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A short story that happened years ago which make her realized that life ain't no rainbows and cupcakes. life is as hard as it can be which leads to her sudden missing to find who, what and where she can find her true self.

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Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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Chainslock

So far, so good. The concept is intriguing and the plot speaks for itself, too. Grammar could use some fixing. Proofread and edit will do, I think. Character design is good as well. All in all, a promising start. Good job.

4yr
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NotUse

The plot is astounding, and the characters are lovable. There are some words that require capitalization, just like the dialogues but it's fine with me. Nice work👍👍👍

4yr
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