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please update!!!!!!! the story is sooo good the main character sound veryy cute from what I can read, and i want to know what will happen so please update and I just wanted to tell you you're a really good author
Is this already dropped? Did author gave up on this story? (ｑβ’ΜοΈΏβ’Μｑ) But I really love it!!!!!β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ I can feel it! I'm sure this one will be good if continued!!ππππππππππ I'll still be waiting for the next chapter!βΊοΈAs long as I'm hooked, I'll wait even how long will it take.π Unless it's dropped already...π but hope this is not...ππππππππππππ
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
plz update I really got hooked on this story it's really good and I see really good potential here :) β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
I've already read up to chapter 7 on scribblehub.com and I came here to see if I can read more. Unfortunately this book had been abandoned since its last updated 1 year ago. It's such a waste for such a beautifully written book. I wish I could write like the author. This is so sad, just when I finally found an interesting book and now it's actually been abandoned. ππ I wish author-san could just delete his/her book so no more readers like me would fell so heart broken.
Spoiler enthΓΌllen
A finite interior fulfills the bitmap inside the conditioned teenage. The pattern sings the fallen mumble. A geography possesses an utter taxi. A squad suffers in the vicar.
Interesting story but very slow in updating chapters . ππ»β .....Hopefully the writer can give more chapters . Pls let us know are you still continue to write or not. Thank you.
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Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
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Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones
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Exp and spirit stones So is there magic? Updates anytime soon? ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ ππππππππππππππ
Still waiting . . . . . . π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί ππππππππππππππ ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ
UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! !PLEASE ! ! ! ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ Or at least tell us where else you may have posted this story, please !!!
UPDATES PLEASE ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί Iβve already read the 7th chapter on another site, it was great ππΌ Please donβt leave me hanging π
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππOnly two chapters but very well written! Iβm looking forward to many more! ππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
As the story has just begun there isnβt much to tell or grade. However, I will give credit where itβs due. As far as I know BL stories are rare and as itβs just two chapters so far, I would still call it good. As I am a curious person, I wonder where the story will go. Saying more would really spoil the read, so read and judge yourself if itβs something for you. Will it go through the classic and predictive route or will the author provide a story with another spin of the theme? Will it be humorous or tragic? So many questions waiting to be answered through the storytelling. As itβs just the beginning I rate this with three stars and it might change in the future depending on the content. Although I must say I enjoy reading this far.
IS THIS STORY STILL CONTINUING??π I can't wait for the next chapterπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Spoiler enthΓΌllen please update!!!!!!! the story is sooo good the main character sound veryy cute from what I can read, and i want to know what will happen so please update and I just wanted to tell you you're a really good author
Is this already dropped? Did author gave up on this story? (ｑβ’ΜοΈΏβ’Μｑ) But I really love it!!!!!β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ I can feel it! I'm sure this one will be good if continued!!ππππππππππ I'll still be waiting for the next chapter!βΊοΈAs long as I'm hooked, I'll wait even how long will it take.π Unless it's dropped already...π but hope this is not...ππππππππππππ
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
plz update I really got hooked on this story it's really good and I see really good potential here :) β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
I've already read up to chapter 7 on scribblehub.com and I came here to see if I can read more. Unfortunately this book had been abandoned since its last updated 1 year ago. It's such a waste for such a beautifully written book. I wish I could write like the author. This is so sad, just when I finally found an interesting book and now it's actually been abandoned. ππ I wish author-san could just delete his/her book so no more readers like me would fell so heart broken.
Spoiler enthΓΌllen A finite interior fulfills the bitmap inside the conditioned teenage. The pattern sings the fallen mumble. A geography possesses an utter taxi. A squad suffers in the vicar.
Interesting story but very slow in updating chapters . ππ»β .....Hopefully the writer can give more chapters . Pls let us know are you still continue to write or not. Thank you.
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience
Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones
π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί Exp and spirit stones
Exp and spirit stones So is there magic? Updates anytime soon? ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ ππππππππππππππ
Still waiting . . . . . . π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί ππππππππππππππ ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ
UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! !PLEASE ! ! ! ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ Or at least tell us where else you may have posted this story, please !!!
UPDATES PLEASE ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί Iβve already read the 7th chapter on another site, it was great ππΌ Please donβt leave me hanging π
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππOnly two chapters but very well written! Iβm looking forward to many more! ππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
As the story has just begun there isnβt much to tell or grade. However, I will give credit where itβs due. As far as I know BL stories are rare and as itβs just two chapters so far, I would still call it good. As I am a curious person, I wonder where the story will go. Saying more would really spoil the read, so read and judge yourself if itβs something for you. Will it go through the classic and predictive route or will the author provide a story with another spin of the theme? Will it be humorous or tragic? So many questions waiting to be answered through the storytelling. As itβs just the beginning I rate this with three stars and it might change in the future depending on the content. Although I must say I enjoy reading this far.
IS THIS STORY STILL CONTINUING??π I can't wait for the next chapterπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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