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It reads like the MC is a kid who keeps on putting coins into a gumball machine only to get exactly the gumball he wants every time except that the gumball magician's story is probably be more believable than this.
I can see what the author wishes to accomplish, but there are far too many inconsistencies and holes in the narrative. I made it through the first 20 chapters or so, and within these the characters make all kinds of illogical and flat out stupid decisions/actions. A middle aged man with years of experience working in the guild let's an arrogant 16 year old walk all over him and drag an experienced unlicensed teenager into a dungeon. The MC who is described as 'top of his class' and 'very smart' is so determined to be an adventure he's willing to commit suicide by monster. A man who's hearing is so good he can hear an invisible floating ghost move in the air, but can't notice an enemy opening a stone door 50 ft from him. A kid with apparently no physical talents or adventuring experience at all comes back from a single dungeon dive and can suddenly duck and dive a D rank warrior while simultaneously trash talking to rile up a crowd without getting hurt at all? The story has little to any logical or narrative consistency unfortunately, as there are many more issues similar to these. It needs to be heavily edited to make it more cohesive.
This Novel is a must read. When you start reading you can't stop yourself. I am hoping for the author to get well and continue the story...
A very enjoyable novel, with plenty of action. The MC has a pretty unique power,(compared to most other novels at least, lets not talk about ES: V), and the interaction between characters is well written. This novel deserves more attention to be honest. 10/10
Read up to chapter 64 The story is well writen, which is actually quite rare, si that's a good point. It's easier for me to point out things that bother me, so this review may seem a bit negative, but really i believe it's an overall good one. So, i think the story lacks kind of a main storyline. While reading, i felt like going through sidequests. Also i think the characters may be better with more background, (more character development). This is somewhat done for the MC but it could bé developped be it for the MC or side characters (really feel like MC go through people without being influenced in any way) Some World development could be nice, but it's not necessary if you focus on character development and adventures. Overall i think the story lacks some kind of progression being story or character development.
This is one of those few fantasy novels where the MC grows slowly and learns after experiencing stuff albeit a bit faster than others.I also like the fact that all characters have proper characters like real people as even the characters grow. None of the characters are stereotypes.They all seem human. I will support this even if it goes premium.
I love the story keep it up author 😀😀😀😀 I love how you write and how the story progress so far hope to read more of your works in the future
I want to see comic... Why webtoon comic so little... Give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Manhwa toooooo... Where are them??? More more more i m exhausted with manhwa manga n comic Mmm
I want to see comic... Why webtoon comic so little... Give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Manhwa toooooo... Where are them??? More more more i m exhaisted
This is the first book i have read with different power. Unlike with some with superstrenght or whatsoever. Worth to read especially for those who wants something new. In addition, i am looking forward for more history of greek gods.
The Story practically reads itself, I haven't noticed any flaws in grammar or spelling! Great work on that part. Story is a good ol' fantasy setting with light gaming elements mixed in, which hits the spot just right for me. Characters don't really stand out negatively, but maybe the Author will work on making them unique and alive a little bit more :) Can recommend!
really good story and its my favrite on the site 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
The story has been very interesting and the main character has developed well. This story captivated me with its medieval background and the different magic of the protagonist.
Read the other comments... I'm bad at explaining myself... But please author continue writing this novel.............................................................
nice book.. adventure seen by an artist is quite fun to read.. hope there is more about music and stuff more.. like his weapon of choice might be common guitar or maybe some kind of tribal flute might be unique..
Pretty good so far hope this keeps going. Like the MC and the slow buildup, there is plenty of world building early on but the plot gets set up slowly but surely. Still waiting to see what is going to happen with the blood mother at the moment, sad I'm gonna catch up with the last few chapters soon..
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I recommend that you read this novel before this goes premium! Quite a positive thinker I am, right Lonelytree? Need more OP moments if you want this to be popular... OP whether in intelligence, luck, strength or what so ever....
Pls dont stop posting. Amazing concept, and thus far perfectly executed. ............................................................................................................................................
I'm loving this story, is one of the best story's of this site, the grammar is good and the world background is really good too, the mc have a nice personality but he is really *****, this I'm don't like I'm hope that he mature quick because is really irritating seeing he hesitate
This fantasy novel pulls you in… The levelness of the author’s writing quality makes this an easy read. I like the format and how I am able to visualize everything that is happening with each chapter and character described. This novel is good, period. If this is your cup of tea, drink from it. You won’t regret the finesse in language structure and MC-Arthur’s enthusiasm. Keep up the good work author…
I recommend this book. The MC definitely has that twists and surprises later as the story develops further. Not too fast paced, and definutely not slow. It's perfect on its own way~
It's very good novel with interesting mc with interesting power so if you like fantasy novel I would suggest that you will give this novel a try
Author sama, just added your book to my library and rate the book although i never read it first i knew the quality of it is high. Trusting at your writing skills😉 have a good day author and continue to inspired us with your works. God bless😊
Lord tree as the fellow before me said pls don't drop this novel as it is interesting P.S : Love the work you do for us in translating my house of horrors.
Lonelytree, please continue this, I'm very intrigued. Please Lord Tree. I need this one, I have to get my fix. My daily dose needs more novel
First time actually writing a review on webnovel but ive read all the chapters thus far and im enjoying it so here we go. I love how much the writing has improved since the beginning. The character skill/battle development is a good pace. The characters emotional development is a bit lacking. There is so much we dont know about our main character which takes away from the significance of the different events happening. Just in recent chapters felt like i saw a glimmer of personality in the main character. Definitely need more of that otherwise its just another book with fight scenes. Overall interesting and good enough to keep reading for now. It has the potential to be amazing though if the Author keeps improving.
It reads like the MC is a kid who keeps on putting coins into a gumball machine only to get exactly the gumball he wants every time except that the gumball magician's story is probably be more believable than this.
I can see what the author wishes to accomplish, but there are far too many inconsistencies and holes in the narrative. I made it through the first 20 chapters or so, and within these the characters make all kinds of illogical and flat out stupid decisions/actions. A middle aged man with years of experience working in the guild let's an arrogant 16 year old walk all over him and drag an experienced unlicensed teenager into a dungeon. The MC who is described as 'top of his class' and 'very smart' is so determined to be an adventure he's willing to commit suicide by monster. A man who's hearing is so good he can hear an invisible floating ghost move in the air, but can't notice an enemy opening a stone door 50 ft from him. A kid with apparently no physical talents or adventuring experience at all comes back from a single dungeon dive and can suddenly duck and dive a D rank warrior while simultaneously trash talking to rile up a crowd without getting hurt at all? The story has little to any logical or narrative consistency unfortunately, as there are many more issues similar to these. It needs to be heavily edited to make it more cohesive.
This Novel is a must read. When you start reading you can't stop yourself. I am hoping for the author to get well and continue the story...
A very enjoyable novel, with plenty of action. The MC has a pretty unique power,(compared to most other novels at least, lets not talk about ES: V), and the interaction between characters is well written. This novel deserves more attention to be honest. 10/10
Read up to chapter 64 The story is well writen, which is actually quite rare, si that's a good point. It's easier for me to point out things that bother me, so this review may seem a bit negative, but really i believe it's an overall good one. So, i think the story lacks kind of a main storyline. While reading, i felt like going through sidequests. Also i think the characters may be better with more background, (more character development). This is somewhat done for the MC but it could bé developped be it for the MC or side characters (really feel like MC go through people without being influenced in any way) Some World development could be nice, but it's not necessary if you focus on character development and adventures. Overall i think the story lacks some kind of progression being story or character development.
This is one of those few fantasy novels where the MC grows slowly and learns after experiencing stuff albeit a bit faster than others.I also like the fact that all characters have proper characters like real people as even the characters grow. None of the characters are stereotypes.They all seem human. I will support this even if it goes premium.
I love the story keep it up author 😀😀😀😀 I love how you write and how the story progress so far hope to read more of your works in the future
I want to see comic... Why webtoon comic so little... Give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Manhwa toooooo... Where are them??? More more more i m exhausted with manhwa manga n comic Mmm
I want to see comic... Why webtoon comic so little... Give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Manhwa toooooo... Where are them??? More more more i m exhaisted
This is the first book i have read with different power. Unlike with some with superstrenght or whatsoever. Worth to read especially for those who wants something new. In addition, i am looking forward for more history of greek gods.
The Story practically reads itself, I haven't noticed any flaws in grammar or spelling! Great work on that part. Story is a good ol' fantasy setting with light gaming elements mixed in, which hits the spot just right for me. Characters don't really stand out negatively, but maybe the Author will work on making them unique and alive a little bit more :) Can recommend!
really good story and its my favrite on the site 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
The story has been very interesting and the main character has developed well. This story captivated me with its medieval background and the different magic of the protagonist.
Read the other comments... I'm bad at explaining myself... But please author continue writing this novel.............................................................
nice book.. adventure seen by an artist is quite fun to read.. hope there is more about music and stuff more.. like his weapon of choice might be common guitar or maybe some kind of tribal flute might be unique..
Pretty good so far hope this keeps going. Like the MC and the slow buildup, there is plenty of world building early on but the plot gets set up slowly but surely. Still waiting to see what is going to happen with the blood mother at the moment, sad I'm gonna catch up with the last few chapters soon..
Spoiler enthüllen Keep it upKeep it upKeep it upKeep it upKeep it upKeep it up Keep it up Keep it upKeep it upKeep it upKeep it upKeep it up keep it up keep it up keep it up Keep it up
I recommend that you read this novel before this goes premium! Quite a positive thinker I am, right Lonelytree? Need more OP moments if you want this to be popular... OP whether in intelligence, luck, strength or what so ever....
Pls dont stop posting. Amazing concept, and thus far perfectly executed. ............................................................................................................................................
I'm loving this story, is one of the best story's of this site, the grammar is good and the world background is really good too, the mc have a nice personality but he is really *****, this I'm don't like I'm hope that he mature quick because is really irritating seeing he hesitate
This fantasy novel pulls you in… The levelness of the author’s writing quality makes this an easy read. I like the format and how I am able to visualize everything that is happening with each chapter and character described. This novel is good, period. If this is your cup of tea, drink from it. You won’t regret the finesse in language structure and MC-Arthur’s enthusiasm. Keep up the good work author…
I recommend this book. The MC definitely has that twists and surprises later as the story develops further. Not too fast paced, and definutely not slow. It's perfect on its own way~
It's very good novel with interesting mc with interesting power so if you like fantasy novel I would suggest that you will give this novel a try
Author sama, just added your book to my library and rate the book although i never read it first i knew the quality of it is high. Trusting at your writing skills😉 have a good day author and continue to inspired us with your works. God bless😊
Lord tree as the fellow before me said pls don't drop this novel as it is interesting P.S : Love the work you do for us in translating my house of horrors.
Lonelytree, please continue this, I'm very intrigued. Please Lord Tree. I need this one, I have to get my fix. My daily dose needs more novel
First time actually writing a review on webnovel but ive read all the chapters thus far and im enjoying it so here we go. I love how much the writing has improved since the beginning. The character skill/battle development is a good pace. The characters emotional development is a bit lacking. There is so much we dont know about our main character which takes away from the significance of the different events happening. Just in recent chapters felt like i saw a glimmer of personality in the main character. Definitely need more of that otherwise its just another book with fight scenes. Overall interesting and good enough to keep reading for now. It has the potential to be amazing though if the Author keeps improving.