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66.66% ATLANTIS:Will Rise Again / Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Kapitel 2: Chapter 1

Episode 1

My name is Atlas Jnr. the last son of Atlas II, and it's my destiny to make sure that Atlantis rise again, this I've been told times without number by Hippodamia, my guardian, who has been taking care of me since we escape the sinking of Atlantis after the Trident of Poseidon disappeared.

Hippodamia is a worshipper of Apollo, for this she was giving the power to see visions (but only those which pleases Apollo), so when she told me that it's my destiny to save Atlantis i believed her.

On the eve of my 16th birthday, Hippodamia called me into her room to inform me that she has been bless with a vision by Apollo, she said "Apollo has bless me with another vision Atlas, your journey to raise Atlantis begins tomorrow on your sixteenth day in this dimension, Apollo showed me that the artifacts needed to regain Poseidon's Trident is in seven cities, the first city is Phoenicia", where in Phoenicia is this artifact i ask and she reply with she doesn't know but believe Apollo will direct me when i get there, this prompt me to ask if she's not going to follow me but she reply and said "it's your adventure Atlas, you must embark on this journey yourself, Apollo will make sure you meet people who will help you on your journey".

On my sixteenth birthday i embark on my journey to Phoenicia through sea, it took us (me and the ship passengers) six days before we arrived at Sidon shore; a city-state in Phoenicia the city of Princess Jezebel, who later become Queen Jezebel the wife of king Ahab of Israel.

I enter the city and see many wonders of the kingdom of Phoenicia, the people were living happily as everybody has his/her work to do, they smile and greet everybody they meet, the girls in Phoenicia especially in Sidon are born seductress as their beauty is so....., well they are beautiful and they smile a lot. Phoenicians are maritime people, great maritime people, they were know for their mighty ships adorned with horse's heads, and their purple dye, which make people to call them the purple people.

Since i don't know what i'm looking for in Phoenicia, i decide to enter a lodge and stay there for the night or till when Apollo will show me the place to go.

Two days in Sidon, and no vision or anything from Apollo, i decide to venture into Tyre another city-state in Phoenicia. As i was going to the shore to enter a boat that will convene me to Tyre, i began to have this feeling that i'm being followed but whenever i look back i see nothing, so i brace up myself for whatever will happen and continue my walk to the shore, on getting to the sea, there is only one boat left and the boat is not going to Tyre but to Arvad and since its still in Phoenicia, i board the ship and prepare my mind for an adventure in Arvad, during my stay in Sidon I've heard of how Arvad is a great town filled with magic, sorcery, witches and wizards, so i was expecting to see many wonders in Arvad, unknown to me that its Apollo directing my part.


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Temmason Temmason

This is my first novel here, so please be nice, i need your constructive criticism please don't withheld them.

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