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I love this story but I think I love the old one more because the new one is more rushed it is not self-explanatory and it isn't it just as if you are telling yourself the story like if you read the old one it is more self-explanatory like you this every thing is they also said it's more described but the new one it is not it's just telling a story like tell me your service thank you should understand what I mean but like I said before I love the old one more than the new one.
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This one is better than the previous one as it seems that the mc actually has a brain unlike the last time where he could have done much more with not even half the effort and also the characters in this one seem a bit better. The only problem anyone can have with this is that the author has given up on this story entirely... or has he? Who knows even though I thought maybe since he is rewriting the story he would care for it... sigh...
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The characteristics of the characters are lack and we could use some more background story for the god system and the world they are on but it's well written overall.
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Really good. I liked the old version, buy this one seems to be more developed and better. And now I'm just going to write the characters. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
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Found this novel today and am enjoying it immensely. I am looking forward to how this novel moves forward and have high expectations for this novel overall.
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Nice novel, you have a good level system better than the old one , and upload 2 chaps a day that would be wonderful or make a storry a bit longer 1200 words or more
Here we go this one review is for bonus chapters that you promised. Now for the story I really love the chapter and hope this will be better than the previous one by leaps and bounds. Thanks keep writing.
I read the old version and if this revamp is better then what we have is a gem waiting to be discovered. The old version had dynamic characters, a unique world setting, and a more realistic feel to its kingdom building aspects compared to the other **** that is on this cite. Expect great things.
I love this book so much that when I found put that the old version was being dropped I got extremely sad but now that there is a newer and better version I am extremely happy and I hope that the author will continue to write
Great book, haven't started reading yet, but if the past correlated to the future, and this book will be better than the last, then I already know it will be great!
I am the author of The God System, and I am rewriting this because I feel like I had messed up my previous work. That was the first real book I had ever attempted making, and as a newbie author, of course, mistakes would be made, so I am now attempting to give it a second go. I hope I have as good of a fanbase as I did previously, so strap yourselves in because we are going to go on an amazing ride!
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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I love this story but I think I love the old one more because the new one is more rushed it is not self-explanatory and it isn't it just as if you are telling yourself the story like if you read the old one it is more self-explanatory like you this every thing is they also said it's more described but the new one it is not it's just telling a story like tell me your service thank you should understand what I mean but like I said before I love the old one more than the new one.
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This one is better than the previous one as it seems that the mc actually has a brain unlike the last time where he could have done much more with not even half the effort and also the characters in this one seem a bit better. The only problem anyone can have with this is that the author has given up on this story entirely... or has he? Who knows even though I thought maybe since he is rewriting the story he would care for it... sigh...
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The characteristics of the characters are lack and we could use some more background story for the god system and the world they are on but it's well written overall.
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Really good. I liked the old version, buy this one seems to be more developed and better. And now I'm just going to write the characters. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
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Found this novel today and am enjoying it immensely. I am looking forward to how this novel moves forward and have high expectations for this novel overall.
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Nice novel, you have a good level system better than the old one , and upload 2 chaps a day that would be wonderful or make a storry a bit longer 1200 words or more
Here we go this one review is for bonus chapters that you promised. Now for the story I really love the chapter and hope this will be better than the previous one by leaps and bounds. Thanks keep writing.
I read the old version and if this revamp is better then what we have is a gem waiting to be discovered. The old version had dynamic characters, a unique world setting, and a more realistic feel to its kingdom building aspects compared to the other **** that is on this cite. Expect great things.
I love this book so much that when I found put that the old version was being dropped I got extremely sad but now that there is a newer and better version I am extremely happy and I hope that the author will continue to write
Great book, haven't started reading yet, but if the past correlated to the future, and this book will be better than the last, then I already know it will be great!
I am the author of The God System, and I am rewriting this because I feel like I had messed up my previous work. That was the first real book I had ever attempted making, and as a newbie author, of course, mistakes would be made, so I am now attempting to give it a second go. I hope I have as good of a fanbase as I did previously, so strap yourselves in because we are going to go on an amazing ride!
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing