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It's a good novel the only issue I have is how long it takes to update......................................................................
Was great, author dropped it, i think he started again but i just don't want to re-read all of the story to refresh myself on the story just for him to drop it again. But other than that, it's a great story, go read it.
la idea en general de la historia es buena, pero el MC es muy molesto, aunque es mi opinión personal pero el MC a pesar de mejorarse no es muy inteligente ni diligente en hacerse fuerte, además es como dije un tonto y prácticamente se deja como lo lleve el rio
Stupidly broken ability to be immortal and get stronger with every death but the mc does not manipulate this at all, he just goes wherever and does whatever. The world building is terrible, it's hard to tell whats going on and despite the fact that supernatural people are apparently very uncommon and most people dont even know they exist, they seem to be everywhere, killing people in public, firing energy beams and all sorts of things yet their existence is unknown. Knows nothing about finance or running a company but suddenly owns 20% of a company worth 500,000,000,000 dollars and doesn't seem to do anything. In fact it even makes him turn down the compensated dating he did prior for 10,000,000 dollars which is just ridiculous on so many levels.
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This is a good story. The main character is not any traditional supernatural creature, he is a new creature with unique powers and abilities. I'm not really sure how his lifespan would work, since if he dies, he would return to life and gain power.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it
this a good 1 if you like something different story line is good characters are inventive world is also quite imagenative main character is the quintasentual antihero
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Awesome book wouldpeople over the age of 20 or 18 and I really love this group because it's descriptive this and I will also love to like find where do I create something like this like this know exactly the same I slept every copy with writing and bubble to get over there.
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I love this novel so much, the characters and the background of this novel are well explain and also the Mc is just funny as hell, and you won't say his op but his is strong,. I totally recommend this novel
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The idea is good and all but it's still garbage. I mean the story is so fucking bad. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great story written from a 1st person point of view which is quite different and nice. The story is fun but the amount of chapter release is low and inconsistent.
This is my first review on this site. And it is to say how SHITTY this is. The MC is crap, the side characters are crap, the world building is crap, the motivations are crap....I could go on. Now the premise was good. It was interesting even with the passable grammar. But then it spiralled out of control. The whole thing is the author's ridiculous wish fulfillment. Whenever I see stories with good premises destroyed like this I get so sad. Honestly tho, this is one of the ****tiest MC's I've ever read about. Oh lord.
where is next chapter.. this story is awsome .. thanks for chap aut.. :D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D:DDDDd:d:D:D:D:d::DD:D:DDDD:D:D:D:D:D:DD:D:D:D::D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:DD:
To be honest its a good story but it could be better so if you put some time and effort no that this could go places. Thats pretty much all tbh ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Really nice novel written different compared to classic ones. The MC is fun and the storyline is quite entertaining. So far, I would recommend it.
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splendid work, i hope to see a periodical release quota ;D i like how you make a story original and not so mainstream. i hope to see the mc to unlock new ability with the future death, like be capable to free or control soul, perhaps..
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The Novel is really great and I am hyped on the next chapter. The characters are realy interesting and all in all is a epic webnovel..........................
I really love the "you get stronger when you die" part, but God this novel is awful. As far as I read I saw that it's going the harem route so... there's gonna be no story progression whatsoever. Well now about characters. MC is bland, extremely boring. He's supposed to have extremely high intelligence (as of now about 200-300x normal human) but he's acting like a stupid child with autism. The other characters don't really have any personality. The vampire girls father doesn't like her dating the mc (he's supposed to be insanely strong and old) so he kills him 1 time and the girl says he's immortal so the father lets him date her? Well the world is crap. The supernatural lived in the city thousands of years and not a single normal human saw anything. Well overall it's just trash
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You might need a proof reader man, other than that your story is really good btw, keep up the good work~~~Panda.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hello, so It's my second review on this site and I just want to say that this author came back once so he'll likely will end this story. Moreover, the story is good, without unrealistic or stupid plot devellopement. Thank you for your Hardwork, and go on !
It's a good novel the only issue I have is how long it takes to update......................................................................
Was great, author dropped it, i think he started again but i just don't want to re-read all of the story to refresh myself on the story just for him to drop it again. But other than that, it's a great story, go read it.
la idea en general de la historia es buena, pero el MC es muy molesto, aunque es mi opinión personal pero el MC a pesar de mejorarse no es muy inteligente ni diligente en hacerse fuerte, además es como dije un tonto y prácticamente se deja como lo lleve el rio
Stupidly broken ability to be immortal and get stronger with every death but the mc does not manipulate this at all, he just goes wherever and does whatever. The world building is terrible, it's hard to tell whats going on and despite the fact that supernatural people are apparently very uncommon and most people dont even know they exist, they seem to be everywhere, killing people in public, firing energy beams and all sorts of things yet their existence is unknown. Knows nothing about finance or running a company but suddenly owns 20% of a company worth 500,000,000,000 dollars and doesn't seem to do anything. In fact it even makes him turn down the compensated dating he did prior for 10,000,000 dollars which is just ridiculous on so many levels.
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This is a good story. The main character is not any traditional supernatural creature, he is a new creature with unique powers and abilities. I'm not really sure how his lifespan would work, since if he dies, he would return to life and gain power.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it
this a good 1 if you like something different story line is good characters are inventive world is also quite imagenative main character is the quintasentual antihero
Spoiler enthüllen Thenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lotThenks i liked this novel a lot
Awesome book wouldpeople over the age of 20 or 18 and I really love this group because it's descriptive this and I will also love to like find where do I create something like this like this know exactly the same I slept every copy with writing and bubble to get over there.
Need more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I love this novel so much, the characters and the background of this novel are well explain and also the Mc is just funny as hell, and you won't say his op but his is strong,. I totally recommend this novel
I realy realy like this novel I realy realy like this novel I realy realy like this novel I realy realy like this novel I realy realy like this novel
The idea is good and all but it's still garbage. I mean the story is so fucking bad. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great story written from a 1st person point of view which is quite different and nice. The story is fun but the amount of chapter release is low and inconsistent.
This is my first review on this site. And it is to say how SHITTY this is. The MC is crap, the side characters are crap, the world building is crap, the motivations are crap....I could go on. Now the premise was good. It was interesting even with the passable grammar. But then it spiralled out of control. The whole thing is the author's ridiculous wish fulfillment. Whenever I see stories with good premises destroyed like this I get so sad. Honestly tho, this is one of the ****tiest MC's I've ever read about. Oh lord.
where is next chapter.. this story is awsome .. thanks for chap aut.. :D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D:DDDDd:d:D:D:D:d::DD:D:DDDD:D:D:D:D:D:DD:D:D:D::D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:DD:
To be honest its a good story but it could be better so if you put some time and effort no that this could go places. Thats pretty much all tbh ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Really nice novel written different compared to classic ones. The MC is fun and the storyline is quite entertaining. So far, I would recommend it.
More more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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splendid work, i hope to see a periodical release quota ;D i like how you make a story original and not so mainstream. i hope to see the mc to unlock new ability with the future death, like be capable to free or control soul, perhaps..
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The Novel is really great and I am hyped on the next chapter. The characters are realy interesting and all in all is a epic webnovel..........................
I really love the "you get stronger when you die" part, but God this novel is awful. As far as I read I saw that it's going the harem route so... there's gonna be no story progression whatsoever. Well now about characters. MC is bland, extremely boring. He's supposed to have extremely high intelligence (as of now about 200-300x normal human) but he's acting like a stupid child with autism. The other characters don't really have any personality. The vampire girls father doesn't like her dating the mc (he's supposed to be insanely strong and old) so he kills him 1 time and the girl says he's immortal so the father lets him date her? Well the world is crap. The supernatural lived in the city thousands of years and not a single normal human saw anything. Well overall it's just trash
Spoiler enthüllen You might need a proof reader man, other than that your story is really good btw, keep up the good work~~~Panda.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hello, so It's my second review on this site and I just want to say that this author came back once so he'll likely will end this story. Moreover, the story is good, without unrealistic or stupid plot devellopement. Thank you for your Hardwork, and go on !