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(Written in the Translator) (Many words will be wrong because of that) Since nobody has the courage to give a real grade for this work, let alone give a real criticism to the Author, then I do it myself. This work so far is total rubbish. The reason? Well, to start: - The Protagonist in the first chapters, spoke about his past to the Readers; that he was tortured from 7 to 13 years old (his current age), cannibalized by his own 'family', tortured, forced to eat a lot of things, he felt extreme pain daily and so on. Okay, this is a heavy and 'interesting' story, but ... Author, do you have any shit in your head? Even with all this history, the Protagonist trusts anyone extremely easily, and overcomes it after a simple dialogue of something he does not know not even a month ago: 'I will not betray you', and there, he cries , starts to trust the person, wants to help him as if his life depends on it and others. This point alone is enough for this work (which I am currently calling Garbage) to receive 2 stars, but there is still more to come! - The protagonist is humiliated daily by the people he trusts and does nothing about. He said that he wanted to separate to have a journey alone, and Delia refused (Delia replaced Ash in this World), and after she said 2 more times: 'I want to go with you', the MC accepted and she even called him 'Dog that barks but doesn't bite'. That is, he just offended directly that he has no courage to fight back or anything like that. That alone is enough to make me want Delia to die in the worst possible way. She who is going after him desperately, and is still offending him and paying himself superior. This other criticism makes the work have 1 star (if possible, 0 stars), at the same time. And now the final criticism. - His system is total rubbish! He has a horrible personality, that just like Delia makes fun of the Protagonist, who has a totally broken mind, does things without the Protagonist's permission (Almost everything that happened until the Moment of Bad, it's the System's fault to do things as wrong as possible). The system doesn't even help him to control the strength he gains. This is total waste. And here's the last review, if it were possible to give '-5 stars' as a grade, I would easily give it. I don't understand how there are so many 5 Star reviews here. Here is my criticism, author, I hope you finally realize the crap you made. (I challenge you to delete this review for no reason, I will come back with an even bigger review)
Hsehshshshsgdvshsbsbshshsvsbshsvsvdhshdg and I will be in the seven deadly sins and I will be in the future of our fate zero mc Donald's the seven dwarfs the future of the seven dwarfs the future of the doreamon videos then I can do to help with the future of our fate zero mc Donald I will subscribe to our fate of our fate of the seven deadly weapon and still using a good time for the future of
i love this novel nough said..................................................................................................................................................................
i love this novel the beginning is dark and sets the tone for his character throughout this novel after that though is quite interesting how the relationships form from this though it is a bit cheat but what can i say but plot armor but i love this novel none the less
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One of the best stories I've found so far involving the Pokemon world, I'm loving it so keep up the good work author-sama! Good pokemon related fanfics are really rare so I recommend this one to anyone who is interested as a good read with decent grammar & story development.
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Just because of the hope of Harem and Pokemon :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
This is a really great story. Keep up the great work. For the girl abra. For Adam I would say mankey. Please don't drop this story. Keep up with the writing you never know where it will take you.
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The novel is really good, if the author don't make them too op too fast the story have a good way to last a lot of time, I wish the author good luck and continue to make a really good work.
The Story is really well writted and I really hope that you dont drop this. I wish you good luck and Please more chaps kkkk Well.... Thats all for now kkk 🤔😂
The question is.......................why wouldn't I give myself 5 stars? anyway please rate and give suggestions lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the story so far but I really wanna know how the sao part goes... the Pokemon part was absolutely amazing and I loved every part of it... but it says Pokemon to sao... so I really wanna read the sao part to know the whole story... ya know what I mean???
(Written in the Translator) (Many words will be wrong because of that) Since nobody has the courage to give a real grade for this work, let alone give a real criticism to the Author, then I do it myself. This work so far is total rubbish. The reason? Well, to start: - The Protagonist in the first chapters, spoke about his past to the Readers; that he was tortured from 7 to 13 years old (his current age), cannibalized by his own 'family', tortured, forced to eat a lot of things, he felt extreme pain daily and so on. Okay, this is a heavy and 'interesting' story, but ... Author, do you have any shit in your head? Even with all this history, the Protagonist trusts anyone extremely easily, and overcomes it after a simple dialogue of something he does not know not even a month ago: 'I will not betray you', and there, he cries , starts to trust the person, wants to help him as if his life depends on it and others. This point alone is enough for this work (which I am currently calling Garbage) to receive 2 stars, but there is still more to come! - The protagonist is humiliated daily by the people he trusts and does nothing about. He said that he wanted to separate to have a journey alone, and Delia refused (Delia replaced Ash in this World), and after she said 2 more times: 'I want to go with you', the MC accepted and she even called him 'Dog that barks but doesn't bite'. That is, he just offended directly that he has no courage to fight back or anything like that. That alone is enough to make me want Delia to die in the worst possible way. She who is going after him desperately, and is still offending him and paying himself superior. This other criticism makes the work have 1 star (if possible, 0 stars), at the same time. And now the final criticism. - His system is total rubbish! He has a horrible personality, that just like Delia makes fun of the Protagonist, who has a totally broken mind, does things without the Protagonist's permission (Almost everything that happened until the Moment of Bad, it's the System's fault to do things as wrong as possible). The system doesn't even help him to control the strength he gains. This is total waste. And here's the last review, if it were possible to give '-5 stars' as a grade, I would easily give it. I don't understand how there are so many 5 Star reviews here. Here is my criticism, author, I hope you finally realize the crap you made. (I challenge you to delete this review for no reason, I will come back with an even bigger review)
Hsehshshshsgdvshsbsbshshsvsbshsvsvdhshdg and I will be in the seven deadly sins and I will be in the future of our fate zero mc Donald's the seven dwarfs the future of the seven dwarfs the future of the doreamon videos then I can do to help with the future of our fate zero mc Donald I will subscribe to our fate of our fate of the seven deadly weapon and still using a good time for the future of
i love this novel nough said..................................................................................................................................................................
i love this novel the beginning is dark and sets the tone for his character throughout this novel after that though is quite interesting how the relationships form from this though it is a bit cheat but what can i say but plot armor but i love this novel none the less
Spoiler enthüllen One of the best stories I've found so far involving the Pokemon world, I'm loving it so keep up the good work author-sama! Good pokemon related fanfics are really rare so I recommend this one to anyone who is interested as a good read with decent grammar & story development.
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Just because of the hope of Harem and Pokemon :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
This is a really great story. Keep up the great work. For the girl abra. For Adam I would say mankey. Please don't drop this story. Keep up with the writing you never know where it will take you.
Spoiler enthüllen The novel is really good, if the author don't make them too op too fast the story have a good way to last a lot of time, I wish the author good luck and continue to make a really good work.
The Story is really well writted and I really hope that you dont drop this. I wish you good luck and Please more chaps kkkk Well.... Thats all for now kkk 🤔😂
The question is.......................why wouldn't I give myself 5 stars? anyway please rate and give suggestions lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the story so far but I really wanna know how the sao part goes... the Pokemon part was absolutely amazing and I loved every part of it... but it says Pokemon to sao... so I really wanna read the sao part to know the whole story... ya know what I mean???