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Kapitel 28: Valkyrie Profile

Yuuki was waiting for them to change their clothes. He had chosen perfect costumes for each of them. He wanted to see them as soon as possible.

"Hey, are you done?" Yuuki asked.

The door was opened and revealed Utaha who had changed into a new costume.

"Are you satisfied?" Utaha said while crossing her arms and tapping her feet.

"Hmm, you're beautiful," Yuuki praised her and made her blushing.

"Hmph, don't think, I'll forgive you even if you praise me," Utaha turned her head.

Yuuki nodded at his choice for Utaha. She wore a white shirt, a skimpy black skirt, black stocking, and glasses.

"Come sit beside, let's wait for the next girl," Utaha wrinkled her eyebrow but sighing. She walked toward him and sat beside him.

"Have you really wanted to dress like this?" Utaha looked at her new clothes.

"Yeah, I've always imagined, it would be nice to have a beautiful secretary beside me," Yuuki teased.

"Hmph, my salary is high!" Utaha looked away.

"It's okay, we can slowly discuss it," Yuuki talked to her who kept ignoring him.

They kept until the door was opened, they saw Tsubasa looked very embarrassed and tried to cover her skirt.

"Waaa, this skirt is too short!" Tsubasa tried to cover it.

"No, this is great, I've always imagined that this image is perfect for you," Yuuki praised.

"Ugh, Yuuki, can I change?" Tsubasa still tried to cover her skirt.

"Hey? You're in that clothes now, you should call me 'Master', right?" Yuuki teased.

Utaha looked at him as if trash but Yuuki ignored her. He knew that it was secretary job to look at his boss as if trash.

"Ugh, Ma-ma.." Tsubasa was embarrassed.

"Hmm, Ma, what?" Yuuki teased.

"Master," Tsubasa was blushing.

Yuuki knew that Tsubasa was a tomboy so he had to dress her in feminine costumes. He had told her to change into French maid costume. He had to admit that it was very hard to hold his libido around many beautiful girls.

"Good, sit here, let's wait for the last one," Yuuki nodded.

When Yuuki said this both Utaha and Tsubasa also looked at the door with expectation. They knew that their costumes were several times better than Eriri.

"Sawamura-san, can you hurry to come out?" Utaha teased her.

"Yeah, Eriri, come out!" Tsubasa also excited.

Then, the door was opened slowly and revealed Eriri who had a very embarrassed expression on her face. She tried to cover her body with her hands but it was futile. Her costume was too revealing. She looked at Yuuki with a hateful gaze.

"I hate you!" Eriri showed her tiger teeth.

Yuuki nodded in satisfaction, he had thought that Eriri wouldn't wear it but it was out of his expectation. He had given her a bunny costume with very revealing clothes. He had to admit it was suited her well.

"Hmm, as expected it's very suited for you, Eriri," Yuuki gave her a thumb.

"Grrr, hurry up tell us your game plan!!" Eriri was screaming.

Yuuki nodded, "But before I tell my plan, I must ask everyone in this room to not reveal any information about my game."

A game project is very important and no one should know its content until it is ready being sold to the masses.

They nodded at him with serious expression ignoring their costumes.

"Good, I'll tell you the story of my game, 'Valkyrie Profile'," Yuuki told.

---

In the village of Coriander, a 14-year-old girl named Platina lives with her cruel parents. The village falls upon hard times and her friend Lucian finds out that her parents are going to sell her into slavery. The two run away, but Platina inhales the toxic pollen of poisonous flowers in a nearby field and dies in Lucian's arms.

Lenneth Valkyrie awakens in Asgard and is tasked by the god Odin and goddess Freya with recruiting the einherjar for their war with the Vanir and the coming of Ragnarok. Her first recruits are the princess Jelanda and mercenary Arngrim. After the arrogant Arngrim inadvertently embarrasses her father, Jelanda plots revenge but is kidnapped by a traitorous court minister and transformed into a monster. Lenneth helps Arngrim kill the monster and claims Jelanda as an einherjar. Arngrim, having unknowingly aided Jelanda's captors, kills the man responsible but commits suicide rather than be arrested. At Jelanda's request, Lenneth makes Arngrim an einherjar but Odin and Freya find him lacking the qualities of an einherjar and refuse to accept him into Valhalla so Arngrim remains at Lenneth's side.

During Lenneth's travels, she meets Brahms, lord of the undead and enemy of Odin, who possesses her sister Silmeria and the necromancer Lezard Valeth, who lures her to his tower. Lenneth learns that Lezard has been experimenting with half-elven homunculi to use as vessels to attain godhood. Lezard wants Lenneth for himself, but she refuses to cooperate and destroys his experiments. The sorceress Mystina, one of Lezard's rivals, discovers what he has been doing and takes his last remaining homunculus. When he discovers her theft, Lezard freezes her body while she is spirit walking, effectively killing her. Lenneth recruits her, though Odin and Freya refuse to accept Mystina into Valhalla and, like Arngrim, she remains with Lenneth.

---

"That is the background story of my game," Yuuki said.

They had been gawking at him listening to his story about his game. They had never thought his idea was so novel and made them excited to help him.

"Let me help you to make this game!" Eriri raised her hand.

"Me too!" Tsubasa raised both of her hands.

"Can I help you with a manuscript?" Utaha said.

Yuuki looked at the 3 girls in front of him. He had never thought that they were interested in helping him in his project.

"What about your manga?" Yuuki looked at both Eriri and Tsubasa.

"And, what about your novel?" Yuuki looked at Utaha.

"It's fine! I can do both!" Eriri said.

"Yeah, me too!" Tsubasa said.

"It's easy for me," Utaha said.

Yuuki thought for a while but shook his head.

"No, remember your dream, do you want to stop it just to help me to make this game?" Yuuki said.

"But, this will be too much work for you, Yuuki!" Utaha said.

"Let us help you!" Tsubasa said.

"I don't want to let my chance to learn under you!" Eriri said with full of conviction.

Yuuki took a deep breath and finally gave in.

"Listen to my instruction and don't mess up," Yuuki said seriously.

"YES!!" They said at the same time and had a smile on their face.

Yuuki let out a helpless sigh and let them help him in the process making the history within the game industry.


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There a lot of information dump, bear with it.

Kapitel 29: Misfortune Ramen

Valkyrie Profile is more like a platform game than a traditional role-playing video game.

There are 24 playable characters in the game. However, some of them can only be obtained in hard mode.

Lenneth is the primary protagonist of Valkyrie Profile, a recently awakened warrior-maiden and servant of Odin, who has been tasked with recruiting the einherjar to fight with the Æsir in their war against the Vanir and prevent the destruction of Asgard in Ragnarok. Lenneth is one of the three goddesses of fate (the other two being her sisters, Hrist and Silmeria) the three apparently share the same body, though only one is awake at any given time and can be distinguished by their hair color and armor.

Loki is revealed to be the final antagonist of Valkyrie Profile. He is half-Æsir and half-Vanir by blood. Although he has been accepted by the Æsir, he is not completely trusted by either side. Odin and Freya sealed his power so that he remains a young version of himself. He seeks the power of the Four Treasures, which will give him the power to challenge Odin.

---

Yuuki was working 10 person work by himself. He made his physical stronger with 'Arc of Embodiment', it was easy to make this game himself, but he needed to teach everyone.

Yuuki had instructed both Eriri and Tsubasa who help him drawing the characters within the game.

Yuuki had also told Utaha about the gameplay this game. She had to make each scenario in the game. He was unsatisfied several times and made her very frustrated. He kept telling her to change the story until he was satisfied.

They were working until late night forgetting about the time.

"It's already very late, how about you sleep here?" Yuuki offered. They could sleep in his manga studio and he would back to his apartment but his word being misinterpreted by Eriri.

"Wh-what? Do you want to sleep with us after you dressing up us?" Eriri liked a cat whose tail being stepped on.

"Yuuki, really? Do you want to sleep with us?" Tsubasa was blushing.

Utaha was calm since they had slept together in the past.

"Is it only hentai thing that is on your head?" Yuuki looked at Eriri with a tired expression.

"HEY! WHO IS THE ONE WITH ONLY HENTAI THING!!!" Eriri was angry.

"I didn't tell you that I'll sleep together, I'll sleep on my apartment in the next door," Yuuki said.

Eriri was blushing that she was misunderstanding him.

"The-then, tell me earlier!" Eriri crossed her arms and turned her head.

Yuuki shook his head in response, 'A girl in puberty is a pain'.

"I'll call my dorm manager," Tsubasa took her cellphone. She talked for a while and gave an 'Ok' sign to them.

"I'll call my mother too," Eriri called her parents.

They were looking at Eriri who was blushing hard.

"WHO IS STAYING IN MY BOYFRIEND HOUSE!!" Eriri threw her phone away and Yuuki caught it.

"Hey! Be careful," Yuuki almost being hit by her cellphone.

"Please, take care of our Eriri," A voice from the cellphone said.

Yuuki wanted to answer it but Eriri stole it first and closed the call.

"I'll sleep here," Eriri said while gasping.

"Sure," Yuuki nodded.

---

Yuuki helped them to set up a futon on his manga studio. He was quite hungry and asked them whether they wanted to eat with him or not.

"Ha? Eating at night? Do you want me to get fat?" Eriri said.

"I still try making my muscle like you so I'm not eating, Yuuki," Tsubasa said.

"No, my weight is increasing because of you!" Utaha looked at him with a hateful gaze.

Yuuki nodded and didn't mind that they wouldn't follow him. He went back to his room to take his jacket.

Yuuki came out and searched something good to eat. He was walking around the street and found someone he didn't expect.

"Hey! Koizumi!" Yuuki shouted and Koizumi turned her head.

"Yuuki," Koizumi nodded.

Yuuki didn't want to eat alone, he thought it was better to eat with someone.

"Do you want to eat something?" Yuuki asked.

"Yeah," Koizumi nodded.

"Do you want to eat together?" Yuuki asked.

"I don't mind but I'll be the one who chooses the restaurant," Yuuki nodded in response.

They walked together and arrived at the shoddy ramen store.

"Ramen Ogura 'so good, it's to die for'?" Yuuki looked at Koizumi, "Do we eating in here?" The store was just too shabby.

Koizumi didn't talk and entered the store.

Yuuki could only sigh and followed them.

"WELCOME!!!" A big old man greeted them.

Yuuki and Koizumi sat in the counter but the chef stopped him.

"Onii-san, can you not sit in there? That place is a memorial place of my loyal customer," The old man said.

"Yeah, I don't mind," Yuuki changed his seat, "So, Ogura-occhan, what is the most favorites ramen here?" The name of the store was Ogura, so he thought the old man name was Ogura.

"Hahaha, the most favorites ramen in this store is..." Before Ogura said it Koizumi beat him first.

"Yama Ramen That's so Good to Die for," Koizumi said.

"Hahaha, Ojou-chan, you know your stuff," Ogura was smiling, "How about you, Onii-san?"

"Call me Yuuki, I'll have the same as her," Yuuki had also wanted to try that menu.

"Ok! Two Yama Ramen That's so Good to Die for!!" Ogura was cooking the ramen.

When Ogura was cooking the ramen, Yuuki asked Koizumi.

"Do you what is so special about this ramen?" Yuuki asked.

"The ramen in here is cheap, tasty, and the bamboo shoot is absolutely marvelous!" Koizumi kept talking and Yuuki quietly listening.

The Ogura-occhan was also joined in one or twice in their conversation.

The ramen was almost ready and both Yuuki and Koizumi were ready to eat it until they heard the door of the store was opened.

"WELCOME!!" Ogura-occhan greeted them.

Yuuki turned his head and his face started to go pale. He had never thought his trip to eat ramen would meet this death god.

"ACHOO!!" The old man with a mustache sneezed.

"Ah, it's chilly isn't it," Ogura-occhan said.

Yuuki didn't look at the old man with a mustache but the little kid who come together with him.

"Ah, it's onii-chan!" The little kid was surprised seeing him.

Yuuki twitched his lips several times for meeting him twice.

'Oh, God, why you let me meeting him,' Yuuki wanted to escape from this store.


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Oh, the death god appeared.

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