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author can you please continue Blue Lock: Rising Underdog it has so much potential so i don't want to see it getting wasted so please continue it and you should mass apdate if you can't apdate every week
At first I loved this fanfic but what is this about everyone dying and Jack just returning as an 11 year old becoming a jedi? That just ruined it. Maybe he will travel back in time but then he will be op since all that training and it would be more entertaining if he slowly got more powerful as a mercenary or smuggler. Maybe I will change this review later but for now 2 stars.
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Author, I use a translator to read and I want to say that the part in the ship with the zombies and more than trouble... We do not understand if he is in a vision or if his friends are dead. Personally I hope not because it was the touch of originality of this story, the fact that they are 3 added a cachet to the story but otherwise great fanfiction
only giving 4 stars for the insensitivity towards my curiosity at what happens next. POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!! PLZ🥺🙏 I'll give you the fifth star if you do.
One of the best star wars fanfics about wish it the author updated the story more as it is interesting ......................................................
I've seen quite a few Star Wars fan fics and You have done a great job with this so far I love every chapter. Please keep going for the sake of a good Star Wars fan fic Continuing to exist.
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You should have them come into my Star Wars fan fic worLd and dO a crossover. but this book is absolutely amazing. check it out guys. Promise you this will not make you regret❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️📖💕 Keep it up man!!
I really love this story. You don’t really see a lot of Star Wars fan fictions on this app. But of the few on this app this is one of the best ones. I got really invested in this story while reading it. Wondering how he will mess with time to save his friends. Or who the charred man on the ship will do in the future. To how John and Asohka (Probably mispelled thr second name) will get together in the future if they do with me hoping that they do.
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This is one of my favorite sw ffs and in my opinion it’s also better than most ffs on this platform easily in my top 5 <3 ____________________________
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Haven't even read a single word yet 😂 I am giving 5 stars bc I have mad respect for how you completely **** on the guy that complained about the irregular release rate. If you're writing for fun, do it for you and not for other people. Mad respect my dude.
i feel like the story would have been better if you removed the system but just kept everything else. these are just extra letters to fill in the. number capacity in in the review so pay them no heed.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you very much 📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
I also love this book because usually System books are single characters who use it while this a trio of friends who use the system together and with lots of adventure
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Great story so far nice idea of neutral force powers and system is nice however with so little updates people will delete your story from library's or favorite in browser.
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Now i know i put max 5 stars, but in reality i would rather there be a slightly more consistant update, even just once a week! I love the story, the writing method, everything, excwpt the uncertain updates. I can't tell if he dropped it or just takes a long time to write!
Loving the story so far, it's the first star wars fan fiction I've read where I don't need to know a whole lot about the star wars universe.
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yay a sw fan fic will change rating as the story progresses =) are your chains broken fellow sith is your passion overflowing? then lets use the force to make the author write more Muhahaha >:) *cough* need to work on ma evil laugh
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Honestly didn’t really like the beginning but after he joined the Jedi temple I started enjoying the story a lot more. Realy liking it rn so hope it continues
Spoiler enthüllen author can you please continue Blue Lock: Rising Underdog it has so much potential so i don't want to see it getting wasted so please continue it and you should mass apdate if you can't apdate every week
At first I loved this fanfic but what is this about everyone dying and Jack just returning as an 11 year old becoming a jedi? That just ruined it. Maybe he will travel back in time but then he will be op since all that training and it would be more entertaining if he slowly got more powerful as a mercenary or smuggler. Maybe I will change this review later but for now 2 stars.
Spoiler enthüllen Author, I use a translator to read and I want to say that the part in the ship with the zombies and more than trouble... We do not understand if he is in a vision or if his friends are dead. Personally I hope not because it was the touch of originality of this story, the fact that they are 3 added a cachet to the story but otherwise great fanfiction
only giving 4 stars for the insensitivity towards my curiosity at what happens next. POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!! PLZ🥺🙏 I'll give you the fifth star if you do.
One of the best star wars fanfics about wish it the author updated the story more as it is interesting ......................................................
I've seen quite a few Star Wars fan fics and You have done a great job with this so far I love every chapter. Please keep going for the sake of a good Star Wars fan fic Continuing to exist.
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You should have them come into my Star Wars fan fic worLd and dO a crossover. but this book is absolutely amazing. check it out guys. Promise you this will not make you regret❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️📖💕 Keep it up man!!
I really love this story. You don’t really see a lot of Star Wars fan fictions on this app. But of the few on this app this is one of the best ones. I got really invested in this story while reading it. Wondering how he will mess with time to save his friends. Or who the charred man on the ship will do in the future. To how John and Asohka (Probably mispelled thr second name) will get together in the future if they do with me hoping that they do.
Spoiler enthüllen This is one of my favorite sw ffs and in my opinion it’s also better than most ffs on this platform easily in my top 5 <3 ____________________________
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Haven't even read a single word yet 😂 I am giving 5 stars bc I have mad respect for how you completely **** on the guy that complained about the irregular release rate. If you're writing for fun, do it for you and not for other people. Mad respect my dude.
i feel like the story would have been better if you removed the system but just kept everything else. these are just extra letters to fill in the. number capacity in in the review so pay them no heed.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you very much 📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
I also love this book because usually System books are single characters who use it while this a trio of friends who use the system together and with lots of adventure
Spoiler enthüllen Great story so far nice idea of neutral force powers and system is nice however with so little updates people will delete your story from library's or favorite in browser.
Nxkgzljxlydlldddddddiysooooywiiiiid6iwiiidooysssssi5ddd86ss85s85s84s85s85aa85ssa85s95s9so6so5so6sitstIrItItsaisits8ts9tso5so6do6sotzsso5z5sitItIrairsira
Spoiler enthüllen 22tlsi5dsirao7e85wqqñuddddditsww888888fltaaai5dddlhsitisugzkgddohdohdohdoydlysiifoywiyffffffpufoydñjfñjfñjdljfñufñufludllxlhxlfohzo gtsitsitssskykkkslhzlhzlhddlydlydlhzlhxljxljxhlzits8ydi5wiydkkktsitdditsufddffutssssoooosiiydddiiiiiiftssssspu
Now i know i put max 5 stars, but in reality i would rather there be a slightly more consistant update, even just once a week! I love the story, the writing method, everything, excwpt the uncertain updates. I can't tell if he dropped it or just takes a long time to write!
Loving the story so far, it's the first star wars fan fiction I've read where I don't need to know a whole lot about the star wars universe.
HHBfJraursssktzkyzktzitzi5so6do6foydoydludlufñucñkcllhxmhhhzmhdkydeo6doyzzddoydoydl7ehrlyrlydoydoydi6do6dllrlllr5ludlydo7dodyoydoydoudñufñufñufpppifpifpppfo7d85e96dee86fdeoeld
Spoiler enthüllen yay a sw fan fic will change rating as the story progresses =) are your chains broken fellow sith is your passion overflowing? then lets use the force to make the author write more Muhahaha >:) *cough* need to work on ma evil laugh
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Honestly didn’t really like the beginning but after he joined the Jedi temple I started enjoying the story a lot more. Realy liking it rn so hope it continues
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