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this better than most of the fate fanfics on this site, but nowhere near as good as the really good stories on this site. Dropped it after 6 chapter but read it if you want it's pretty good
Soy la exp de mi espada. webnovel es mi cuerpo y exp es mi sangre. He creado más de mil reseñas inútiles. Desconocido hasta la muerte, ni conocido por la vida. He resistido el dolor para crear muchas reseñas. Aún así, esas manos nunca sostendrán algo. Entonces, mientras rezo ... ¡Ilimitado Exp Works !.
eh. Really hard to read, No stability of updates. The writing and grammar isn't all there. Says he's super smart with nothing to show for it. Creating a harem was bleh, really unrealistic.
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The story is good and the comedy is also good please don't drop this and update again fast it's already been 2 months 5 to be exact.
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First impression is that i thought it's gonna be a serious story but it enter's the abnoxious realm i was like nope nope maybe i'm overthinking or just didn't like where the story is going so i'm out.
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This is a good example for a fate fanfiction, even thought it can still be improved in the writing quality but it still really good and easy to read.
Nice Novel pls keep it going. .................................................................................................................................................
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I can only say, give it a read. at the moment I am writing this the novel is still beginning but it will get better. I can feel it. So it has a lot going for it, a fresh take and a really good writer that put care into writing this. 4.8/5
Probably the only fan fic I'll read on here since most other fan fics just become the mc and follow the original plot line, but with the complexity of the type-moom universe maybe it'll actually be an "Original Fan-Fic". Also I haven't read it yet but when I do I'll update my review depending on how good or bad it is.
Umas das melhores novel desse site .quase não consigo esperar pra ver outro capítulo......................... ..........,..............................................................................
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In my opinion it's ok and better than most novels/fan-fics but at the same time I think the character is pretty shallow right now (also low key annoying, but way less annoying than your average character; so props... I guess?) overall its just not my cup of tea but it is still a decent read and a lot better than a lot of other **** on this website.
Lol..Worthy novel to read, Cool way to enter a chapter and sometimes a funny ending..Even the stats sheets feel like a chapter...... ""'''
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this better than most of the fate fanfics on this site, but nowhere near as good as the really good stories on this site. Dropped it after 6 chapter but read it if you want it's pretty good
Soy la exp de mi espada. webnovel es mi cuerpo y exp es mi sangre. He creado más de mil reseñas inútiles. Desconocido hasta la muerte, ni conocido por la vida. He resistido el dolor para crear muchas reseñas. Aún así, esas manos nunca sostendrán algo. Entonces, mientras rezo ... ¡Ilimitado Exp Works !.
eh. Really hard to read, No stability of updates. The writing and grammar isn't all there. Says he's super smart with nothing to show for it. Creating a harem was bleh, really unrealistic.
Funny story..................................................................................................................................
Entertaining read..........................................................................................................................?
Nice story ..........................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllen The story is good and the comedy is also good please don't drop this and update again fast it's already been 2 months 5 to be exact.
Nice story Can't wait for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Spoiler enthüllen First impression is that i thought it's gonna be a serious story but it enter's the abnoxious realm i was like nope nope maybe i'm overthinking or just didn't like where the story is going so i'm out.
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This is a good example for a fate fanfiction, even thought it can still be improved in the writing quality but it still really good and easy to read.
Nice Novel pls keep it going. .................................................................................................................................................
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Spoiler enthüllen I can only say, give it a read. at the moment I am writing this the novel is still beginning but it will get better. I can feel it. So it has a lot going for it, a fresh take and a really good writer that put care into writing this. 4.8/5
Probably the only fan fic I'll read on here since most other fan fics just become the mc and follow the original plot line, but with the complexity of the type-moom universe maybe it'll actually be an "Original Fan-Fic". Also I haven't read it yet but when I do I'll update my review depending on how good or bad it is.
Umas das melhores novel desse site .quase não consigo esperar pra ver outro capítulo......................... ..........,..............................................................................
nice work dude i love..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllen In my opinion it's ok and better than most novels/fan-fics but at the same time I think the character is pretty shallow right now (also low key annoying, but way less annoying than your average character; so props... I guess?) overall its just not my cup of tea but it is still a decent read and a lot better than a lot of other **** on this website.
Lol..Worthy novel to read, Cool way to enter a chapter and sometimes a funny ending..Even the stats sheets feel like a chapter...... ""'''
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