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Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World
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A young man, infected with an incurable Virus dies due to circumstances ended up in an unknown world with a System gifted to him.
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Mind my crass language. I'm gonna start with the negatives first. Chapters 11 - 13 can be summed as a confusing chaotic cluster **** of bad writing that should be purged from existence... Now the positives. So far no in your face romance, if you're gonna have romance make it a subplot or a minor subplot, after all the selling point to this fic is the Naruto system and your character and his other identities and hoe people react to them. Your grammar is quite good for this site, the few mistakes in each chapter didn't bother in the slightest which shows how negligible it is, The detailed power ranking is done... well. Your mc is refreshing , he ain't a retardedly honest idiot or a pussy beta male cuck who gets pushed around like in most fan fics on this site, refreshing, he isn't a cold blood killer indiscriminately killing in fact he has an actual personality how rare, What I like the most though is how you actually acted like Itachi when you used him as a disguise, that is extremely rare most people just wanna look like him and act like... well gigolos funnily enough also your use of the henge and the clone jutsu with your multiple identities is giving me a Momon vibe from Overlord which I really like that you're doing that. All in all an... alright story which is high praise considering how most of the stories on this site suck donkey dick that's been smothered in dog diarrhea. My rating would have been a 4 but this story doesn't get updated that often. So yeah keep up the good work.
So far im loving it like friggin mcdonalds... its a great novel. like junk-food. it's soooo good. ---------------------------------- (lol that doesn't imply that its bad at all please refrain from thinking what i said implies its "bad for you") all of the good without any of the bad
Please did quick update .I want more and i want know the end of the godess.More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More 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"And how forges his own Path" I've read this phrase a million times, this phrase also denotes lack of intelligence on the part of the author.
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Fucking cliche .. .. MC is weak as hell but what the Fucking thing that he say he is have Fucking urge to save that Fucking bitch Girl .. .. He is still weak but you make that Fucking cliche scene where Fucking weak retard pussy MC save beauty as he dead if he is not Saving that Fucking bitch
Pretty average story with unique details. I don't like how you dont use quotation marks for anything, but instead brackets. The system of mages and warriors isn't a good reference to use in this world. Just use the standard Naruto system for that. Their a few other things I dislike, however, its more of a personal preference.
A story with a great potential just one plot who isn’t fully explained actually but this story will be one of the best fan fic because the world who the story happen is a original world made by the author and the MC has a fun personality and.... this story is just good to read i spend a great time reading this story so I hope this story will continue.
A fan-Fic that bring a 'Naruto System' to a new level. Enjoyable right off the bat. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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People's taste is bad when they praise this work, although some things are taken from another work, but you made it better than another work, such as removing Chinese phrases such as "I am your father", but on the other hand, you may be one of the worst people to write fight scenes so that I forgot how hard I worked. I sleep while reading and I forgot how many paragraphs I passed without even reading it, and the decisions that MC makes are very stupid, even though I read this. I still don't know whether MC is strong or weak because you exaggerate a lot in his skills and when fighting, I don't know who hit the other in the first place and the basis of the story is already as bad as a goddess I gave him Naruto and his body. I was hoping that he would rise to find himself in another world with Naruto and put it upon himself to reveal the secret of his existence in this world.
Hello my Fellow Daisy's, Author here, Here's a Fan-Fic I'm writing for Fun and practice For my original... Presently trying to schedule how the chapters would be posted because of my Job. Hopefully, everything would be more settled eventually. ---------_----=======!!!!!!!!!==
This is my honest rating for this book 😁 ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 : The beginning!
- 1 Chapter 1: A new Start! 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 : Changes in Character 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Alchrod 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: First Real Battle 1 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: First real Battle 2 and Escape 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 : Uchiha Bloodline and Sharingan 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Primux town... S grade??? 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Wild Boar!!! 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Henge no Jutsu 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Becoming an Adventurer. 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Trial 1(Memory fragment) 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12: Trial 2 (Memory fragment) 5 years ago
- 13 Good news ʕ•ε•ʔ 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 13: Trial 3(Memory fragment Ends) 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter 14: More questions. 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter 15: Getting Quests. 5 years ago
- 17 Chapter 16 : ???? 5 years ago
- 18 Chapter 17: Fear Theory 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 18 : MOJU 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 19: Subjugation... 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 20 : Mirage 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 21: Mirage part 2 5 years ago
- 23 Chapter 22: Return 5 years ago
- 24 Chapter 23: I will come... 5 years ago
- 25 Chapter 24: Kat...Kathryn Bel 5 years ago
- 26 Chapter 25: Dyú Gulch 5 years ago
- 27 Chapter 26: Death 5 years ago
- 28 Chapter 27: Suspicion 5 years ago
- 29 Chapter 28: Undying Cockroach. 5 years ago
- 30 Chapter 29: Lucas 5 years ago
- 31 Chapter 30: Encounter...? 5 years ago
- 32 Chapter 31: Nice surprise! 5 years ago
- 33 Chapter 32 5 years ago
- 34 Chapter 33 5 years ago
- 35 Chapter 34: Chase 5 years ago
- 36 Chapter 35 5 years ago
- 37 Chapter 36 5 years ago
- 38 Chapter 37: Rid Van 5 years ago
- 39 Chapter 38 5 years ago
- 40 Chapter 39 4 years ago
- 41 CHAPTER 40 : Aura 4 years ago
- 42 Chapter 41: Plans 1 4 years ago
Love this novel and I know you probably have other things to do and having to update your other novels too.but if you could please if you have time do a extra chapter today.