Zusammenfassung
This novel has been dropped. It was my first time writing and I made some bad mistakes. Not going to delete it as it is part of my journey as a writer. If you are still interested the synopsis is as follows.
Lucas is an orphan who worked hard to achieve good grades. But before he could realize his dream, he died... However, a God "invites" him to another world where magic is used and gives him a system!
Can Lucas reclaim his former dreams but in another world?
Can Lucas become the strongest despite being different from the rest of the population?
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Join Lucas on his road to becoming the Black God of Lightning!
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionI like it hope he gets more op later on. Do you like traps?” “Yes” “Would you bang a trap?” “Depends” “Are traps, in fact, male?” “Yes” “Then you’re gay” “No I’m not” “You just said you would bang a trap!” “But I’m not gay tho”
Coward Mc, not even willing to fight for his first love is his second live 😑🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular. rated 3.4* Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
A hidden Gem . it's a well written story i like very much . A must read. a must read .a must read. a must read . a must read .a must read dqkspdkàidfs;kdofk;fdo;fgok;fskd
A well writen story. The characters are done extremely well and background scenerio is well thought out................................................
So far so good nothing to complain about the story hopefully he starts practicing lightning related spells soon its my favorite element Keep up the good work hoping for a update soon as possible
So far I absolutely love the story. I have been waiting for a more western light novel and I am hoping that you can give this to me. But so far so good ;).
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I liked the characters of this story. but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events. otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence. I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.
Lovely! I can't get enough this. Although it started slow. The pacing is good. The character's feel real. Especially Lucas. I love how you have portrayed him. It's very real and authentic. Especially the way you write his inner dialogue. As a fan of lightning I'm hoping to see that soon but I'm loving your story. Please don't drop this precious work of art. And to those that are reading this. If you were hoping to gain some type of spoiler. I'm sorry but you going to have to read it yourself. Sorry not sorry. As you will love it😂😁. Youfan out (If you read the novel you will understand what this means)
Spoiler enthüllenI'm on board with a story if their mc has lighting powers. Always been a fan of it. Having an mc that's a different nationality other than Asian is a bonus. Webnovel needs more diversity. If you see the author see this, keep up the good work!
Love the story so far. Been enjoying it. Stable updates and if a day is missed a double is released the next day.I love the concept of the world and how you have used science to explain certain things. It makes it a lot more realistic. The MC seems to have a plan and follows, there is always a logical reason for his each and every action. Smart Mc and smart Author. There are often some grammar issues but it is not off putting. I believe in the potential of this story and I'm just here to voice(write) my appreciation. Please continue to write don't ever lose hope. Ps: I added this book to my library if that wasn't already implied.
Autor Lazareth
This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this. But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw. Please like this so people can see this first.