.

1yr
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Quinton1200

the Story ended alittle fast but overall it was amazing

1yr
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Venerable_love

Honestly, the book is 5 star and best of akikan40 (according to me ). as there is no whimpy mc who takes too long for character development plus he is not goody two shoes and is active unlike the rest of mc who are just too passive,also it got a proper ending, Although I am Little reluctant that it ended as I was hoping for it to go longer but still an excellent novel.I hope for a novel with mc having similar personality with this one .Truly a great read.Adiossss....

1yr
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1yr
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1yr
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Caitiff
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a fun and endearing story about a tanuki who changes his fate.

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1yr
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Rikijo

Thank you for bringing such art to this world, thank you for finishing it, and thank you for all of your works!

1yr
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Syed_8196

I really like the story development along with the character design. A very good FanFiction highly recommend.

1yr
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MR_HOOD

Sangat bagus..tolong buat lagi novel seperti siscon,mangaka...🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

1yr
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K_M24
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than you for making such a great fan pic

1yr
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Daoist3PgKGI

Coba buat novel sama dengan anime isekai nonbiri nouka tapi di dunia DXD. Soal kekuatan MC, MC meminta kepada ROB untuk menjadi chaos king (ame no mikoboshi dari Marvel). Tambah unsur group chat anime. Anggota group anime 1. MC ( Takamiya Shin ) 2. Mio ( DATE A LIVE ) 3. Maya Yotsuba ( mahouka ) 4. Natasha R ( Marvel ) 5. Ryougi Shiki ( kata kyouka ) Itu saja ide dari ku min[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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1yr
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Hassan_Tehfe

Good book Amazing experiance With overall development [img=strong]

1yr
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Melitia_Snek

Just read the last chapter as it came out and realized I haven't posted a review, so here it is;Great writing quality, even though it is similar to more chineses writing styles, I think it gives the Author's books a more unique taste. 5/5 stars.Story development is also very good, with only some small hiccups and a few forced narratives. Also, the rushed ending makes me give it 4/5 stars.Character design is also very good for the main characters, but the one that don't have much focus on them feel like NPCs at times, so 4/5 stars.Great update stability. 2 chapters a day, but since they have fewer words than a normal FF, it's like one chapter a day, which is also very good, considering the Author has other books. 5/5 stars.Great world building, as he integrates the MC's character into each world seemlessly, but since they are all worlds created by other Author's, 4/5 stars.

1yr
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