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It is the Best Fanfic Of TDG. MC is OP, Perverted & Clever. Sort Of Plain, as writer didn't add any twist or new plots in this, but nonetheless it was a great Fanfic 😘😘😘
The story is decent overall but the MC is a leech. • Writing Quality - 4/5 • Story Development - 3/5 - The pacing is too fast to be honest, but I don't want to rate this a 2.8 Stars so I made this a 4/5 instead of 3/5. • Character Design - 3/5 • Updating Stability - 1/5 - You know why. • World Background - 3/5 - TDG's world background has always been 'meh'. • Overall - 3.0 Stars - I rate as honestly as I could.
Hai penulis yang baik! Aku masih menunggu kelanjutan cerita ini, sepertinya sudah berbulan-bulan, atau bertahun? Aku lupa. Tapi aku tetap menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya! Semoga penulis suatu saat akan melanjutkan ceritanya, terimakasih!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Excellent simply..i like the style if mc..plus no to ziyun as it will affect canon.. Keep going author ..pleaae dont stop and we want more girls
Hai penulis, ini cerita yang sangat luar biasa. Aku telah membaca beberapa kali dan aku masih tetap menyukainya. Aku akan menunggu pembaharuan cerita ini suatu hari nanti, semoga penulis tetap sehat dan bahagia.
RIP i guess, the last author mention about sickness it might be that he/she become incapable of writing anymore. hopefully to keep writing if still able but RIP in case he/she have passed away
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The author just seems to do random things. There isn’t really any plot it’s just a slice of life fic. The worst thing is that actions don’t have consequences and the Mc is strictly following canon. The synopsis is also completely wrong
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**** is not even fan fic becuse the story is the same but deferent mc, the same fucking plot. and mc doesnt show his worth. **** this ****. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!
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Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Wow, one of the only few TDGs that make the mc leave Tiny World and follow the plot. Very well done. Keep up the good work. Also, like someone said, we are tempered by Mad Snail so, we don't really mind waiting for the next releases, just as long as you don't drop it.
Man for such a great story it's sad that there are no up dates!!!!!! I hope it has not been tossed away by the author!!!!!!!Man for such a great story it's sad that there are no up dates!!!!!! I hope it has not been tossed away by the author!!!!!!!
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more when i can read a new chapter i cannot wait anymore and this novel make me falling in love to all story line in all chapter i hope can read it every day
It’s a great TDG fan-fic, still unsure why it hasn’t updated for a while now. But I’ll wait till it does. It would be sad if I do not finish reading the story.
I'm so happy that you are doing better!!!!!!!! I am also happy that new chapters will be on the way!!!!! Keep up the great work you have a lot of talent!!!!! God bless you!!!!!
Completely pointless wank pic without any ounce of creativity. Do not bother reading this if you value your time. There are better TDG fanfics to read.
Not sure by this is rated so high, it's just a cannon rehash, mc is too scared to take anything that ni li got from cannon like the demon pot, wants to keep everything the same... If I wanted to read cannon I would go read the original.
It is the Best Fanfic Of TDG. MC is OP, Perverted & Clever. Sort Of Plain, as writer didn't add any twist or new plots in this, but nonetheless it was a great Fanfic 😘😘😘
The story is decent overall but the MC is a leech. • Writing Quality - 4/5 • Story Development - 3/5 - The pacing is too fast to be honest, but I don't want to rate this a 2.8 Stars so I made this a 4/5 instead of 3/5. • Character Design - 3/5 • Updating Stability - 1/5 - You know why. • World Background - 3/5 - TDG's world background has always been 'meh'. • Overall - 3.0 Stars - I rate as honestly as I could.
Hai penulis yang baik! Aku masih menunggu kelanjutan cerita ini, sepertinya sudah berbulan-bulan, atau bertahun? Aku lupa. Tapi aku tetap menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya! Semoga penulis suatu saat akan melanjutkan ceritanya, terimakasih!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Excellent simply..i like the style if mc..plus no to ziyun as it will affect canon.. Keep going author ..pleaae dont stop and we want more girls
Hai penulis, ini cerita yang sangat luar biasa. Aku telah membaca beberapa kali dan aku masih tetap menyukainya. Aku akan menunggu pembaharuan cerita ini suatu hari nanti, semoga penulis tetap sehat dan bahagia.
RIP i guess, the last author mention about sickness it might be that he/she become incapable of writing anymore. hopefully to keep writing if still able but RIP in case he/she have passed away
Fk why no one make novel for battle through heaven where madara come or obito or fking Naruto system fight xiao you Ddksjsjsjksksksj Sjsjjsjsksksjskskskkskskskkskskskskkskskskksksksk
I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man I am a simple man
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-+-+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++±+++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---++++++++++++++++++++++±+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++beautiful chapter.
The author just seems to do random things. There isn’t really any plot it’s just a slice of life fic. The worst thing is that actions don’t have consequences and the Mc is strictly following canon. The synopsis is also completely wrong
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**** is not even fan fic becuse the story is the same but deferent mc, the same fucking plot. and mc doesnt show his worth. **** this ****. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!This is a very good story and needs to be finished!!!!
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LOL LOL LOL Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!
Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!Good story Buy writer walked away on the story!!!!!!!!!!
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Wow, one of the only few TDGs that make the mc leave Tiny World and follow the plot. Very well done. Keep up the good work. Also, like someone said, we are tempered by Mad Snail so, we don't really mind waiting for the next releases, just as long as you don't drop it.
Man for such a great story it's sad that there are no up dates!!!!!! I hope it has not been tossed away by the author!!!!!!!Man for such a great story it's sad that there are no up dates!!!!!! I hope it has not been tossed away by the author!!!!!!!
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more when i can read a new chapter i cannot wait anymore and this novel make me falling in love to all story line in all chapter i hope can read it every day
It’s a great TDG fan-fic, still unsure why it hasn’t updated for a while now. But I’ll wait till it does. It would be sad if I do not finish reading the story.
I'm so happy that you are doing better!!!!!!!! I am also happy that new chapters will be on the way!!!!! Keep up the great work you have a lot of talent!!!!! God bless you!!!!!
Completely pointless wank pic without any ounce of creativity. Do not bother reading this if you value your time. There are better TDG fanfics to read.
Not sure by this is rated so high, it's just a cannon rehash, mc is too scared to take anything that ni li got from cannon like the demon pot, wants to keep everything the same... If I wanted to read cannon I would go read the original.