4.39
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionsi es posible me gustaria mas actualizaciones de esta historia, pero no se si siguen actualizando a la historia pero me gustaria para que la continuaran
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
So is this gonna be cancelled ????? Dggrhebfbbngggnbthttntntjtnthrhrhrhrhrhtbrbrbrbrbtbrbrbbrbrbrbrbdbdhdjfjrjfnbbrvrbrbrbdbdvdrbr
My honest review is only 3.8 overall as the author almost never updates this story, as you can tell there are many reviews from a year ago talking about the chapter's this just goes to show the author only really uploads around once every few months.
not here to add anything but you should put the novel in the fanfic section because this is a fanfic bv kjaenrgbaghvnakr bnsrengijeairngonearnbv bkjdsanbnanbo aerjbjkanb
This story is a good thing. My compliments to the writer. I hope that you wrote a long fan fiction. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenThis story is actually pretty great and the grammar is fine unlike other douluo dalu fan fictions on this site. There seems to be a plan and it updates at a decent pace.
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
There is something to be said about this fanfic, and that is the undisputed fact that it reeks of potential. This story is a fresh take on the 'doulou dalu' fanfic in which the protagonist reincarnates as one of the side characters. The author's writing style is easy to follow and the grammar is well above its peers; although it could use a content editor, it's not for the lack of trying: as the story already reads as a final draft, the recommendation is just to add polish to a decent story up to this point.
I YOUR FATHER HAVE A BIG SAUSAGE ...............................................................................wait cause i need 140 Words.........................
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More
Ive got high high hopes for this story. Ive thoroughly enjoyed reading it and the insert is super well done. So awesome job. I cannot wait to read more. Definitely worth it.
I'm awaiting to see how this story will develop. The story is only just beginning, it is still in its earlier stages, can't tell how it will deviate from the original storyline plot, but stI'll kept true to the Douluo Dalu universe.
The story is great!!!! Keep it up author, though I pity the mc because of the miracle chant hehe.... Anyway good start and I'm looking forward for the MC's future development..
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenThanks like the story and "oscar" is funny his Sausage spirit and kitchen knife are a good combination also oscar's joke about his spirit incantation was really funny
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Ich finde die geschichte soweit gut und hoffe da kommt noch mehr. Ich bin sehr gespannt wie die Geschichte sich noch entwickelt wird. Ich mag auch das die Perspektive mal aus "Oscars" Sicht ist.
si es posible me gustaria mas actualizaciones de esta historia, pero no se si siguen actualizando a la historia pero me gustaria para que la continuaran
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
So is this gonna be cancelled ????? Dggrhebfbbngggnbthttntntjtnthrhrhrhrhrhtbrbrbrbrbtbrbrbbrbrbrbrbdbdhdjfjrjfnbbrvrbrbrbdbdvdrbr
My honest review is only 3.8 overall as the author almost never updates this story, as you can tell there are many reviews from a year ago talking about the chapter's this just goes to show the author only really uploads around once every few months.
not here to add anything but you should put the novel in the fanfic section because this is a fanfic bv kjaenrgbaghvnakr bnsrengijeairngonearnbv bkjdsanbnanbo aerjbjkanb
This story is a good thing. My compliments to the writer. I hope that you wrote a long fan fiction. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenThis story is actually pretty great and the grammar is fine unlike other douluo dalu fan fictions on this site. There seems to be a plan and it updates at a decent pace.
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
There is something to be said about this fanfic, and that is the undisputed fact that it reeks of potential. This story is a fresh take on the 'doulou dalu' fanfic in which the protagonist reincarnates as one of the side characters. The author's writing style is easy to follow and the grammar is well above its peers; although it could use a content editor, it's not for the lack of trying: as the story already reads as a final draft, the recommendation is just to add polish to a decent story up to this point.
I YOUR FATHER HAVE A BIG SAUSAGE ...............................................................................wait cause i need 140 Words.........................
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome More More More More More More
Ive got high high hopes for this story. Ive thoroughly enjoyed reading it and the insert is super well done. So awesome job. I cannot wait to read more. Definitely worth it.
I'm awaiting to see how this story will develop. The story is only just beginning, it is still in its earlier stages, can't tell how it will deviate from the original storyline plot, but stI'll kept true to the Douluo Dalu universe.
The story is great!!!! Keep it up author, though I pity the mc because of the miracle chant hehe.... Anyway good start and I'm looking forward for the MC's future development..
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSCAR FTW BECAUSE OF I, YOUR FATHER, AS A BIG SAUSAGE .............................................................................................................................................................
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenThanks like the story and "oscar" is funny his Sausage spirit and kitchen knife are a good combination also oscar's joke about his spirit incantation was really funny
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Ich finde die geschichte soweit gut und hoffe da kommt noch mehr. Ich bin sehr gespannt wie die Geschichte sich noch entwickelt wird. Ich mag auch das die Perspektive mal aus "Oscars" Sicht ist.